Perfect marriage is disrupted when the husband is tragically shrunk to near microscopic size. Can such a relationship survive with such a drastic difference in scale? Read on to see.
A fantastic story! I like the genuineness of it all. Some shrinking stories have too much fantasy to them, in that they jump right in to action without building up the characters or the emotions in a more real way. This was a great story, the build up was very good and the tragidy at the end was poignant. My thanks to Minuss for a very enjoyable read, and I hope to see more in this vein of storytelling (husband/wife -low- fantasy).
OMG! I haven't enjoyed a story like that in ages!! Fantastic writing!!! It holds everything I love in a giantess story, from size to realistic feelings and situations. You kept be glued throughout!!
Bravo and I WISH and HOPE you will continue doing more of this work!! (maybe even a sequel with these two characters???) ;)
Khaladhen
Once again, you have proven your mastery! I thoroughly enjoy your work and very much look forward to your continued stories.
Thank you so much for writing this!!! :D
Kate and Cam experience the newest sensation in budget vacation travel.
Oh lordy! Please don't let Chapter 11 be your final chapter!! I am REALLY liking your story and the way it is unfolding. Got me hook, line and sinker!!! :)
MORE MORE MORE!!!
As the world slowly starts to change, we take a look at a slowly evolving world through a single family's perspective. (Step Family. No actual incest.)
I was a little confused too. You were doing well right up to when it was made clear, after everything, that Nicole actually loved her brother and was family oriented. That seemed to settle her struggle with him. It then gets confusing since you introduced her second guessing herself. I think the struggles she has internally should have been worked out prior to making her coming to terms with her family loyalty and brotherly love. But I do like that you are working out the internal dialogue and conflict that the characters are facing. I think thats important, and definitely adds realism. 3 chapters left? Darn! :) Kevin has finally shrunk, would almost be a shame to not explore that for more than 3 chapters, since you've created a world, at home and abroad, that is also struggling with the shrinking factor. Lots to explore! But thats just my wishful thinking. Thank you for all you've written and look forward to more of your work!
Unlike most of my stories, I will be implementing two things I don’t normally do; Micro and Unaware.
The main idea of this story is going to be where a married couple are spending time together at home. The wife is going to leave the room for awhile and accidentally shrink her husband to about ¼ of an inch in height. After this happens, our little hero is going to need to get his wife’s attention in order to be restored to normal height.
Really starting to get interesting, L2K7! I liked the backstory in part 1, and having read part 2 I'm very much looking forward to seeing where you take this. I, too, enjoy the themes you are exploring with couples, and thank you for contributing this story! :)
A man's size turns a simple piece of furniture into an inescapable prison.
Great start! I enjoy your writing and look forward to seeing this continue! :)
Thank you! That really means a lot to me.
Will Hansen meets an unusual young girl, and stumbles into a strange new world when he offers to house-sit for a friend.
Have really been enjoying your story!
Looking forward to its continuation, as well as any future stories you have in mind! :)
Nature always wins. We resisted the Plague, Ebola and many others because we stood united. However what happens when a virus divides us? When it makes us inferior in the eyes of others? This is the story of a man in a world that shrinks and how he deals to survive when his equals can crush him under their soles.
Really enjoying your realistic exploration of our favourite topic! :)
Looking forward to the story continuing to grow and become more intimate with the mani characters.
Thanks very much for the support. It's nice to hear it's realisitc considering the topic. The story continues to grow, I hope you continue to like it.
This will be a slow shrinking story about an older brother that worked at a very respectable vacination laboratory. However not everything is as it seems, after a lab accident it is reveald that the Corperation was using sub par safety measures to keep contamination to a minimal.
David is exposed to an unknown virus due to the fact that the building's air filtration system was nonexistant.
This story will follow things from his point of view as he slowly watches the world grow around him.
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Hey! Come check out our discord server!
https://discord.gg/2H8BRd8rmN
I always love more realistic takes on the shrinking fantasy, developing the kinds of relationships and reactions that you'd expect, while still playing within the fantasy that we all love so very much about shrinking! So thank you for starting and continuing this story. I personally can't wait until he gets down below 1' (ideally 1"), but its your story and you'll get there (or maybe you won't, I don't know!) eventually. I'll keep reading and waiting for new installments in the meantime.
Thank you! :)
Ryan thinks he's safe from Shrinkism but finds out that he is in for a big surprise.
Loving this story! Looking forward to many more chapters!!! :)
Thank you!
Really loving your story here KickYou!
The conflicts feel natural, and the scenes keep me guessing. :)
Ryan is a bit annoying in that he has a neverending well of self-doubt but drama comes from the faults in a character, so I'm hooked! :)
Thank you for this!
Khal
Other people's POV in the Shrinkism universe
Wow, that wasn't heartbreaking at all! *cry!*
