Summary: A man shrinks to a very small size during his sleep. His wife is looking for him.
Categories: Body Exploration, Crush, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 16918 Read Count: 74231
Giantess World
Member Since: February 22 2006
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Membership status: Member
Bio:
An over-the-road trucker who likes giantesses (and giants) and the thought of being stepped on by them!
I'm an amateur writer with no formal education in the discipline, who just enjoys spinning good yarns!
Stories by Canaan
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[Report This] Published: October 29 2006 Updated: December 20 2006
Reviewer: Canaan Signed 
Date: November 15 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: November 15 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This was wonderful! I totally loved the narrative!
I think the use of "first person" vs "second person" though, detracted a lot of feeling from it. In my opinion, the story could have had a greater impact on the reader if both characters were presented in either first or second person; it felt like you was telling the man's story, but the woman was telling her own. That made the goal of your story a little hard to grasp, predict or understand.
Your descriptions were bravo. From the way you described the man's perspective, I was greatly drawn into his world, "seeing" it very vividly. This changed, however, when you were telling the story from the woman's perspective; your descriptiveness took quite a turn from describing to emotions. It made for a somewhat confusing contrast. Moreover, it gave the feeling that two different people had written the story.
All in all, I give this story a solid 8. Your descriptiveness and situational anecdotes were superb. I would have judged "10" had your story conveyed a more even flow--which it failed to do because of the changes in first to second person, and descriptive to emotional.
All in all, a good story, and a superb effort. Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your reading this little story canaan, and even more for sharing your thoughts on it! I totally understand your point and absolutely sympathize with it. I prefer first person narratives myself :-) ! Here however i wanted us to get closer to the \"spectator\" of the events than to the \"actor\". (the thoughts of the shrunken guys are well documented elsewhere :-) )the story is a cinematic that displays itself on the screen, while the girl is more on our side of things, where emotions are. I was trying to play on this \"dislocation\" of the narrative.it may not be a very graceful attempt, i agree :-) hey, i\'m real glad you still enjoyed it, in spite of the obvious flaws! Thanks again for your comment!
Summary: A Korean-American girl is gradually enlarged to mega size. Using her new found power, the mischievous woman is tempted to create all sorts of trouble for those around her...
Categories: Giantess, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14917 Read Count: 26352
Categories: Giantess, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14917 Read Count: 26352
[Report This] Published: November 28 2006 Updated: November 14 2009
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: November 15 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Honey's Sweet Workout
Date: November 15 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Honey's Sweet Workout
Holy cow! Completely marvellous, Berkhart!
Summary: The dreams of two strangers become intertwined, and what begins as a friendship turns into a fight for survival.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Adult 30-39, Crush, Gentle, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7660 Read Count: 21229
Categories: Instant Size Change, Adult 30-39, Crush, Gentle, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7660 Read Count: 21229
[Report This] Published: July 29 2007 Updated: February 02 2008
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: February 02 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Dream
Date: February 02 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Dream
A very nice start! I can just see Rick ending up beneath Naomi's feet, too. ;)
Here's hoping you feel inspired to write more, and soon! :D
Summary: A scene, formed of a day dream I had about a tiny man stuck to the flipflop of his mistress and forced to be at mercy at her feet.
Categories: Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Feet, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1101 Read Count: 24716
Categories: Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Feet, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1101 Read Count: 24716
[Report This] Published: September 23 2007 Updated: September 23 2007
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: June 20 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Quick Fix: The French, The Foot, and The Flipflop
Date: June 20 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Quick Fix: The French, The Foot, and The Flipflop
Very nice little story. :)
Summary: Aaron undergoes unexpected sexual abuse at the feet of two sisters. (crush)
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave, Violent, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9330 Read Count: 50519
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave, Violent, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9330 Read Count: 50519
[Report This] Published: November 04 2007 Updated: November 04 2007
Reviewer: Canaan Signed 
Date: November 10 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response:
Date: November 10 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
O how deliciously evil. >:) I can only suppose they arranged for Aaron to find the potion.
I liked this story a lot, CBW. That little plot twist and revelation at the end was good for one good, devilsh grin. Nicely done. :)
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for the appreciation. It always feels better to know people are getting a bit deeper into your story.
Anyhoo, got more stories comin.
Summary: Dave thinks he's found the perfect summer job, interning for an affable but slightly mad inventor named Eddie. But Eddie's wife Carolyn appropriates her husband's shrinking machine, and Dave soon finds himself at her mercy...
Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133393 Read Count: 353830
Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133393 Read Count: 353830
[Report This] Published: February 06 2008 Updated: February 02 2010
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: December 18 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response: You know, I don't usually do requests because I've pretty much got the story plotted out. But your suggestion was a good one, and really close to what I had in mind, so there you go. Enjoy Chapter 19 ;-)
Date: December 18 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Completely excellent story, dude! You tell such incredible tales, your situations so vibrant, your characters so wonderfully (or in the case of Caroline, dreadfully) alive!
Here's to hanging in suspense and anxiously awaiting the next chapter! Ow! What an Excellent story!
Oh, and if I could make a special request, could somebody get stepped on (accidentally or otherwise) in the garden? Soft soil, cruelly heavy bare foot, intense pinning...? Urnf. The thought of it just does things to a guy! :D
Either way, excellent stuff, Cayce! Greatly looking forward to more!
Author's Response: You know, I don't usually do requests because I've pretty much got the story plotted out. But your suggestion was a good one, and really close to what I had in mind, so there you go. Enjoy Chapter 19 ;-)
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: January 13 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Author's Response: Working on it as fast as I [EXPLETIVE DELETED] can ;-)
Date: January 13 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Holy [explative deleted] [explative deleted]!
Cayce, you are a master!
More please, and soon! I can't take the suspense!
Author's Response: Working on it as fast as I [EXPLETIVE DELETED] can ;-)
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: August 01 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response: When the psychotic episode happens (and believe me, it WILL happen), I want it to seem inevitable and tragic, and not just a plot twist that I pulled out of my ass. It really does help to know where you're going with a story, so you can get there gradually. (And it doesn't get any more gradual than THIS story ;-)
Date: August 01 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
And the plot thickens!
It is awesome how you are so effectively portraying Charoline building to an eventual psychotic episode. I just can't wait for the carnage to finally start!
Great stuff, Cayce! Spellbound and barely able to wait for more!
Author's Response: When the psychotic episode happens (and believe me, it WILL happen), I want it to seem inevitable and tragic, and not just a plot twist that I pulled out of my ass. It really does help to know where you're going with a story, so you can get there gradually. (And it doesn't get any more gradual than THIS story ;-)
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: November 27 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Date: November 27 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
And another epic chapter!
You just keep getting better and better with every chapter, Cayce!
--A fan, who eagerly awaits more!
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: January 06 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Date: January 06 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Day-um! I found myself cheering at the end! Excellent chapter, Cayce! Bravo!
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: February 03 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I left the fate of Dave, Julie, and Carolyn a bit ambiguous because I've got another story in mind that will feature them, as well as a number of characters from HOMUNCULUS. It's tentatively titled WONDERLAND, but that may change by the time I get around to posting it.
Date: February 03 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Holy [EXPLETIVE DELETED] Hell, Cayce!
What a completely kickass ending! And to a completly mindblowing story!
That makes two for you, dude!
Now here's to holding one's breath for a third!
Bravo, Cayce! Just pure-dee bravo!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I left the fate of Dave, Julie, and Carolyn a bit ambiguous because I've got another story in mind that will feature them, as well as a number of characters from HOMUNCULUS. It's tentatively titled WONDERLAND, but that may change by the time I get around to posting it.
Summary:
Categories: Vore, Body Exploration, Instant Size Change, Couples , Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Giant, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6106 Read Count: 50546
Get those negative reviews and/or ratings ready, because here comes another one!
Oh yeah, I guess I should say how this is violent and graphic and probably also very disturbing and evil and whatnot. So if that sort of thing bothers you, or if giant males bother you, then turn back now.
Categories: Vore, Body Exploration, Instant Size Change, Couples , Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Giant, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6106 Read Count: 50546
[Report This] Published: July 25 2008 Updated: August 26 2009
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: September 12 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Day in The Life of a Serial Shrinker
Date: September 12 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Day in The Life of a Serial Shrinker
Aha, this is the story, isn't it? :D
Apologies for not writing a review. When I read, I was a little too involved with you know what to have remaining brain capacity enough to remember to write one, after. ;)
Very nice story, at any rate, for sure. Here is to hoping that you write some reversed-role stories, and soon!
Summary: A young man is subject to witchcraft by his best friend. This is the writing of his experiences as she turns him into a good obedient tiny pet.
Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Insertion, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24415 Read Count: 88368
Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Insertion, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24415 Read Count: 88368
[Report This] Published: January 06 2009 Updated: January 06 2009
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: January 10 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Day 7
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it. :)
Date: January 10 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Day 7
Oh my god. Incredible story!
Here's to hoping that we see lots more from you down the road!
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it. :)
Summary:
Categories: Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7548 Read Count: 58034
Ever been to those tiny, Asian massage parlors? Ever wondered what happens if you don't pay? Find out!
Categories: Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7548 Read Count: 58034
[Report This] Published: March 29 2009 Updated: September 06 2009
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: April 13 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Date: April 13 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Wow. Super nice descriptiveness. It has me hoping that the protagonist will survive her full weight, just so I can see how you would describe it!
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: September 07 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Date: September 07 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
This was quite imaginative!
Looking forward to chapter 5!
Summary: A paranoid girl thinks her boyfriend is cheating on her, and does a 'little' something to keep an eye on him. It doesn't work out quite the way she planned.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples , Feet, Giant, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6937 Read Count: 241378
Categories: Instant Size Change, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples , Feet, Giant, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6937 Read Count: 241378
[Report This] Published: May 05 2009 Updated: September 23 2012
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: August 24 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Date: August 24 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Wow. Quite enjoyable! It is going to be very interesting to see where you go with this.
A very nicely written piece, Survivor!
Summary:
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Giant
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28463 Read Count: 77068
[ON INDEFINITE HIATUS; MAY BE DISCONTINUED] (Title adjusted to prevent confusion with the unrelated giantess series of stories.)
Leon gains the ability to shrink matter, and uses it to go after the thing he despises most: the opposite sex.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Giant
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28463 Read Count: 77068
[Report This] Published: June 05 2009 Updated: March 22 2011
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: June 10 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Bargain
Date: June 10 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Bargain
Holy shit...
"Hate" review?!
Damn, dude, I enjoyed the hell out of this all-too-infrequent reversal in the "GTS" roles! It was nice to see a tiny woman get stepped on by a giant man for a change! :D
Excellent writing style you have, too. A very smooth and easy, and very entertaining read! Here's to hoping to seeing more from you, soon!
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: September 12 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Bargain
Author's Response:
Date: September 12 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Bargain
If I may, Solar Crimson, I have noticed a few things that could greatly improve your story were you to iclude them.
Foot description: not once do you describe what your main character's feet look like. Is he flat-footed (I ask because you did mention once that he is black)? Does he have arches in his feet instead? If so, are they high, mediocre, low? Are his feet callused, or are they smooth? Are they broad, narrow or some where in between? I think knowing these facts about his feet are important to a story like this. Not only would the descriptions add to the story's atmosphere, but your supporting characters are at his feet. So describing what they see would add a lot to your story's depth as well.
The same holds true for describing the rest of your character. I have noted a distinct lack of description of his genatalia. Does he have a huge penis? Or is part of this angst against women because he was rejected perhaps for having a small one?
Your story is really good, so this is by no means a critisism. I just think that you could greatly improve upon it by adding a little more descriptiveness.
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the tips. I'm still new when it comes to M/f, and I'm still a bit bashful about the genitalia descriptions. In the future, I'm sure I'll get better at it.
Also, I think you may have been mistaken. Leon isn't Black; he's White. I'm not sure where you got that idea, though perhaps I should have said so in the story (I only tend to bring up the race of characters if they are non-White, since most people reading these stories already assume the characters to be White if they don't have an exotic/non-English name).
But thanks for the review. :)
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: September 12 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Bargain
Date: September 12 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Bargain
It is very possible, Chozo. :) I read just about any male-involved story that I can find. I love the macro world at large, not at all limiting myself strictly to the giantess side of the interest.
Either way, apologies for the mistake. I shall in future, attempt to be a little more observant.
:-)
Summary:
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Instant Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9459 Read Count: 14914
Mysteriously shrunken to a few inches tall and trapped inside the house, a group of teenage boys are picked off one by one by an evil younger sister.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Instant Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9459 Read Count: 14914
[Report This] Published: August 26 2009 Updated: August 26 2009
Reviewer: Canaan Signed
Date: August 26 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1
Date: August 26 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1
Oh... my... god.
Dude, this has got to be one of the most awesome GTS stories that I have ever had the pleasure to read! Not only is your writing superb, your plot possessive of a lot of momentum, but your characters are alive with believability!
Good lord, dude!
When you do continue, if one request could be made, could you be asked to give a more detailed description of Anne's feet? I mean, your heros are at them, so it sort of makes sense that they would be beholden to even the most minute of details!
Oh! And one of the guys...? An arch support for Anne, please?!
LOL!
Either way, dude, absolutely amazing story! I will for certain, be watching you for more!