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Mike's company have a new resolution to the overcrowding problem in hotels and resorts, and mike tried to capitalize on it while he could
Great intro. Really descriptive and sets up the world and scene marvelously. Good work.
A game show where one person is shrunk and has to complete some tasks while the other is left normal size and has to stop the tiny under their own conditions.
The prize? For the tiny, tons of cash. For the giant? Tons of cash... and a special secret prize.
But it's all just virtual reality, right?
Love the story. Really great concept that is done well and the thoughts of both sam and sammy really make it interesting. Keep up the good work!
Thanks! I was actually deciding originally to just leave it as one of the characters points of view, but I really wanted to try the opposite mentality (the giant/normal person) which I really had never attempted before. Now that I'm doing it, I feel like it's really opened up some avenues in terms of writing design.
I've moved my stories and their continuations over to the Kindle Store. The Website won't allow me to delete the story, so I'm sorry for having to remove it like this.
Roar! I'm back with a review for your story this time. Great start youv'e really set up the scene well and use great dialogue and description. I can't wait to see where the set up goes :P
I can also see how you like your butt crush to should help me ! *ninjas ideas* :P
Quite funny how two of my favourite authors from this site have reviewed my story within 30 minutes of me posting it up. If Cayce gives a review, I'll be complete. ;)
Well if you'd like to PM me, I'd be happy to give you ideas or help you with your storyline in relation to butt crush. It's my favourite aspect of the fantasy. Yet, I'm writing for others here... so if you tell me what it is you like, I'll incorporate it into my story. I'm guessing foot domination, f/f? I intended to get that in here anyways. ;)
Looking forward to hearing your opinions in the chapters to come.
Thornton.
