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Member Since: September 02 2017
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Summary:

Born into a life of chaos, Nick and his friends desperately face the overwhelming odds to end the nightmare that has befallen them all.

(This is the first story inside the kempverse, a universe that I created in which most my stories take place in)

*Disclaimer*

Story contains fictional minors that are as young as 13 years old. Story contains explicit content that may be disturbing to some readers. Any and all names used do NOT relate to anyone in real life, and any names that you recognize is by pure coincidence. If you feel sickly at all during your read, please stop reading and find the nearest barf bag. Enjoy the story!

 

WARNING: The following story contains, or will eventually contain the following.

-Hard/Extreme Vore

-Actions or events that can be mentally disturbing

-Sexual references, inuendos, and actions

-Scat

If any of the above you find disturbing, you may want to either skip over certain chapters, or not read the story at all. Any tags you see related to the story that you have not yet seen take place, WILL be added at one point or another. Thank you. 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, BBW, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Sci-Fi, Slave, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 296432 Read Count: 265862
[Report This] Published: June 12 2016 Updated: December 25 2017
Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 24 2017 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 - Colossal Chloe (Part 2)

Damn, this final run of chapters is getting depressing. I wanted Nick in Chloe's mouth at one point, but not like this. Kudos to this story for making every character death important and not just killing characters for the sake of it though.



Author's Response:

I try to make each characters death meaningful one way or another... even the less important sub characters. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed
Date: December 25 2017 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62 - Retribution

What he plans to do for Kaya? I imagine a blood transfusion that allows Kaya to become normal sized, while Nick reverts to being an inch tall. I don't know what Regina means, but I do know this site is all about women being much much bigger than men. 



Author's Response:

Regina is Kristin Karn's mother. She 'died' when she sacrificed herself to save Nick from Don and the council, but as it has been revealed, Regina actually survived. Regina is a person :)

Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed
Date: December 25 2017 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62 - Retribution

"Regina tilted her head, a grin crossing her face, “what you plan to do… for Kaya… it’s an honorable thing.”

Umm right here, did you mean to write Kristin? I'm asking because I don't understand why you made that response to my last review. I know who Regina is.



Author's Response:

I meant Kaya. It will make more sense in the next chapter... which I just uploaded ;) it'll make since once you read the epilogue :) 

Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 25 2017 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63 - Epilogue

From a fetish standpoint, it's hot that Nick is back down to an inch tall. He can't really do anything with him and a giantess if he remains at a normal height. The idea of Nick interacting with college giantesses leaves open a lot of fun possibilities, and I hope you have some sexy ideas for Nick's future.

From a plot standpoint, I have issues with this ending. I think Nick could have done a better job at keeping Kaya safe as a normal-sized man. Not only that, Kaya was shouting at him to not drink it and he didn't listen. I don't want to tell you how to write a story, but it's kinda unsatisfying to see Nick go through all that trouble to become normal-sized and then throw it away without at least talking to Kaya about it first.

Overall, this was the best giantess story I've read in a while. The only reason I'm not giving it the highest rating in my reviews is that it takes a while to get going. It's awesome to see you gradually improving as a writer as the story goes on.



Author's Response:

I completely agree! The story took to long to really get interesting... and as a result I'm sure there are many readers I've lost before they even reached chapter 20 :(

I'm sort of mixed on the ending myself... but then I remember that Nick has Peyton (who is in love with him) and his family that could still be there for him at an inch tall, and I try to portray his decision as more of an act to show Kaya that she won't be alone at an inch tall. Whether it's a foolish decision, a selfish choice, or whatever negative things could surmise... it was his alone to make. It was definitely tough to write it... but at the same time, he's the main character, and the main character is suppose to be shrunk lol xD (unless the main character is the giantess I suppose)

Thanks so much for reading! Your reviews have been superb and helpful! Hope to see you in my next story :)

(and fyi on the rating, while I appreciate the five start reviews, I personally would have rated this story a 3.5 or a 4 at best... so your review is greatly appreciated!)

Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 20 2017 Title: Chapter 1: *Volume I* - Chapter 1 - Orientation

This is one of the better stories on the site. I remember back during the first few chapters when it was simply about a high school bully, I stopped reading. I'm glad I gave it another shot because the story has become a lot more unique than I was expecting.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you decided to give it another shot! The story has certainly evolved since the first volume, and the stakes have certainly risen! Thanks for your feedback :)

Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed
Date: December 22 2017 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57 - United As One

My ideal bonus chapter would involve little Nick getting caught between two girls. Maybe he was between their boobs while they embraced, or maybe he's in their mouths as the girls kissed. Something like that between maybe Bridgette and Abigail would be really hot.

Just thinking about it makes me really hope this story gets the 250 reviews you want.



Author's Response:

I really love that idea! 

Kimberly by Happy Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary:

A happily married man catches the shrinking disease, and falls for the feminine wiles of his daughter's best friend.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Gentle, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93154 Read Count: 262195
[Report This] Published: August 16 2016 Updated: November 09 2016
Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation

This is one of my favorite stories on the site. I love seeing Andy and Kimberly working through their relationship. The best giantess stories are sexy and have a compelling plot, and this story delivers on both counts. 

Summary:

Guy, 19, has the shrinking disease, and his sexual thoughts shrink him.  His 16-year-old sister offers to seduce him to strengthen his resistance to sexual thoughts.  But she has her own plans for fun after he shrinks.

Size reduction as small as 1 inch.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Incest, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38080 Read Count: 181766
[Report This] Published: January 18 2017 Updated: February 14 2018
Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 02 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Ep 5 Ch 3

“Imagine the possibilities.” Then leave this story on a cliffhanger while you take a break. Nice timing. The story was pretty hot, and I liked the chapter endings. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed
Date: February 08 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Ep 6 Ch 2

Glad to see this story continued. This chapter is looking good so far. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot!

Summary:

A boy that was born small is having desires. How will his family and babysitter deal with this?

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23059 Read Count: 27270
[Report This] Published: May 19 2017 Updated: September 18 2017
Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 19 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I like gentle mouth play, so this story really appeals to me. It would be interesting to add some tension in John and Alice's relationship, like having John's mom find them out.

LIFTW: Remix by JT07 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Going back in time. Back to the first (Life is funny that way). This time, everything will be different. A more detail builds on the characters and how they meet. A mix between both stories. A remake of the oppression, that the mega giant Ryan had brought upon these poor individuals. Come see the action, the drama, and sheer thrill of how everything plays out. 


Categories: Destruction, Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Feet, Fantasy, Footwear, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore, Violent, Unaware, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13424 Read Count: 4866
[Report This] Published: August 17 2017 Updated: November 20 2017
Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed
Date: November 17 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Meeting a Giantess

I liked the original story, and this looks good too. I hope Frankie and Tory's origin story is as good as the story with Jaden, Alex, and Ava.

Summary:

After receiving chilling news, a man readies himself for the end.  However, it's the year 2089, and a quick-thinking doctor comes up with a solution.  There's just one catch: he'll have to be an inch tall.  How will he and his wife adjust to him suddenly being tiny?


Categories: Violent, Giantess, Couples, Crush, Footwear, Gentle, Legwear, Sci-Fi, Unaware, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19439 Read Count: 25079
[Report This] Published: December 01 2017 Updated: February 05 2018
Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed
Date: December 03 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Bad News

This is a really unique premise. So the shrunken man has multiple bodies he can use as a backup in case one gets destroyed. I hope his wife doesn't use that as an excuse to get violent or cruel.

Summary:

Sequel to RainMan1131's Millan and Zava

A LOTG (Land of the Giants) spinoff. Engineer Mark Wilson is stranded with others on a planet of giants, after the ship he is traveling on falls into a dimensional portal. He decides to find his former captress, a beautiful and kind giantess called Zava, who he has developed feelings for.


Categories: Mouth Play, Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Couples, Gentle, Insertion, Odor, Sci-Fi, Unaware, Butt, Fantasy
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Zava's saga
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 117543 Read Count: 34525
[Report This] Published: December 14 2017 Updated: March 31 2018
Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed
Date: December 29 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Lovely reunion

I like Mark, he's a clever man. We'll see if the military goes out of their way to screw him and Zava over.



Author's Response:

I thnik they will have more to fear from politicians than from the military at this point...

Summary:

When Richard Parker mistakenly uncovers an ongoing affair between his female employer Jane and his best friends wife Ashley, his life takes a huge turn in the complete wrong direction.

(This story takes place in the kempverse, a universe I created in which Nick VS Highschool takes place, and thus you may find hidden easter eggs/recognize characters from other stories that also take place in the kempverse)

Disclaimer

This story is an original creation, and all text is of my own creation. If anything seems similar to another work, it is by pure coincidence.

There may be graphic descriptions within this text, and if you feel disturbed at any point, it's recommended you stop reading. I am not responsible for any damage done mentally, you are responsible for your own mental health. Again, if you begin to get disturbed while reading, please do not continue!

 

Story Tags/Categories

I have added all the tags that I think will end up in this story by the end. This does not mean the tags are final. Some tags may end up being removed, or even added depending how the story goes. I have chosen the tabs initially to help give me a sense of direction on which this story will take.

You have been warned, thus any complaints regarding the tags will be ignored.

Enjoy the story


Categories: Violent, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Vore, Gentle, Lesbians, Odor, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37093 Read Count: 25777
[Report This] Published: December 25 2017 Updated: January 04 2018
Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed
Date: December 26 2017 Title: Chapter 1: *Volume I* Chapter 1 - On The Q.T.

Wow this is a hell of a set-up. I hope Richard finds some way to get help from Kaya. One of my favorite things about your other story was Nick finding a way to triumph when the odds were against him.

Anyways this story has a lot of potential for some hot scenarios. Hang in there Richard.



Author's Response:

Hey Milo! Nice of you to come over :) thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 28 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Encumbrance

Wow the giantesses here are hot and despicable at the same time. You do a great job portraying a feeling of helplessness.

Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Erotica: Oral Dexterity

Ok, this was the hottest chapter I've seen so far. I loved Richard getting smacked by a big tongue while inside another woman's pussy.

This chapter gets the highest rating from me because I love Ashley's conflict. She wants to treat Richard humanely, yet she can't just let him go. The best stories, giantess or not, come from meaningful conflict. Ashley's moral dilemma is leading to something great for this story.

Summary:

As promised, the bonus chapters for reaching my 250 review goal for Nick VS Highschool! A poll is currently running, and will run for about 7 days. Afterwards I'll select the 3 highest choices and create a 3,000 word chapter dedicated to each choice.

 

*Disclaimer*

Story contains fictional minors that are as young as 13 years old. Story contains explicit content that may be disturbing to some readers. Any and all names used do NOT relate to anyone in real life, and any names that you recognize is by pure coincidence. If you feel sickly at all during your read, please stop reading and find the nearest barf bag. Enjoy the story!

 

WARNING: The following story contains, or will eventually contain the following.

-Hard/Extreme Vore

-Actions or events that can be mentally disturbing

-Sexual references, inuendos, and actions

-Scat

If any of the above you find disturbing, you may want to either skip over certain chapters, or not read the story at all. Any tags you see related to the story that you have not yet seen take place, WILL be added at one point or another. Thank you. 

 


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1439 Read Count: 3614
[Report This] Published: December 26 2017 Updated: January 01 2018
Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed
Date: December 26 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Poll (Poll Has Ended)

Hey, Option 5 is practically a repost of my suggestion! Gotta vote for that one. I'm glad latecomer fans like me have an influence.

For the 2nd vote, I pick Option 1. If you do that one, I would love a part where Nick and Kaya make out in Chloe's mouth as her tongue is swishing them around.

Diana by Frizzle Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Diana has an extraordinary power, she can shrink anybody she touches to just an inch tall. The power comes at a cost however… a cost that puts her morals to the ultimate test as she fights to learn between what’s right for her… but wrong for all that cross her path.

 

(This story takes place in the kempverse, a universe I created in which Nick VS Highschool takes place, and thus you may find hidden easter eggs/recognize characters from other stories that also take place in the kempverse)

Disclaimer

This story is an original creation, and all text is of my own creation. If anything seems similar to another work, it is by pure coincidence.

There may be graphic descriptions within this text, and if you feel disturbed at any point, it's recommended you stop reading. I am not responsible for any damage done mentally, you are responsible for your own mental health. Again, if you begin to get disturbed while reading, please do not continue!

Story Tags/Categories

I have added all the tags that I think will end up in this story by the end. This does not mean the tags are final. Some tags may end up being removed, or even added depending how the story goes. I have chosen the tabs initially to help give me a sense of direction on which this story will take.

You have been warned, thus any complaints regarding the tags will be ignored.

Enjoy the story


Categories: Vore, Adventure, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3223 Read Count: 1543
[Report This] Published: January 01 2018 Updated: January 01 2018
Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed
Date: January 01 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - It's Ok To Kill Criminals... Right?

I'm impressed you write so quickly. This new story has got me wondering if Kristin will be in any future stories. Also, did Diana find a cure sometime between this story and Their Little Secret? She uses a piece of tech to shrink people, and she hasn't been seen eating any tinies in your other story.



Author's Response:

I'm confused. Let's try and clear this up. Diana is a new character and has not taken place in any of my other stories. I think you have Diana confused with another character, Jane maybe? Also, their little secret is 7 years after the ending of Nick VS High, so there is no correlation. Also, Diana doesn't use shrink tech, she has an actual ability (call it a superpower if you'd like). From the first chapter, it's quickly revealed that Auron is responsible somehow for Diana's power.

Let me know what character you're confusing her with, I'm sorta curious now... Is it Jane? Hmm.. 

(Also hey Milo! :D  )

Reviewer: MiloDanzig Signed
Date: January 01 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - It's Ok To Kill Criminals... Right?

So I had a major brain fart and thought Jane's name was Diana, my mistake. Anyways, this is a cool intro. Diana sounds like a potential giantess version of the guy from Death Note, whose name I can't remember at the moment.



Author's Response:

Light is his name! Love that anime! And you're right, their kinda one in the same (only we'll find out how far Diana goes with it...)