As an author, I'm always looking to improve my prose, so feel free to give me your thoughts on something. Reviews and comments are always welcomed, and I definitely do look them over and consider them.
My favorite stuff is feet, mature, insertion, maternalistic, and stuff of that nature. It's what I like so its what I'm looking to deliver on. I've never been much into vore, so you probably won't see much of that. Sorry!
It seems I always give my work an X rating, because I hate rating systems and would rather just play it safe.
Max has a way to solve his money troubles. Yet the solution is causing some BIG problems.
Wow, this is awesome! I hope you keep at it, you got me hooked!
Really glad you've been enjoying it. And thanks for all your comments, they really do mean a lot.
This story's awesome. The narration is fantastic. I like that the male lead is really realistic and well done. Just... wow, this is good, and I'm surprised it doesn't have more reviews. Well done!
Two more excellent chapters!
I think one of the main reasons why I really like this story is that Max is a legit cool character. He has morals and you can sympathize with him. Great chapter!
Outstanding chapter, it'll be nice to see Melinda finally getting some growing in too!
More awesome chapters!
This last chapter was particularly good, and this is shaping up to be quite the tale. Excellent job!
The dialogue in this chapter was simply a joy to read- very entertaining! The relationship between the two lead characters is well outlined and the interplay between them is easy to visualize. Well done!
Great ending! Hope you do a continuation!
There's one in the works. The only thing I can tell you is that it opens on a train, and that a lot of questions will be answered.
A young 16 year old shrinks. Join him on his little adventure.
Your prose seems to have improved a bit for this chapter, despite the lack of spell checking, and the spelling wasn't too bad regardless. Well done!
Thanks for the review! Like I said, I didn't have time to spell check today. I might go over the chapter tommorrow but I'll see how I feel. Glad your enjoying the story so far.
Liked this chapter quite a bit, having the mother getting a bit crazy and growing is a nice touch.
I like it so far! I guess my advice would be to expand on things more, to give it a bit more depth. The readers will really appreciate it!
Just a story of a dominant wife and her family. Things change for the male members of the family(you know what I mean). And they live differently!! Have Fun.
BTW, The title might be a bit misleading because the family is not normal at all!!
Hey great start! I like just how spoiled the female characters sound. My suggestion would be to work at fleshing the characters out just a bit more. Adding some more background description would help- really take the time to "set the scene". Other than that, I think this story has a lot of potential, and I look forward to any updates!
A loving but strict mother disciplines her party-hard teenage son using a shrinking apparatus and a pair of high heels.
Cool premise! I like where this is going. I'll keep an eye out for updates.
Ah man, that's humiliating! Great chapter....
thanks, glad you enjoyed it
A well written story, too bad it's not a little longer! IMO, I'd work on Freshman.
thanks for the reviews man. i will at some point revisit these people just for fun, since the story is so short
A teenage boy is preparing for his mother’s birthday when he inexplicably shrinks down to half an inch tall, and must find a way to get her attention before this becomes the last birthday they’ll ever spend together.
Absolutely love the unaware angle you've presented. You've attempted to branch out into a new genre as a writer, and in my opinion have nailed it spot on. Well done, and I hope to see more!
thanks, i'm glad to hear the new venture is sort of working :)
Got some good suspense buillding, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
thanks!
A woman's research into insect pheromones transforms her into a queen over human insects, with unexpected consequences.
Cool concept for a story. Are you planning on adding any more?
Not at the moment, anyway. If I do, I want to have the right idea, and I don't see where this one could go from here. I'm hesitant to mark it "Complete" until I'm sure, though.
Glad you liked it!
An aspiring salesman, eager to make a good impression at the company retreat, takes a wrong turn.
Very pleased to see that you're writing again. The story has a lot of potential so far, and I'm interested in seeing where you take it.