Reviewer: 8cm50 Signed
Date: November 11 2011
Title: Chapter 7: A Good Man is Hard to Find
Aw... You're dead ? It's kind of sad :)
but i'm sorry, I can't understand what Martha is doing here in the end... She was writing the whole story ?
Whatever, this bet idea was a great one, and I'd like to read the afterglow, when Meghyn wins, when Audrey knows, her reaction...
For the whole story, every chapter was enjoyable for me and I like the way you use in human nature : like butterflies burning their wings in the light of a flame, men with vore or shrinking fetishes can't help coming at forbiden dish and let them shrink... When they change their minds, it's always to late: it's good to know it when it's happening, because IT is the central event of the story ! The eating is just an enjoyable consequence. The hang on is in "who" will swallow the guy ...
I Think you and Girlfood have made a kind of classical ! No doubt it deserves the name of "tales".
Thank you very much !
Author's Response: In the world where the story takes place I'm having it where I only wrote my unaware stories and the stories that I've written for forbidden dish were written by martha. at the end of the story she is supposed to be watching what is happening and recording it as a story. She stole the journals as well.
I am glad you enjoyed it. I had fun writing it.