Giantess World :: Ajacks

Summary:

A Three Act Giantess story by Phantelle (phantelle@gmail.com). Princess Summerlyn Katalina of Theraveria strikes a friendship with an intelligent, deep-thinking, farsighted goddess who has grand plans for her. But even the plans of a goddess can go awry, and is Merphomenee as benign as she seems?

I plan to update every Sunday, with each chapter a little more than 6000 words. Now complete! Thank you very much for reading!

Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Footwear, Gentle, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59166 Read Count: 40460

[Report This] Published: April 30 2019 Updated: June 23 2019

Reviewer: Ajacks Signed

Date: May 16 2019 Title: Chapter 3: ACT I: La convocation

Damn. Great story, great chariters and a fantastic and well thoughtout world! What an ending to part three too! I cant wait for the rest! You did a fantastic job of putting doubt into Merohmenee's intentions at the end. Did she kill those men because they tried to hurt her friend or does is she a killer? I love all of this. Cant wait for the other acts!

Author's Response: I'm glad that people appreciate the care in my worldbuilding! Thank you for leaving feedback and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story too!

Reviewer: Ajacks Signed

Date: May 19 2019 Title: Chapter 4: ACT II: Comment j'ai récupéré

Another great chapter full of great descriptions and details. It’s very refreshing compared to other stuff on the site. You do a great job at describing Merphomenee as a truly terrifying entity. A force of nature in her own right, one that a lone person cannot hope to fight. The Goddess of Tragedy...yikes. They way she treats the Princess is very interesting, it keeps the reader guessing. I feel very bad for her. She isn't the first princess that Merphomenee has befriended, and she turned Renias home to dust and broke her spirit. She clearly doesn't see humans as anything special. And I’m interested to see what she meant by “...her nature…” and excited to see where this will go.

Also, some other feedback; maybe a little more space from paragraph to paragraph. I’m invested in this story but at a glance I can see how a new reader might be a little intimidated by walls of text. Anyway, great job, looking forward to the rest.

Author's Response: Vibrant description and setting are very important to me as a writer and well-rounded characters who exist as more than just sex objects are too! Hopefully the remaining chapters will explain any lingering questions which tantalize at the moment. I admit that my writing is often dense, so I will experiment with spacing the passages and see if that helps!

Reviewer: Ajacks Signed

Date: June 17 2019 Title: Chapter 8: ACT III: Chat et souris

Merphomenee makes me sad. She lived her entire existence (thousands of years most likely) alone and finally found a friend. Then she lost her, because of her own actions and she just can't make the changes to get her back. Her treatment of Summerlin in Theraverian was traumatic. Merphomenee made her watch a massacre and in some way be apart of it. That'll mess a person up. Not to mention all of the other stuff like the threats. Merphomenee loves Summerlyn but because of who she is she cant have that reciprocated. On top of that she's clearly done none of the work that would be needed to mend this., and now she's killed friends of Summerlyns, it was going to be hard to walk things back before but now I’m sure it's Impossible. It's just so...sad.

Another great chapter. Throughout this series you've done fantastic work marking Merphomenee really feel like a Goddess. Its not her daunting size that makes her dangerous is also the fact that she can control the weather. She really does feel like a force of nature. They way she haunted Summerlyn was really spooky. The dialogue was great too! I’m really sad story is wrapping up. I’m going to speculate that the next chapter is going to be dark. Merphomenee threatened to destroy Louelle so that's going to be hard to read. I really am hoping that Merphomenee has some kind of a change of heart but if that conversation in her bath after the first rampage we witnessed didn't get through to her i'm pretty sure nothing will. The Goddess of Tragedy indeed.

Author's Response: I knew I wanted to write a tragedy when I started this story, something less uplifting and more somber than my previous writing. Poor Summer and Merphomenee are like a couple whose marriage steadily falls apart, aren't they? ._.

Reviewer: Ajacks Signed

Date: June 23 2019 Title: Chapter 9: ACT III: L'heure fatidique

Yep. That was sad. That was very sad. I expected that but I was hoping I would be wrong. Merphomenee didn't even let Marry live. That was rough. I do kinda wonder what the right answer for Summer was. How can you be friends with someone like Merphomenee? I also really wonder if Merphomenee is satisfied with the outcome. Of course she wanted Summer to her own but she also loved her. I wonder if after she ruined Summer if she went home and cried herself. She's regreted mistreating her in the past. It's a shame this story is over. I always looked forward to reading it every sunday. I really hope to see more work from you. You did a great job of capturing the complexities of the relationship of the two and the outcome of this story always felt like it was in question. I never really knew how it would turn out. Solid work!

Author's Response: I'd like to take this time to thank you for being a devoted reader, Ajacks. I will keep your advice in mind about striking a balance with white space and text, and I'm glad you enjoyed my posts week after week! ^^;;

The Fantasy of Heaven's Pillar by Spooked Rook Rated: R [Reviews - 1]

Summary:

In a world of magical floating cities, an Evoker working as a mere labourer in the mines wishes to one day make a name for himself in the glorious nation of Heaven's Pillar.

Jahrah's wish may come true when he finds the trapped soul of an Arch Evoker inside a piece of Essence stone while carrying out his mining duties one day.

The Arch Evoker promises to teach Jahrah all she knows of the mystic arts in exchange for Jahrah's help in finding a way to return her to her physical body.

Once the Arch Evoker's mind is returned to her body, the Arch Evoker wishes to find the evil Colossal responsible for destroying her arcane university and imprisoning her inside this Essence stone. She wishes to bring justice to the giantess who wronged her.

Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Fantasy, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1605 Read Count: 1440

[Report This] Published: December 08 2020 Updated: December 08 2020

Reviewer: Ajacks Signed
Date: December 08 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Looks Like Leftovers Again.

Very cool and intresting world. Also you did a great job making it known that Essence is incredably important and setting up the mystery of having one of those crystals talk. Looking forward to the rest!