[Report This]Date: March 18 2013 9:31 PM Title: A 'Little' Talk
My god man your right she's just as fucked up as my Angela lol if not more so because her brand of crazy is suprisingly realistic given her age and the situation.
I'm beginning to suspect that you are the main character and that this story is real.
...
very suspicious
Btw your dialogue puts mine to shame. the dialogue tags are good lengthed and not to wordy and she talks like an actual teen which impresses me because I still have friends who are in high school so I know how they talk
Author's Response:
Hah, many others were also like "Dafuq?" when chapter 6 came out. Threw them for a loophole, lol.
As for the story being real, my middle name is Andrew... Which is where I got the name from. And thanks for the dialogue compliment! And don't be too hard on yourself! Your dialogue rocks!
When I wrote my first story, I couldn't write worth shit, so you're doing a spectacular job for a first. But glad you like this story!
Date: January 10 2013 8:35 PM Title: A 'Little' Talk
Hey I just wrote a little from a new story an was wondering if you would like to check it out. If so let me know. Bear in mind that the chapter isn't finished yet.
aaron
Author's Response:
Sure man, just email it over to me. I guess I could help.
[Report This]Date: January 10 2013 4:48 PM Title: A 'Little' Talk
??? that was unexpected. Im assuming she is bipolar or something because her personality changed quick. Im hoping u have next ch Friday morning fingers crossed lol. great ch
Author's Response:
Bipolar lol. No it's what I call The GTS Phenomenon. When a woman has such power over a man, it can change her really quickly.
But don't worry, she's not going to be cruel throughout the story.
Maybe only another chapter or 2. (Out of like 40 or so. I don't know how long this story is going to be.)
[Report This]Date: January 08 2013 7:36 PM Title: A 'Little' Talk
My first thought was: Holy Shit!! Than after I calmed down, an reread this chapter. I am just let wondering. I mean I just can't get over what Angela did to him, granted he shouldn't have left the basket but what Angela did to him is inexcusable an will be hard to be forgiven. How will he not have brain damage, a blood clot or something from the massive head trauma he sustained. Well at any rate, what happens next I am hooked to this story. An can't wait to see how the next chapter progresses.
aaron
Author's Response:
Not MASSIVE head trauma. Just a little. I knew this chapter would surprise well, everyone The aftermath I hope will be enjoyable. I plan on uploading it Thursday, maybe Friday if I have any problems.
Angela just had that moment of complete power and it overtook her mind making her cruel and noncaring for her brother.
[Report This]Date: January 08 2013 5:22 PM Title: A 'Little' Talk
Dude,
Dang! He is in deep shit now! He better learn how to rub feet faster than that!
I'm intriged, with this and even the GODDESS IS SMILING DOWN ON YOU!
Keep it up! *wild-cat*
Author's Response:
Right now, he's incapable of moving. To give him credit, he tried to the best of his abilities but he was just TOO overwhelmed. He tried.
Don't worry. He's fine...
[Report This]Date: January 08 2013 4:54 PM Title: A 'Little' Talk
Loving this story :D
Author's Response:
Thanks man. Its always nice to see reviews like this.
Also, there's going to be a lot more to love.