Penname: hotoh34 [Contact] Real name: ryan james
Member Since: December 21 2010
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Summary:

A shrunken brother has been the property of his sister Carly for the past 5 years, but finally discovers what might ultimately save him from the cruel enslavement of his giant sibling.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96870 Read Count: 691181
[Report This] Published: August 24 2011 Updated: March 31 2012
Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: The Great Escape

I wanna read more of this story =[

Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed
Date: February 16 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: The Fall of Carly

Oh man. After reading this chapter and seeing Jenny in the mix, i have a feeling i know whats gonna happen and Jack is gonna be in for a big surprise. :O

Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed
Date: March 04 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

Man right when jack finally accepts his life as his sisters toy and is happy with it, sophie comes out of nowhere and shrinks carly. I really hope to see a happy ending in this story. For jack and Carly that is.

Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed
Date: March 30 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

Very good ending. Would like to have seen a happy ending for carly, i would love to see an alternative ending in which sophie never entered the room.



Author's Response:

Honestly, if you really want an "alternate ending" where Carly gets a happy conclusion, you could sort of just pretend like the story ended at Chapter 29 :P thanks for the comment!

Summary:

The sadistic tales of Carly Arton as she abuses and toys with her shrunken brother Jack.

Set between A Little Blackmail 2: Carly's Pet Brother and A Little Blackmail 3: Life of a Toy.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40786 Read Count: 267720
[Report This] Published: December 17 2011 Updated: May 30 2015
Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed
Date: February 19 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams

I like how you had a special valentines chapter to this story. You should try considering other "special events" like maybe jacks bday or carlys bday, thanksgiving, summer break, or maybe like the anniversary of when jack first shrank haha. Great chapter as usual glad to see this series back on its feet :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I've considered events like the ones you listed before. I'm saving the Thanksgiving setting for a different story, but the birthday concept is a strong possibility. And actually, the anniversary of Jack shrinking is a chapter I have planned for down the road...

Summary:

A loving but strict mother disciplines her party-hard teenage son using a shrinking apparatus and a pair of high heels.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Couples , Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8107 Read Count: 121465
[Report This] Published: January 16 2012 Updated: January 19 2012
Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed
Date: January 19 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Not Party Time

Sad to see this story end =[. As for your next story, i would like to see the continuation of Jack and Carlys story =]. 

Summary:

This will be an interactive story in which you, the reader can help influence what happens to Jake next! Simply leave a review with a general idea of what you'd like to see Jake put through next, don't forget to actually review though!

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Follow Jake, a half inch tall teenager as he adjusts to his new home life at his new shrunken size. In a world where a rare few are shrunk by a virus, and in which the shrinkees are typically abandoned or put out of their misery, Jake thought he was "lucky" to be going home with his family from the hospital, however, his three older siblings, a brother and two sisters, and their mother, might not have his best interests at heart as they each deal with their little brother in a variety of ways.


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), BBW, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18753 Read Count: 545183
[Report This] Published: June 25 2013 Updated: August 18 2013
Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed
Date: June 27 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I also agree on brooke being his personal "home" but it could be up to you on how he stays with her. It could either be by insertion (trapped insider her), or inside her socks while she sleeps. I also like the idea of him being scotch taped so he could also be scotch taped to parts of her body while she is asleep like her boobs or her legs or her butt. 

Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed
Date: June 28 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How about Jake wakes up the next morning and is grabbed by brooke and she heads to the bathroom. While in the  bathroom she decides what to do next with him and decides to pleasure herself and masturbate using him as a dildo. He gets covered in his sisters juices and is left watching her shower. He is then brought to her mom for breakfast and she breastfeeds him. He then spends the entire day as her buttplug then returned back to brooke where he is kept in the front of her panties inside her pussy where he will spend the night inside of. 

Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed
Date: July 03 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Skylar should make him worship her ass all day, licking her asshole till the night. She would occasionally fart on him and play with him under her.

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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed
Date: February 07 2014 Title: None

I personally like paige more than laura. But its just a personal opinion hehe. Glad to see him back with her. Im also curious as to what paige did with her other slaves while our protagonist was with laura. This is gonna be an exciting next few chapters :)

Author's Response:

I agree hotoh and I'm glad you think this. Humiliation and being enslaved is just so so interesting to write about. I understand this isn't for everyone but I'm glad it's appreciated! Thanks for the review and for reading my friend

Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed
Date: February 09 2014 Title: None

Dang. I always wanted to know what happened to sunday haha. Guess we got our answer.

As for paige i like the way this character is being set up. Shes very similar to carly from "a little blackmail" which is my all time favorite story. If anyone hasnt read that yet they should. But anyway, im already liking this story very much and its turning out to be one of my favorites on this site as well. I wish they added a bookmarking option on this site so you could bookmark stories that you like. But anyways good job on the story! Cant wait to see what happens to our main character as well as her other slaves :)

Utility by Jay-Bug Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

In a town where men shrink at adulthood, one son finds being useful is not always preferable.

Illustration by Molotav


Categories: Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Incest, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Familial Cruelty, Queensville
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1553 Read Count: 12762
[Report This] Published: March 24 2015 Updated: March 24 2015
Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed
Date: March 29 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What story was it on writing.com?



Author's Response:

Oh, my bad, I thought I'd linked it in the story.  I'll go fix that.  You can see it by clicking here.  

Summary:

The Shrinking Disease is not inherently fatal, but disobeying the relative giants who find you certainly can be.  This is a lesson that the small suburban Cooke Family was forced to learn at the hands of their immense and Immune neighbors.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Warning: This material is intended for mature audiences only.


Categories: Entrapment, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Slave, Unaware, Odor, Mouth Play, Legwear, Instant Size Change, Humiliation, Giant, Couples , Footwear, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89269 Read Count: 547981
[Report This] Published: April 01 2015 Updated: July 12 2016
Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 13 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow great story. One of the best ive read in my opinion. Would love to see a spin off in the future centered around lizzy. During the years leading up to the epilogue and maybe even after. Would love to see the perspective of the daughter and her views growing up as a tiny and being owned by giants as well as see what happened with ned and brittany during this time as well. Again, this was a great series to read throughout. Good job

null by Anonymous Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 25]
[Report This] Published: June 23 2015 Updated: January 14 2017
Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed
Date: June 26 2015 Title: null

How can i find your other stories? They were amazing to read :)

Author's Response:

The hard way:

Google search  "makebelieve" site:giantessworld.net   from there you can look at the cached stories.

The medium way:

I'll be reposting my stories, slowly, over the next couple of weeks. 

The easy way:

Just contact me through giantessworld and i'll give you the Word docs.

 

Summary:

A brother, haunted by the years of shrunken captivity he spent beneath his younger sister’s foot, struggles to confront his demons and, ultimately, the demented girl who stole his humanity.


Categories: Growing Woman, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59576 Read Count: 279982
[Report This] Published: June 24 2015 Updated: May 13 2016
Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed
Date: October 01 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Very Little Blackmail

Very interested to see where this story is headed. When are you gonna post up the next chapter?

Author's Response:

I'm not sure yet. The previous chapter was sort of a turning point so I'm giving it a little break.

Summary:

A shrunken brother, having survived for years as his sister’s secret slave, finally commits to be his giant sibling’s property forever. Now the only thing standing in the way of their wildest fantasies is the limit of their imaginations.


Categories: Breasts, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38574 Read Count: 300734
[Report This] Published: July 02 2016 Updated: July 25 2017
Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed
Date: December 09 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

Would love to see this story continue. Been a big fan of this series and would still like to see more scenarios in this alternate reality. Keep up the good work.