Reviewer: Raso719 Signed
Date: May 21 2024
Title: Chapter 12: A Goddess Unleashed
I hope, as the name suggests, we see Sarah start to shrink people absolutely nanoscopic (or maybe flat out shrink them to nothing). Maybe she experiments with shrink triggers like arousal, anger or the like to make them shrink when she teases them?
Maybe she likewise decides some women also deserve to be similarly tiny? :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback! They will indeed get smaller, and the story is heading towards someone shrinking to microscopic levels. I also like the idea of shrinking someone to nothing and will explore that concept further. The shrinking process in the story revolves around a formula Sarah created, so any type of shrinking must involve ingesting it. However, as a biochemist, Sarah loves to experiment, and she certainly has some devious and creative ways to tease them.
The story centers around a traumatic experience Sarah had, which transformed her into a person with a toxic feminist outlook towards men. Her ability to shrink people stems from a desire to punish men who think they can mistreat women. This drive fuels her actions throughout the story, which is why her targets are exclusively men.
