Penname: Ugly one [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: September 14 2018
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Semi-active, helped OHH on Deviant art with his hieght charts seiries, hope I can start doing work 1/10 as good as he has in the next couple of years.


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Summary:

Two students are stranded on a different planet where everything seems quite earthly, except it is totally small. This is a classic crush and vore story in a dark-fantasy setting with an overarching storyline.

With some 900 pages by now, I think we might as well call this one a book.

All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Insertion, Mouth Play, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 988803 Read Count: 557383
[Report This] Published: May 12 2014 Updated: July 09 2023
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstar
Date: December 07 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

The girls seem to have a LOT of plot armor, I remember a lance being able to piece Julia's shoe and skin.  If that is the case Balistias and crossbows with some arsenic would do quite nicely, they have to have some venomous snakes, frogs and the like, something on this world is toxic to them to place on the tips of thier spears?  Maybe some mercury. 

it seems the story is stomp, kill, poop, stomp, kill, poop loop.

You don't have to have magic weeded out, maybe some hermit or crazy woman was or is a grand mage and maybe they can do something with these poop machines.  How about a spell in which they relive all the killing they have done but it is them that are being tormented, they who are being cut in half, they who are being digested and left as waste.  Wouldn't be long before they couldn't eat another human or harm/kill one with out a damn good reason, espeacilly if every kill is added to their torment.

If earth gets involved again, they should just MASS DRIVE the area where they are and be done with it, the damage is done and no point in taking them back home since PLOT ARMOR would likely make them miles tall and invunerable so that they can continue to stomp, kill, poop...  Also no nukes since again Plot Armor...

thank you for your time.



Author's Response:

Who is Julia? Did you honestly read the story so carelessly that you misread the name of one of the protagonists?

If you call being one hundred meters tall plot armour, then yeah, they got plot armour. As for poison, you have to be aware how those things actually work, which I have looked into for this story because I have been flaoting the idea for the longest time. The more body mass there is, the more poison you need. That's a lot of poison in this case and no chemists around to produce them.

I'm working on adversaries, don't you worry, but part of the moral of this story happens to be that you are not able to deal with big problems when too many players in the game are out to secure their own personal gain first. Thanks for reading, anyway.

Summary:

The positively beautiful sisters of Omega Pi are a selective sorority who possess a very curious secret, that being, they sustain their otherworldly looks by stealing the lives and life energy of unsuspecting young men.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 128 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146327 Read Count: 908801
[Report This] Published: September 21 2016 Updated: September 10 2020
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2019 Title: Chapter 1: First Time Away From Home

The goddess show concern for a mortal that isn't her 'child' 'can't stay in this vessel before I damage it'-paraphrase.  Oliver is her chosen, can't wait to see Sam, Thomasin and Agnes discuss that one!

Agree the good sisters should of trusted their mates and sons more, I do understand that they were going for damage limitation and rescuing those they could.  To tip their hand and all of them could end up like Agnes or worse.  Fear of their other and more numerous sisters likely have the good ones being as careful as they can be.

Think we haven't herd from Harmony in a while, Larrissa isn't a 'suitable' vessel, could Harmony be the lock that key master Oliver needs to 'open' she is a pure hearted woman and cares for the men who are 'taken', she's also just reached adulthood, may even be a virgin, could she be the goddess gate into this world?

Guessing the goddess is better then her 'children' but with the way men and women are linking up, wouldn't put it past her to have all men 3 inches tall with good normal sized women.  Women who wouldn't hurt them for anything but are now the very dominate gender because the goddess has been unleashed.  Think it's likely she's good (concern for life and choosing Oliver), but her view of 'good' may not be the same as 48% of the population, though it is much better then most of her children.

Thanks!



Author's Response:

Hey Ugly one, hope this finds you still engage and following the story. My intent will be to answer all of the outstanding questions!

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18 2019 Title: Chapter 1: First Time Away From Home

Thomasin and Cam,

Man should Cam be so out of his league right there, Thomasin at the youngest is likely old enough to be his great-grandmother, she has powers,youth, experence and nearly devine beauty, yet even before the stones did there thing, she wanted him, gently yes, but wanted to 'educated and restore him, make him realize that all women weren't like her 'sisters''  well I believe she has at least 'started' his healing process as he has hers.

Find it unlikely that a woman with Thomasin's character after realizing the wrong they have done, indugled even with a willing male.  It was likely something she felt that she had to stay away from before she hurt another, yet Cam had likely made her feel like a woman for the first time in decades and with her already stated attraction to him it will be intresting to where it leads.  My bet is at least very good friends with benefits, but considering how they interact could be much more, and with Thomasin a Vesper she and he could play all sorts of size games to keep each other 'enterained'

As with prevoius reviewer and process of elimation it should be Larrissa and Oliver... or the goddess's avatar and oliver... ;-)

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Hopefully the next chapter sheds some light on your prediction, while at the same time inviting a whole new set of query :)

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02 2019 Title: Chapter 1: First Time Away From Home

Hoping Thomasin is gentle and caring as she is protrayed in earlier chapters.  She was considering 'gently' getting Cameron to 'trust in women again (and I believe she ment all aspects of womanhood...).  Sam was able to control (mostly) her baser urges and let Stan take the lead.  Think a Vesper of Thomasin's character would have nearly as much restraint.  The other Omega Pi's already indifferent wouldn't go out of their way to hurt kill or maim but wouldn't be restrained either.  I am hoping Thomasin and Cam enjoy things...

Like the other reviewer's breakdown of Sam, just how different things would of been if Sam had trusted her two men.  If she had prepared Oliver instead of went with the plan, she could of steared him either away from her 'sisters' or toward those that could of helped him.  I guess fear of her 'sisters' had 'forced' her to keep things close to her. 

That her men could accomplish what they did wasn't factored in and that is on Sam, she's going to have to live with the knowledge that with at best an ad hoc plan, her husband and her son saved themselves and others and if she had let them know more they could of either avoided all this or exposed the evil within the sority in such a manner that even with all their power they would of been brought down, or at least into hiding.

Great Story! 



Author's Response:

Thanks Ugly, it is my hope to try and at least flesh out some of the ladies...

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04 2018 Title: Chapter 1: First Time Away From Home

Beautiful Chapter, hope their enjoyment helps stablize things.  Hope Sam and Stanley figure out a way to return everyone to normal.

Hope in an ironic twist the Omega Pi goddess they wish to awake is pissed off at them (partilular the older ones) for draining her 'sons' for personal gain rather then using thier powers to help all her children (or morals to that effect), maybe have Sabina and grandma and the ones who injured or killed shrunk down to three inches and see how long they last.

Again great chapter.



Author's Response:

Hey Ugly one, thanks for giving this story a go. I am.not sure yet whether or not the goddess will make an appearance.  I have toyed with the idea of her being displeased with her clergy. We shall see :)

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15 2019 Title: Chapter 114: Highway Run

Wonder if the Weeeping Stone's engries are influnced by Oliver's dream?  Think it is highly likely that Sam and Stan will have some 'quality' time together, prehaps one or both will see 'God'dess.  I am getting the feeling that the stones and the 'draining' powers of 'elder' sisters weren't intailly intended to do what they do.  That one 'sister' got greedy and warped what was likely something beautiful and useful(maybe channeling a male volenteer into healing, or providing a woman with strength and health while in labor something a goddess would worry about the death of her mothers and their young) into something sick and sadasitic (shrinking males and extending lives while in most cases tormenting the male until death).  I think we will know about the vision soon, espeacilly if Mom and/or Step Dad have one themselves while playing like Caddy and Deacon.  Prehaps there is already a sign Sara having faternal twins a boy and a girl, that Olivers children are telling the sisterhood to live and love their brothers, sons and husbands rather then steal their lives and life force.  Another great chapter, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Maybe... or was it because Oliver was in utero during a harvest? You idea of something pure being perverted in the hands of someone ill intentioned is intriguing for sure!

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 26 2018 Title: Chapter 1: First Time Away From Home

Great Story D!, Wonder what Sam will think of her son's "dream", it being an Oh my Goddess moment there.  Guessing she's gong to be at least intrigued by it, if not openingly horrified.  Keep it up!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks. The next chapter will focus as Sam as she attempts to get to Stan and Oliver. Was Oliver's dream prophetic is the question.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 11 2019 Title: Chapter 1: First Time Away From Home

It seems the goddess is making her moves (Cady & Deacon, Sam & Stan, Larrissa & Oliver, and can we count Tomsion and Cameron).  If it's a weekly update she may have some 'Valentine's Day' plans she's impelmenting.  Doubt it will be good for Edith and the Omega Pi sisters, but that doesn't mean it will be good for Oliver and company, she's a goddess, she has her own set of morality, might be to teach those mortals (even if they are good) to stay out of her line of fire, but my guess is any damage will be overkill spill over, that she wouldn't deliberate harm innocents and as a parting gesture will make things right over time.

Great Story!



Author's Response:

I would have loved to meet the valentine's day update but life sometimes gets in the way. We have yet to see the goddess in person, or even if LArissa is indeed an avatar, but it is going to get fun soon.

Summary:

Four young college girls discover shrunken civilizations and people in their new shared student apartment, each of their very different personalities determines how they treat the tiny inhabitants.  

The decisions the girls make through violence, sadism, passion, caring, and friendship affect millions of tiny lives, but their age, lack of maturity, and naivety might make life difficult and terrifying for everyone involved as they are forced to submit to the lives of the four giantess roommates.  

This story takes place from multiple perspectives and different characters both big and small but will focus on the main cast of women.  

 

 

Disclaimer:

Please be advised that this story will contain violent imagery and descriptions of graphic nature that is considered sensitive to uninitiated audiences.  No characters in this story are based on anyone real, living, or dead and are purely coincidental.  All references to products, items, or applications in this story are trademarks owned by their respective companies.  

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Legwear, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 371271 Read Count: 741418
[Report This] Published: October 16 2016 Updated: December 21 2021
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 31 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning

Ok what is the tech level of the micros?  If they have advanced education or an industrail base they should be able to deal with Jessica and Isabella.  Hell world war two tech would be sufficent.  Nerve agents would be ideal in how they would end those two B(s) are no more difficult to produce then other industrial chemicals (other then some safety, but when millions are dying, well corners can be cut) and could be produced even by nanos in sufficent quanity to easily kill their oppressiers.

Hoping those two get the twitching justice they deserve!

fairly decent story!  Thank you.



Author's Response:

I get that.  But im just writing to entertain and carry on the story and everyone's favorite characters.   Realism kind of goes out the door when it comes to miles tall women.  

It wouldnt be a super fun story if the first interaction is a tiny city using toxic gas on a giant woman.  Admittingly to me it would be pretty funny, but I cant write that hahaha 

Inversion by littless Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 158]
Summary:

Sam's life undergoes some BIG changes when he gets back together with his high school sweetheart.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breast Enlargement, Couples, Gentle, Growing Woman, Incest, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 102 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 518393 Read Count: 691839
[Report This] Published: May 16 2017 Updated: April 29 2019
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: September 20 2018 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75 - And Now for Something Completely Different

Well Sam got his release, if Julie finds out she will be angry, but Sam's been doing things close to this the whole story.  Unless I missed something (will re-read) to be sure it was mutal oral sex and a shower,  So, yeah she will be pissed, but in comparsion to what she did, I think she will calm down and think to herself, Sam had this one coming, though she might yell at him a bit after he takes her back and then doing everything in her power to make sure her little man Sam only releases in her or her little woman.

As far as him taking Julie back, I think Sam may of reached a point where taking her back would be taking the entire house, he missed them all, if one is gone it won't be as it should, so he will take her back as part of the group of Giantess, normals, and Borgford victums,  He will have a full and unified and when Julie grows in understanding happy household.  Heres hoping he takes Julie back.  Thanks interesting read.



Author's Response:

In case you didn't pick up on it, the difference was the writing. I used more humor in this chapter. As far as Sam, you're right, not much difference. And you're right about Sam getting his release. Let's hope he can get his head together now and move on with things.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: September 14 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Rereading Bedtime 73

I think more then ever the main Couple should reconcile and move forward with their relationship.

Why? Julie actually showed restraint, she was a spotted Hynea marking her much weaker male mate, but considering the size and strength difference she HAD to have worked on not hurting him.  She was 5x as strong back in chapter 41, she having atleast stayed the same and him shrinking like 7x to 8x if not more.  For her to pin him and use her clit being as angry as she was, he should of came out of it with at least a broken bone and interal bleeding, consider he and Zoe shared pleasentaries I think we know physcially Julie restrained herself, hell if she thrusted her clit in the wrong postion or with too much vigor Sam's large intestents would be bleeding and his hip shattered (let alone her roughly 100lbs of hips against his two).  If she didn't show restraint Sam would be dead or badly maimed, if she was actively trying to kill him it would of been over in seconds.

Also, in the build it is obivous she is jealous, complains about him being happy after dancing, says something about him needing a hunderd women, says he can't satify her at this size, but she can't satisfy him either, gets offended at JUST HER.  Her new friends are getting her insecruties peaked, and she has a shoot first ask questions latter streak in her.  What she did was wrong, and what she did to dominate Sam during was even worse, but it was to mark her mate, not kill, or even injure.  She felt she had to subjagate him, humilate him, but once it was over she knew she was wrong.

She needs to have some serious anger management counseling, and if she is going to be jealous use that dominance in a good way and tell Sam, this is now one on one, no more making me wait (at least chapters 68-73) what a month before you service me, that and him servicing anyone else at all likely didn't help her state of mind.

She does need help, I don't think this giantess thing is what she wants, she's being 'friends' with folks who don't seem to see a problem in making her miserable, likely cause they are miserable as well.  She doesn't fit in the world, she frightens poeple which after a while must be more annoying then 'cool'.  Her size and mass make her a hazzard to her friends and since she isn't on a battlefield it really doesn't help much besides moving (and that's only on the outside).  I don't doubt there are times she likes being the biggest most dominate being but again that has to ware thin over time.  

I think Sam after he recoups a bit will be fair, he will give her at least a Jill moment and I think Julie will rise to the occeasion(hopefully she will be talking to at least friends and family on how to fix this, if not getting counseling).  They are the main couple and the source of most of whats good in this story I for one want them to reconcile, correct and thrive.

Thanks



Author's Response:

Sam has always been fair. But this time he was greatly hurt. Do you think he'll be able to forgive Julie? Do you think Julie wants it? These questions will be answered soon but it will take a few chapters for us to find out.

It seems every reviewer is pulling for Julie and Sam. I hope I don't disappoint.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Seemed like more a transion chapter, but a good one.  Keep it up every story needs to shift gears from time to time.

Hope you are doing better and again sorry for your loss.



Author's Response:

It was kind of a transition chapter, yes. I have split this chapter up into three (or four) chapters. There will be more things coming up soon. Thanks for comments and well wishes.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07 2019 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81 - Humility

You were right that chapter was painful, Julie is in love with Sam, very much so, but love isn't always good, she for breaking up with him nuked his life (though she likely wanted to pick up the pieces).  It is horrible, but she found the courage to own up to it.  She could of never said a word, she could of brazened it out if Jill told Sam, saying you know how my sister hates me and would say anything against me, no she owned the whole thing.  Even if things get repaired it's going to hurt her for the rest of her life, doing that much damage to the love of her life.

It maybe a while if ever that Sam and Julie have a relationship, that she forced herself and was honest is as good a start as she can have, but she's going to have become more giving and less arrogent, she can do both, from the chapters past and this one the enjoyment factor of her size is deminishing, oh she likes when she played with Sam, but from the undertones it seems like it's an increasing hassle for her.

Hope both start and stay on the winding road back to the other...



Author's Response:

This last chapter (81) was painful, wasn't it? Can anyone endure that much pain? Let's hope this is the last of it and maybe they can repair their relationship, or not.

Thanks again for the comments. I meant to have the next chapter up by now but got busy with work. Oh weil, sometimes life gets in the way of what we really want to do.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: March 09 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Jill and Sam not good, hoping the crew comes together...

Not sure if they gets Julie out of her current state or makes her feel worse.  The if onlys start to kick in especially when she learns Sam is in surgery.  She will listen to every message and think if only I had been there and with her reconiciling with Jill it will only make it that much worse.  Maybe Zoe cuts into her as well (she has been doing that for the last couple of chapters).  Any way you look at it likely Julie will feel even worse then before.  Hopefully she has matured enough to know at some level it this instance isn't her fault it's Billy's and that she has to be there and strong for both Jill and Sam.

 



Author's Response:

All of what you talk about is coming up in the next few chapters. You can bet that Julie is feeling bad. We'll find out who she blames too. Zoe lays into her behind her back as much to protect Sam (in her opinion Julie's not good enough for him) but also maybe because she wants Sam for herself.

Thanks for the comments.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: March 12 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Ouch, poor Jill, poor Julie and poor Sam.  I kinda of expect Jill's death (stories have a certain stucture), but it didn't make it any better knowing.  Hope Sam, Julie and friends can rally and find some healing and happiness...

little warry of the 'vegence' part of Julie coming back, hope it isn't a tell.

Thank you for the chapter!



Author's Response:

The whole part of this is to see if the characters can rally and find peace. Julie herself is wary of her own vengeance, you'll see. Can she and everyone else get past this?

Thanks for commenting. I hope you like what's coming.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Julie's been through it, she should of stopped herself, maybe Zoe or Jill should of said she was going to far.  Unfortantly you usaully reap what you sow.  She let her pain and need for revenge get the better of her.  Now everything she loves has been hurt (or in Jill's case killed) by her actions.

Right now not loving seems like a great idea for Julie.  If she doesn't love she can't be hurt, and she won't hurt those she loves.  The problem with that is she is human and to live she must love someone, something.  Her inablity to say she doesn't love Sam, leads me to beleive she very much does love him!  She may not want to, she may fear she will hurt or cause him to be hurt by her love, but she does.  You can tell by the reaction when she found out that Sam had shrunk agian.  You don't tear up and run out if you don't care, if you don't love.

Sam needs to get over the 'size' thing as he can.  He also has to be calm and give Julie space.  The girl is scared, hurt, and terrorfied of what she has caused.  She wants to get under the coach (her size would be most difficult) and just let the world pass by.  Sam has to help her see there is much more out there for her and that he can aid her even if they are just friends.

If Julie can get over being afriad of what she could do and start being who she could be I think her and Sam could happy.  Though it's got to be hard when the Sin you commited could be traced to all that has gone wrong in your life.  How much worse off would she be if she didn't confess?

Good Chapter.



Author's Response:

Julie still loves Sam and realizes how much hurt she's caused to him and everyone else including herself. She needs find it in her to forgive herself and then to have some emotional healing which may take some time.

She won't say she loves Sam because she's afraid of what it might lead to -- a relationship again -- and she thinks that will lead to more suffering for Sam.

And Sam really does need to get over the size thing. It's just too convenient an excuse for him, isn't it? Still, in the back of his mind is lots of hurt exactly because of the size thing. Will her ever get over that?

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Like the pool scene, and Julie's intrest in the Gym.  Julie I think wants to be at least a good friend to Sam.  Know fear is keeping her in that zone, fear of what she could do to him, what she ahs done to him.  Sam is being a bit to brazen, and Zoe seems to finally get that Sam wants Julie in his life no matter what!

Paintence would be the best friend of Sam's, If he moves at her pace they should get back together, by pushing he's going to spook her, make her think he can't help himself, that he has no regard for his own safety (that and being pushy).  To protect him she will withdraw.

Though it would be intresting to have Julie have a F-it moment.  'Sam isn't worried I will hurt him, we'll see'- as she spends the night, estblish a safe word and she carefully pushes him to show even being careful she's too dangerous to him, only to have all those needs that have been building up in her satified and Sam enjoying it as well.  Of course at the end she will feel guilty as it is likely satifiying an 8 foot amazon would tire and put enough strain on a 3 foot dwarf to have pull a muscle or three.  Julie's conscience and her drives would be in a struggle, as Sam heals I believe her conscience will yield to Sam and her needs...

thanks



Author's Response:

I love pools. And gyms. You're right, fear is keeping Julie away.

Sam is walking a fine line between pushing too hard and not enough. He has patience but I'm not sure Zoe does. Can Sam do it?

I wouldn't call Sam a dwarf. Let's say a homunculus, alright? Do you really think Julie will hurt him again?

Thanks for the comments. Keep 'em coming.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Great chapter!  Like the cautious interaction beteewn Sam and Julie.  As stated it couldn't happen without mom, maybe in time she will be MOM to both Julie and Sam, and maybe grandmom to their chiildern (I know wildly optimistic!).

Hoping they at least stop Sam's shrinking, don't mind the girls growing, and as with most of the recent posts Julie growing a bit more (thought I think with what she's learned she wouldn't like it as it would make her more of a freak).

Just hoping Julie and Sam continue to improve, Sam and the other girls need Julie to actaully 'fill' the house ;-)

Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks. Love the feedback. Sam is most definitely trying to 'fill' the house. I like how you put it.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Loved the Chapter, EVERYONE is getting Married!!!  Hope that it's all going out on a good note!

When you finish this story as sucessful as it has been (roughly a 1/3 of million hits), I hope you take what you learn and continue.

Again Great Chapter, look forward to the last two and more stories from you.  Thank you!



Author's Response:

I've learned a lot during all this and I have several other stories started, one of them is 'finished', but I don't know whether I'll put them up or not. I'm sure one or two will find their way up here soon.

I've started two stories based on the same premise as this one but I'm not sure they're worth posting, i.e. they are based on the fictitionaly Borgford virus. There's a story that I've posted prematurely and I'll wrap that one up first before posting any more.

The next two chapters are coming soon but I'm away for the holidays right now so I'll get to them next week.

Thanks for all of your comments. I love hearing from those who have taken the time to read my stories.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 11 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Intresting chapter, think Sam needs to be Sam and help where he can, hopefully Jill we help and keep him from over doing.  Julie will only hurt more at this point with every act of kindness from Sam.  She has to think she was a monster (and likely still thinks she is), that she can no longer delude herself that it was a 'highschool' prank he deserved means she has a heart and can be saved.  Though I think the last thing she wants right now is to be 'saved' she problely wants the devil to drag her to hell and torture her personally.

Sam will hopefully stay engaged and help her walk back from that, hope there is healing and in time their releationship heals.

Hope you are doing better as well, thank you for the chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the comments. I can see that some of you are invested in this story. I haven't been timely in publishing the chapters but sometimes it's hard, sometimes not. You just can't tell.

Julie never intended it to be a high school prank; she knew exactly what she was doing and wanted to hurt Sam. Payback! Well, i think the price of that pay was way too high and now she knows it too. She thinks pretty bad of herself for hurting Sam but can Sam forgive her and make her feel better so that the two can get back together? That, we shall eventually see.

Here's to healing ... cheers.