Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: February 22 2018
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I know im a few years late but I really liked this story. Not many stories that end with a happy ending. Im a sucker for stories where the characters love each other instead of the usual dominat/hate stories. Really enjoyed that the shrunken girls where forgiven and fell in love with the their new owners/lovers. Didn't see that ending coming better than expected.
Author's Response: Never too late! Thank you!
I've had other reviewers complain about AWBB being "nothing but sex." This site is about a sexual fetish! Why wouldn't there be sex?
If men suddenly became smaller than women, I could envision a few acts of hateful vengeance. But I can't imagine they would all turn into monsters. I think most would try to find a way to rebuild the world. They would want relationships with their tiny men. They would want to love and enjoy sex with their tiny men, especially after the Goddess upped their sex drives.
I think that if all the men got small, it would give the women a chance for a world with sexual fulfillment without fear. A fearless woman would feel very sexy.
I didn't see that ending coming either. I was ready to wrap up the story when the State gymnasts got shrunk and lost their identities. But it seemed too cruel. Looking back, I think it gave the University gymnasts... the ones whose boyfriends were stolen... the chance to "grow". They started out right after the Rebalancing hit with jealousy over their lost boyfriends, trying to get them back. In effect they were worried about scarcity of men and lovers. Then when they succeeded, and won their rivals as sex slaves, and saw their defeated enemies as human beings, they began to see their sexuality not as a thing of scarcity but a situation of abundance. Their bodies sprawled, large enough to take a tiny man and a tiny woman as lovers, and with enough passion left over to take a normal sized lover girl as well. They became generous, sharing their sex with their tiny boyfriends and their tiny rivals.
It is so fun so see these tiny girls, dead to the world, come back to live because the bodily fluids of the women who possessed them made them fall in love in spite of themselves.
Another theme I enjoyed writing about was tiny partners making love where none existed. Women have been forced to try to do this throughout history. The heroine of Arabian Nights had to tell her husband a story every night to keep him from killing her. She was forced into her situation but made something loving out of it, against all odds. I especially developed this theme with the man who was taken by Amber's mother. He didn't want a woman several years older to become his captor and his life, but fellow tiny Jason showed him how to make the most of it, and led him to fall in love with the woman who took him out of the big world.
Please take time to enjoy the other stories in the Rebalancing the Sexe series. I think you'll find a lot of love and a lot of happy endings!