I like the idea of the totally obedient cult, and I love the transition from disbelief to true believers. This is getting more interesting, it's such an intriguing idea. Very well written.

Holy boots, this was a lot of fun. I love how into him she is, every conversational twist is an opportunity for her to hint or suggest or lure him. He's got admirable self-restraint, to resist a beautiful and available giantess like this... but he's on a mission. I admire that about him, he's got a job to do and a puzzle to solve, and not even a horny giantess can sway him. He's got her best interests in mind, and even if she's weak, he can lay down the law (even at his size). We get great insight to both of their characters and the issues they're restling with: he's got a mile-wide protective streak, and she's got the dark urge to consume him. Very interesting conflict for them to deal with.

This is a really fun couple and a fun story. You do the same thing I do, hinting at past adventures and situations in mid-stride. It's just that when I get hooked on an idea, all these other ideas start popping in mind and I've got to share them too. Glad to see I'm not the only one prey to this technique.

If these are recurring characters, I look forward to seeing their personal adventures and explorations. This was fantastically fun!

This was fantastic, very thoughtful and evocative. I like how it gets to the core of the action, the conditioning countering the last wisps of free will and self-awareness.

This is great. I really like the idea of magic's influence on character, that's a great twist. Christoph and Isabel's relationship grows with well-timed pace, slowly but organically. They're such fleshed-out characters that work so well together. Excellent storytelling.

Fantastic work here. The dialogue quickly forms and colors the characters, very effectively. I appreciate the playful tone all the way throughout, a refreshing change-up from some of the more punishing work to be found.