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Julia by Jacksmith Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 450]
Summary:

Five shrunken strangers become playthings in the twisted fantasies of a psychotic teenage girl and must work together if they ever hope to get out of her clutches alive.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134130 Read Count: 1101944
[Report This] Published: November 05 2011 Updated: July 20 2015
Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

This is one of the best GTS/shrink stories out there. Only hope it will continue and develope!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I appreciate you reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Dream Girls

Another great chapter! I actually like the trippy dreams, even though I miss her ususal maneating self;)



Author's Response:

her maneating self will be back next chapter, i just thought it would be fun to throw in some abstraction to the mix. thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 30 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51: The Interesting Stuff

Short but sweet! I really like this series and I hope you'll continue it to some form on conclusion.

One wonders, however, what's happening to the rest of the guys? Are they fed? Do they still go "to school" and are they planning their escape?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  I know I haven't referred to the other characters much in a while, but they're in much the same state they were at the beginning of Act III: fed but stripped bare and kept in separate jars at all times.

Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19 2014 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His

So many chapters in and still going strong. I'm impressed. Loved the twist at the end and the tension it led to. Smart writting, good passing and damn... that Julia;)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing, man. Glad you enjoy the writing. And for the love of all that is holy, please make some new DA comics!

Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 07 2015 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66: Sucker for Ultimatums

Anther great chapter! I'm glad to see that they're not out of the woods yet, and that there's more of Julia to come.

 

Keep it up. Always makes me smile when I see that you've published another chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing! I feel the same way about seeing your DA comics posted.

Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 23 2015 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71: J-Day

I really like your writing style. It’s
kind of a no-bullshit approach. You don't underestimate your reader and you
don't elaborate unnecessarily on the environment, but focus on emotion and
experience of the characters involved. You know that we as readers can fill in
the blanks.

Like I said, it’s a unique style and it’s
actually something I might try to emulate in future stories.



Author's Response:

Thanks! This story especially is meant to be in a stream-of-consciousness style, so less about the environment and more the semi-erratic thoughts of the main character. It can be a tougher style to follow but I think readers are up to it.

Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed
Date: June 05 2015 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72: Jack and Julia Went Up the Hill

That a very nice ending, an intelligent twist, with an even more excruciating cliffhanger!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20 2015 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73: A Little Help From My Friends

What a twist! You are really punishing us, leaving us in agonazing ignorance and painful suspense after having read every chapter. Really great, smart and well written. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I am hoping all of the ignorance and suspense will be worth it in the end.

Summary:

A woman relaxes in a bath while enjoying some of her favorite snacks.


Categories: Giantess, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3969 Read Count: 18813
[Report This] Published: November 11 2012 Updated: November 11 2012
Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 13 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lucky for me, I just came across a photo of a mother of a female friend of mine. Never seen her before, but she turned out to be a - let's put it this way; had she been a dinosaur she'd be called Milfosaurus Regina! So she fit the role of the mother perfectly! Nicely done!



Author's Response:

Sounds like an interesting photo! Glad it provided the mental pictures while I furnished the story. Thanks for the review my man.

The Glade by Nom de Plume Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

A young woman named Susanna revisits a place of childhood memories. As she strolls among the rocks and trees that she remembers very well, she notices something very...different. It draws her away from familiarity and into the unknown. What she finds there, in a secret hidden place, will plunge her into the realm of wonder.


Categories: Adventure, Body Exploration, Gentle, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: The Cairnbridge Saga
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27445 Read Count: 69969
[Report This] Published: April 30 2013 Updated: May 17 2013
Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed
Date: May 01 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow! Greate start!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Summary:

Merriwinter High - a lucrative high-end private school for students ages 16 and up. There, a quiet, often ignored girl and her brilliant but abused best friend will get the chance of a lifetime to do something they've been craving forever - get revenge. But will it go too far? Only they can decide...

Contains dark themes and lots of sexual stuff, though that is between characters of age 18 and up.


Categories: Butt, Body Exploration, Couples , Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11856 Read Count: 50012
[Report This] Published: April 30 2013 Updated: September 09 2013
Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed
Date: May 01 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Trial of the Guinea Pig

Yea, I love redheads! This is looking promising!

Summary:

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Categories: Adventure, Feet, Gentle, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4 Read Count: 46951
[Report This] Published: July 25 2013 Updated: February 15 2014
Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 26 2013 Title: Spirited Away

Seriously, this is one of, if not the, best stories I've ever read and I've read hundreds if not thousands of giantess stories. This is so well written, with greate settoing, characters, plots and turns (and language), that I can only thank you, congratulate you and hope that you continue.

 

Oh, and I love readheads! :D

YouPet by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

In a world where shrunken clones called YouPets are sold as servants and toys, a young woman takes the phrase “identity crisis” to the extreme by purchasing a copy of the one person whose desires and fears she knows more deeply than anyone else: herself.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8027 Read Count: 48104
[Report This] Published: March 21 2014 Updated: April 01 2014
Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 24 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans

As always, you deliver. Great scenario, great start and you know I love my readheads. I'm really looking forward to seeing what twists and turns lay ahead.



Author's Response:

I do indeed. Thanks for reviewing man.

Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 01 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: One Little Choice

Very unique and interesting approach, this. I also like the shorter format (even though I enjoy your longer stories as well). A very good story, all-in-all.

The ending was a little bit sudden for me, though. I felt that the vore scene and it's aftermath could have been perhaps half a page longer or so.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, man. I agree with you that I might've made the ending a bit longer; I just didn't want a lengthier vore scene to overshadow the identity crisis theme.

Shoebox by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 163]
Summary:

A young woman keeps her playthings in a shoebox under her bed

 


Categories: Watersports, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67654 Read Count: 537388
[Report This] Published: April 23 2016 Updated: November 25 2016
Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 15 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Precautionary Measures

I'm really enjoying this story. The inital, limited perspective of Josh inside the shoebox builds good tension. The story reminds me, to some extent, of the story "Julia", also found here. Of course, the scenario is a classic one, but both you and the author of "Julia" execute it so well, and it is, after all, all about the execution.


Oh, and this line was gold!

-"...there is no way out of here, well except perhaps through me"



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read this story and share a review. I love the double meaning of the line you referenced. I will check out Julia  I have come across your moniker attached to some phenomenal digital animation and if you are one in the same your work is outstanding. I hope I can keep this story entertaining and engaging enough to keep your interest. :)

Summary:

Darcy and her best friend Andrew are roommates, things couldn't be going better- but when Andrew shrinks down to the size of her thumb, things change. Big decisions have to be made, hidden secrets are brought out to the open, and the two inseparable friends may part ways. Can Andrew and Darcy stay close during the curveballs that life throws their way?

 

FULL DISCLAIMER:

So, this story will start out slow. This was more a writting exercise a bit of 'barbaric yawp' for me, so it starts out sparse on the GTS content in the first half, but I promise that it will pick up in the second. The story is mostly written, so please, I hope you can stick with me and enjoy this story for what it is. Thanks, guys and gals. -vt


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Love and Other Difficult Emotions
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37194 Read Count: 107167
[Report This] Published: June 06 2016 Updated: July 17 2016
Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 12 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

This is a very good start! Nice pacing, not getting caught up in unnecessary detail, but still keeping it interesting. The two main characters seem to have personality, which is great, and I'm looking forward to reading about what darker thoughts lurk beneath the surface of Darcy's conscious mind :)



Author's Response: Well thank you, man! This story I really tried to stretch myself in writing and I'm finding that it's super fun to do. I love writing these two characters, and it's been very fulfilling and satisfying to have Darcy and Andrew interact the way they do. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!