Penname: Lord_Magmar [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: August 03 2018
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Summary:

A continuation from Dance with Fire, set in NotSirk MAJOR/Minor universe. I highly recommend reading his story to better understand this New World Order and all. Dance With Fire may be interesting, but I'll try to develop it without too much call back, for new reader's convenience. I'll try to put out a chapter every Saturday.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Couples, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians, New World Order, Violent, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 223239 Read Count: 236250
[Report This] Published: February 03 2018 Updated: August 26 2019
Reviewer: Lord_Magmar Signed
Date: August 26 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Farewells

This story is honestly fantastic, I love the characterisation and narrative and the fetish stuff in equal measure.

 

Although one thing that stuck with me and I think would be cool to see more of is stuff like chapter 4, Shannon dominating people totally is incredibly hot. Maybe a side story exploring her more vicious side?

 

In any case your writing is fantastic and I hope to see more from you.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind review !

  1. Truth been told, I'm always afraid that my fetish part are uninteresting and too few while my normal story parts are too boring for peoples. Glad to hear that you like the two equally.

We may see Shannon utterly domination someone like in Chapter 4 once Alejandro and her will have eased in their Relationship. For starter, she wants to do that to Alejandro ! But other peoples may come in.

It's a teaser but... Remember how Waid's son and girlfriend are like Shannon in size (and the woman is just as well endowed) ? Well, the natural progression after a threesome is a foursome, right ?

A flashback story of Shannon wild years... I hadn't thought about it, yet why not ? But don't hold your breath just yet !

 

 

 

 

Summary:

Unfortunately for her, Jackie has to take the "bus" after work to get home.'

 

*EDIT 07/16/20* Updated Chapters 10 and 14 AKA the ones that needed fixing. As well, some more chapters coming in the next few days. Keep on the look out for those, trust me when I say you don't want to miss them.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Nose, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: This Micro World
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91464 Read Count: 181117
[Report This] Published: July 30 2018 Updated: October 23 2020
Reviewer: Lord_Magmar Signed
Date: August 03 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Taking the 'Bus'

This story is great, really interested in where it's going. Kind of hope Jackie ends up moving into and living inside Marleigh's shoe soles on a permanent basis, maybe with air holes for sweat to steam through.