Penname: Ace Corona [Contact] Real name: Sam
Member Since: February 22 2006
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I write teen giantess stories, and I also illustrate them and draw teen giantess comics. I plan on starting my own teen giantess comic book company soon! I had my first giantess story published in the February 2007 issue of Twisted Tongue magazine!
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Reviews by Ace Corona
Summary: A hot coed working on a summer project involving classified technology takes advantage of her friends' trust. Fun, sexy and sometimes deadly games ensue, with more growth, shrinking, and additional aspects of the GTS fantasy to come in future parts.
Categories: Giantess, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12552 Read Count: 33287
[Report This] Published: February 26 2006 Updated: February 26 2006
Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 03 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I read your story, and I'm impressed with your prose. The way you constructed your sentences, the "artistic" aspects of your writing, was brilliant! I can't say I'm into feet, but your story helped me see into that other world of people who do.

The beach by nostromo Rated: G starstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: three men in a boat
Categories: Crush, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5641 Read Count: 9741
[Report This] Published: April 13 2006 Updated: April 13 2006
Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I read this at Giantess Planet. You did a great job! Did they get shrunk, or travel to a world of giants? Either way, it was cool!

Author's Response: Thanks Ace! Im my opinion, they got shrunk during some weird storm. they should have stayed in that boat, poor guys :-)

Property by PoisonPen Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary: Darcy, a harried building manager, makes an amazing discovery which allows her to deal permanently with some problem tenants: four college co-ed party girls. (Part 1 of 2)
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5590 Read Count: 16227
[Report This] Published: August 21 2010 Updated: August 21 2010
Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's good to see you back in action, Poisonpen!

Speck by Black Neptune Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A short story about an unfortunate young man who suddenly finds himself micro-sized inside of the kitchen of a busy housewife, unaware of his presence as she goes about her chores.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Gruesome Shorts (GTS)
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2867 Read Count: 17223
[Report This] Published: December 21 2010 Updated: December 21 2010
Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 24 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Speck

You're a good writer, you didn't use too many adjectives like I have the habit of doing. (I would've called her a titaness or something, but you called her a diligent housewife.) One error I wanted to point out is "towards" with an S at the end is used in British writing, in American writing we use "toward" instead, without the S.

 

I was really curious about how Andrew ended up shrunk. I guess it's not important, but are you ever going to write a story that shows who or what is responsible for Andrew getting shrunk? 



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)
To be honest, in my other stories I did use such adjectives. But a particular topic on Giantess City as shown that people are getting tired of them, so I decided to cut back on my use of them. And thanks for the head-up. I typically spell-check my stories, but some errors still get by.

As of now, I have no plans to write a continuation of this story. It was written as a standalone story based on a fantasy I had, and I left it open so readers can wonder about it themselves. Maybe I'll change my mind in the future, though...

Summary: A prequel to "WHAT PRICE, VICTORY?"...dedicated to REH, ERB, HPL, and A. Merritt. The four brilliant pioneers of swashbuckling science fiction.
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Slow Size Change, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: M.A.C.H.O. Tales, Female Self-Gigantism Through The Ages
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12465 Read Count: 100409
[Report This] Published: May 05 2011 Updated: September 16 2011
Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I like the research you did to find out that it takes eight hours to cross the Panama canal. This is starting out to be an interesting adventure so far!



Author's Response: Well, I know the stories here aren't meant to win the Nobel Prize for Literature. But, I like to provide something more than the usual sexual cliches. Especially, since I can't describe the latter nearly as well as most others can!

Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I like your mention of Greek fire, a fire that was made stronger by water. You're the first person I know of other than me who knew what that was! I liked the giantess dream, keep up the good work!



Author's Response: I will do so. As I originally stated in the title notes (before revising it into a dedication), this was meant as a prequel to ...MORE THAN ONE CAN CHEW. A gst-story from Pete Smith's original Free Forum set in WWII-era Argentina. And, hopefully, I will have an opportunity in the near-future to repost it, here.

Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

At last we get to see a giantess!



Author's Response: Good things come to those reader-reviewers who wait. ;-)

Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Liking it so far, keep up the good work!



Author's Response: Will do! :-)

Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Giant mermaids? Sounds interesting!



Author's Response: Then, you should peruse the Old Archive section, and take a gander at "A Ripple No One Would See."

Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This was an interesting legend, keep up the good work!



Author's Response: Thanks, again. As I told Timescribe, it was just a slight tweaking of a genuine Polynesian origin-of-Death myth.

Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

a279;a279;a279;a279;a279;In the beginning of the story you wrote: "Then information was in his hands in less than hour-and-a-half" I think the word "an" should be inserted between "than" and "hour." This is getting to be a great read, I find the point in history you're writing about to be very interesting, the turn of the 20th century and World War One.



Author's Response: Thanks1 I don't how I missed that, the first time around.

Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You certainly did your research, the scientist who found Troy is someone my Art History teacher mentioned. I also like your conenction bewtween the Eastern and Western hemisphere that you started mentioning in chapter one. I think there very well may have been trading going on in ancient times between the Americas and the eastern hemisphere.

Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Had a chance to read and do a review, I like the connection between the Mexican plant and the ancient Phoenicians. I don't know if this was a mistake or not, but the German archeologist was born in 1923, but the diary starts out in 1903. Was the diary written by a different person?



Author's Response: I had Gustave receive it as a tenth-birthday present. Hence, he was born circa 1893, which would make him thirty at the time of the Phillips Expedition.

Stow Away by Ace Corona Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A man from our time stows away aboard a time vessel, and gets shrunk in the year 5150 by a college hottie!


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3335 Read Count: 6994
[Report This] Published: July 31 2011 Updated: July 31 2011
Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed
Date: August 04 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks for the five-star review! Who are you? I can't see your name.

Summary:

Mike Roman and his teenage sidekick Sally fight crime after he gains the ability to shrink!


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Gentle, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17747 Read Count: 33983
[Report This] Published: August 09 2011 Updated: August 09 2011
Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed
Date: August 10 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Origin Of Micromage!

Thanks for pointing out the ratings mistake, I corrected it.

Julia by Jacksmith Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 450]
Summary:

Five shrunken strangers become playthings in the twisted fantasies of a psychotic teenage girl and must work together if they ever hope to get out of her clutches alive.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134130 Read Count: 1102082
[Report This] Published: November 05 2011 Updated: July 20 2015
Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 12 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

Good story, I liked the vore scene. I think it would be interesting to know how Julia got the shrink-ray. Do they live in a time when that technology is available, or is there some other explanation?



Author's Response:

it's a time where the tech is available, although expensive (which julia can handle b/c her parents are rich). this probably raises the question of "well, wouldn't this kind of thing happen a lot more often, then?" to which i would answer, don't think about it too hard ;)

Summary: Sometimes, size DOES matter. Even in the martial arts!
Categories: Giantess, Entrapment, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4919 Read Count: 45476
[Report This] Published: March 24 2012 Updated: April 13 2012
Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You're off to a good start, but you should give more of a preview of things to come in this little prologue, as far as the shrinking is concerned. I hope if the woman who shrinks him is Asian that she's half Philipino and half Hispanic, chicks like that are hot!



Author's Response: Esta verdad! :-D