Reviews For Adela
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Reviewer: ogilthorpe Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

ah...

a new twist or turn with every chapter

but poor richard....  abandioned in that cold dark lonely theater   lol



Author's Response:

Richard's story, and his history, turned out to be--unexpectedly--kind of comic.

Thanks again for the review. (I also hold out hope that you'll eventually post some of your old, or new, stories on here.)

--scrymgeour

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2012 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 14

The plot thickens with the once terrifying Adela slowly morphing into a lovely young lady of virtue...well at-least a bit nicer.



Author's Response:

I like that: "lovely young lady of virtue." It's totally false, of course, but I almost wish it were true!

Thanks again for reading.

--scrymgeour

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2012 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 14

Wonder were this is leading. Great chapter hope you continue.



Author's Response:

Thanks. :) Will continue with this one tomorrow.

--scrymgeour

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