[Report This]Date: November 27 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
If u do move on to a new story may I request u do one with the main character as a shrunken girl? It just I don't read about it as much and its my favorite type of story. Whatever u do im here to support u. Cant wait for to see wht the hell Adela has gotten them into lol.
Author's Response:
A shrunken girl? Of course. I've seen a number of those stories, but fewer in the first person than third.
Adela's a downright inconvertible hedonist, but she'll do right in the long run.
Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: November 27 2012 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 20
Fuck something else! plz excuse my language. I love these characters, u could write a sequel to this with Adela and Martin. srry this story was good and I feel like I could of got more from Adela and Martin's new interest in each other.
Author's Response:
Possibly I will. Or a prequel with Holly and her husband.
I have to be honest, the more I write the larger and more detailed this world seems to become. (It's fascinating, but also--at least for me--a little frustrating, because I really want to get started on other stories, too. And, at this point, I can really see this going on for twenty more chapters.)
[Report This]Date: November 27 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
You can't just throw this curveball out there and kill the story...I should have you thrown in jail sir!
But then again I wouldn't get to read how one of my favorite stories of the year or possibly all time ends...you win this round good sir.
Write on.
Author's Response:
Not to worry: I'll leave a few interesting loose ends, for any potential sequel -- but I'm -not- going to be one of those authors who ends his/her story two inches off the edge of a cliff. Especially a story like this. :)
Thanks again for the review. Should be a short wait before the epilogue.