Man, what a jerk I was! I'm really sorry to have posted such an immature diatribe last night. I think I had too much wine, dealt with a bad day, and, like a jerk, took it out on you.  I wish I could remove my two comments on this story, but they stand as testament ON HOW NOT TO GIVE FEEDBACK. You're a great new author and I appreciate your stories.  Please forgive my irrational spewl the other day.

Author's Response:

i do honestly accept your apology, and i understand that you perhaps weren't thinking straight, but i would like to end this whole thing with this: in a different comment, you thanked me for not being offended at your personal preferences that you often mention in comments.  and i in no way am, because it's your right to enjoy your time on this site however you like.  please extend me the same courtesy in the future

Way to end things in style, yet again! I know I sound like a broken record, but you do a marvelous job of setting up scenes of awesome female supremacy in all of your stories. You have a great nack for gts stuff, so please keep the creative juices flowing. That foot crush scene was epic!

Great addition. I think you are making a good decision to maintain the inner monolog/diary of the sister, as it allows us to see how seemingly torn she is between satisfying her taboo enjoyment of her brother's helplessness, with her love of him in general.  I think you've done a good job of showing his growing pathectness, and he seems to be losing his status as a brother to his sister. She seems to be seeing him more and more as a pet, soon-to-be pleasure toy.  I can't wait to see him at her abject mercy of her feet and hope you are able to describe in gruesome detail how much of an ordeal this wll be for him! Keep it up!

Hey man, I find your ecletic take on gts/size change really cool and interesting. I want to see you continue what you want to do, and not become discouraged. I realize that I flipped out once but for different reasons that some of the reviews here. Keep it up and writie what you like. I do enjoy going back and reading all of your foot scenes. I've been around this stuff a long time and have never enjoyed such descritptive scenes. If you ever get around to the Carly stuff again, can you give a glimpse as to what you have planned. And yes, this story is truly unique and should be enjoyed to see what happens next!

I think violence of this nature is approrpriate, but it has to be done just right to shock and arouse the reader. You did that here. I was just commenting that extreme violance shouldn't be the order of the day, or it becomes too routine. You do a good job of developing characters and narrating scenes of normality, as well as interplay between tinies and their "owners." I think everything clicked for this story. That said, I normally like to see close friends/relatives do stuff like this because it does come across as shocking to see a loved one evolve (or devolve, as it were) into a crule tormentress.  So, this was pulled off fantastically, despite my own personaly likes! I once had an idea for a story thas was going to end with a mother or sister finishing their loved one off by scrunching their toes over them until they suffocated and became brain dead, but remained techinically "alive." The descriptions of the aftermath were going to be pretty intense, but I have ideas that I never get around to putting into story form.  But, that's the kind of shocking stuff I like best! Good job, as always!

Author's Response:

ok; thanks for clarifying

Great to see you adding to this third and final chapter. This could end up going a few ways--Carly has to remove her cousin from the scene because she is sympathetic to Jack, the cousin is like Carly and Jack is overdosed by female domination unto death, or the cousin starts out sympathetic but slowly comes around to Carly's point of view. Keep up the new-found momentum!

I'm anxiously awaiting whatever conclusion you have planned. The past several chapters have been great. I'm normally all for the emotional and eventualy physical destruction of the tiny characters in these sorts of stories. However, you've woven such a great, character-driven tale, that a small part of me hopes Jack wins and Carly goes down for the count.  But, that said, I could also see him giving him and accepting Carly as his owner and goddess for the rest of their lives.  I have visions of him crawling towards the space between her big and second toe, and shuddering out an odor-driven and humiliating orgasm that seals the deal, so to speak. Keep it up. I would also like to see you take a more sadistic mother/son foot-oriented story, somtime!

I'll surrise and not mention Carly doing anything twisted to him with her feet this time! I think a fitting scene of humilation might actually consist of Carly using him to get herself off, so to speak. After she's done with the deed, she could hold his drenched, psychologically damaged little body between her thumb and forefinger up to her face, mocking this latest dispaly of utter degredation. All the while, Jack's face is drenched and his small body quivers helplessy from this latest display of carnage.

Good story. I'm sure you'll conclude this is in a good way, regardless of how you do it. That said, my hope is that Eve somehow turns the tables and shrinks Samantha down and utterly ruins her beneath her feet (after horrendous demoralization, of course). I like that Eve was so tall anyway. My humble opinion is that she should be the victor in the end!

Hey, it's great to see you back here! You're a prolific producer of oustanding material. No one can go at the pace you were going indefinitely. And, if anyone deserves to take a break or even reitre, it's you.  That said, I completely agree with this in-between, short story approach.  It's much more manageable and allows you to devle immediately into a scene without having to produce the necessary characterization and scenery, so to speak.  I loved getting a glimpse into Carly's head.  I've left a few stories unfinished and probably will never get around to finishing them.  My honest advice would be to stream-line A Little Blackmail 3 and go with the ending you had orignally planned.  I wish I had done this with a story of mine years ago, called, "Daddy's Fatal Attracton."  If you don't think you'll ever finish the third and final chapter of this brother/sister epic, could you say how you planned to end it?  Take care and do what you feel like doing. We are always happy to see anything you write.