Penname: shall328 [Contact] Real name: Shawn
Member Since: June 12 2010
Membership status: Member
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Email: shall328@yahoo.com


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Summary:

A look into one quiet weekend of a submissive woman and her dominant boyfriend, the latter of which brings an item to really spice things up.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Giant, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Saturday Series
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6938 Read Count: 26708
[Report This] Published: October 27 2010 Updated: November 02 2010
Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: October 28 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Great story. Its good to see a good M/f story. Hope we get to see a part 2.

Summary:

Batman goes to Arkham City,but he meets a different tale than he did in the original Game.

If you enjoy the story,leave a review and say what you want to happen next,I am going to try and add in as many characters from the game into this story.Thanks if you do.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4579 Read Count: 41643
[Report This] Published: October 15 2012 Updated: August 03 2014
Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: October 19 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I like what I see so far. As far as what's involved in the story feet, butt, fat guys, crushing, and Batman, I like it all. I am very interested to see where you go from here, and I will continue to watch for updates.



Author's Response:

What would you like to see in future chapters? I am  going to try and add almost every character from the game into this story,so expect many chapters and many multiple endings.I have just finished university so I will be writing more chapters and will be delevering them all at one time

Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: August 05 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

That wasn't that long of a wait, lol. I'm interested to see where you take the story next.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: August 03 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Meet Poison Ivy

Very nice, glad to see you back. Can't wait to see more, hopefully not 3 years.😉



Author's Response: Yeah,maybe 2.5 instead 😉

Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: June 07 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hey there. Its been about a year since I've seen anything from you. I really liked the idea of this story and hoped you would still add to it. It gave me an idea to start an interactive called Batman VS Fat Gotham, over on writing.com. I hope you come back to this sometime, I'd like to see what you'd do.



Author's Response: Well...I hope I helped. 💯

Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: September 29 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

You got anything to post? I re-read this again and I'm really interested to see where you take it. Hope you haven't given up on it. Also, I really like the idea of your other newer story.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: June 28 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Good to see you back writing more. I thought you might have quit writing. there for awhile.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: March 23 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

What happened to you man. You haven't updated the story in quite a while. I hope you haven't quit writing it. I look forward to seeing more.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 18 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Meet Catwoman

Thought I posted another review, guess it didn't go through. I really liked the Catwoman chapter, and how you ended it with Two Face getting the upper hand. I'm interested to see where she goes from here and what Two Face has planned for her. Haven't seen anything in awhile, I hope you haven't given up on the story. Good job and I hope to see more.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: January 11 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Still enjoy the story so far. Not everyone will be into it, but you can't please everyone. I'm interested to see where you take it. I'm sure will come up with some good stuff.

Summary:

A mother gets shrunk and is at the mercy of her family.


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3940 Read Count: 59583
[Report This] Published: January 25 2013 Updated: September 10 2013
Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: January 25 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The 2 Inch Tall Mom

Nice story so far. I am the owner of the story on writing.com, The Shrinking Situation. Its cool that you are posting this here for more to see. If you add more stuff that you haven't written on the interactive, maybe you could post there as well. I can't wait to see whhat you come up with.



Author's Response: I posted a lot of chapters for you lol hope you enjoy!

Battleground by SoapySink Rated: X [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

SuperWoman was doing her typical flyover when she stumbles upon a disturbance at the local warehouse.What happens next is totally out of the norm for her


Categories: Breast Enlargement, Insertion, Giant, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 762 Read Count: 10403
[Report This] Published: September 23 2013 Updated: September 23 2013
Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: November 29 2013 Title: Chapter 1: chapter 1

Very interested to see where you take this. Seems like it could be a really good story idea.

Summary:

Holly is a two-inch tall 19 year old attempting her first year at college. Along the way she'll have to learn how to handle her ravenous roommate and the struggles of being surrounded by new people.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, BBW, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41244 Read Count: 352963
[Report This] Published: January 15 2014 Updated: July 20 2019
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just re-read this for the 10th+ time, and I still can't get enough. Both this and the Alternate Tales are great stories. I'm eagerly awaiting your next additions to both, I hope they're coming soon.



Author's Response: Thanks! Due to several things going on in my personal life, I haven't been afforded much time to dedicate to writing in a while. I do have the next chapter like, 90% done, as well as another alternate/side story. I still need to edit it though. I'll release it after this next chapter since it can fit into the canon of the story. As odd as that sounds for a fetish story. Haha

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It's great to see you back, and I don't think you've missed a beat. I really liked the chapter, and as always, you leave me wanting more. Awesome job.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: February 12 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah, I understand completely, your personal life should always take priority. I'll definitely be looking forward to it though, when you do have the chance to finish. Also, there's nothing wrong with making sure something is canon for a fetish story. They're just as good as any other kind of writing, no reason you can't establish canon. 

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What an amazing way to return to this story. This chapter was written great, and I loved the interaction between the two tiny girls. I have been hoping for Diane to get Holly alone again, and I can't wait to see what happens there. I'll be looking forward to the next installment. Also, I just got done reading all your stuff on Eka's, and I really enjoyed all of it as well.

Micro Inc. by Senital2011 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

When shrinking tenchology revolutionizes the world... Lives are forever changed to fufill the desires of others. Follow the tales of Keyla Renolds as she's rented out to random people.


Categories: Unaware, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22702 Read Count: 71494
[Report This] Published: April 30 2014 Updated: January 24 2017
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Consort In Peril

Another great chapter, I really enjoyed it. The current storyline is very interesting, with Keyla being used for filming unaware scenes, definitely a cool idea. You left it on a cliff hanger, so I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Nice to see you adding again, it's been awhile. I was just thinking about this story the other day, and was hoping you hadn't given up on it. Glad to see you didn't. The heat seal was q pretty cool idea, nice to see there's a last chance kind of thing, for emergency situations. I hope this isn't the last we see of Keyla, though she doesn't seem like the type to quit so easily.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Only to strike out

Wow, poor Keyla, what a way to go. I gotta say, I was really pulling for her to survive somehow. That said, you did an outstanding job with this story. The amount of detail you went into, and the character of Keyla were top notch. Thank you for writing such a great story, I look forward to seeing more Micro Inc. in the future.



Author's Response:

I honestly tried think of ways to save her but with the heat seal tek idea I kind of wrote myself into a corner. Trying to keep it realistic she wouldn't have lived.

Thank you for all the feed back! I'm glad you liked the story. I read all the reviews and it makes me happy people have such high praise. The story did a lot better than I thought it would. Thank you again for reading

 

On a side note: Not sure who the next one is going to follow or maybe I'll do a compilation of character's. 

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 09 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Out with the old.

I'm glad to see that you didn't abandon the story. The time between chapters hasn't hurt your writing any, it turned out great, and I really enjoyed it. I hope you're going to continue the story with Keyla and new people, I'd love to see more. I'll also be looking forward to seeing Jasper again some time. Keep up the great work.