Once upon a time there was a story that pretty much everyone loved. Even to this day it's mentioned as a benchmark in the comments of other stories. This is the standard other stories try to meet. 

It had deep compelling characters, insightful writing, and a general mastery of the tropes of the genre! 

Then it disappeared. Only updating once in a blue moon. 

Now it's back and it's still just as good. 

GH-X2......Don't be gone so long next time. But don't listen to me. I'm just some hapless  chump. Trying and failing down at the bottom of  this site that is the home for people large and small. 

Anyways. I just have to say you have a talent for writing emotions. You spent three paragraphs describing two people walking by eath other! I don't think I could do that. 

Rating this storyis pointless. Just I don't know. Thank you I guess? 

"Life lessons"...right. This is all happening because why again? A phone call or a skype or something?..."Life lessons" I think it'll be fun and fair to literally start hating almost every woman in this story......5 stars!

Okay after two chapters I must say I do like these girls. Your descriptions of them are brief but informative. It's something I could learn from because I don't often describe what my characters are  wearing for example. I feel it ruins the flow with my writing but it's something I should learn. Also you established both their backstories rather efficiently as well. I don't do that either and that's more of a personal preference thing. 

All that being said I am not quite sure where this is going yet. Becky seems slightly suspicious but not necessarily bad and Sondra seems like a normal girl sooo? You didn't tag any size categories so I can't even guess. Going for the slow start? I can respect that but from experience most readers don't have patience for it. Will comment again down the line.

Wow! That's how this story end? Sondra forever floating in limbo confused and teased and lost and tiny!. You're horrible! Why did you ask me to read this?! I have to know how this end?! How will Wendy live with herself when this is over! Will Sondra be shrunk forever! I really feel bad she was dealt such horrible cards for basically all her life. Now one unfair curse and she's shrunk with nothing to live for but the girl she loves!........This was a bait and switch! BAIT AND SWITCH!

OH! And that's how the news goes!...Unless there's some crazy epilogue twist but I doubt it!

Some thoughts: Poor Faye! She made WAAAAY too many rookie mistakes as a tiny. Should've been gone after that first night Gwen showed up. Did she forget she's just like every other of the suredly contless tines she probably swallowed as a human. Her memory will live on in.....well not a photo, Gwen probably torched those. Song? Yeah sure song. Maybe try harder next time? 

Erin did nothing wrong. That is all.

Gwen's really insecure about a meager tiny for someone with such a huge dick. Just saying.

Great story about a widow finding love again after her wife tragically dies on her honeymoon! Unless I've gravely misinterpreted this story.....Hmmm..Looking forward to Monday!

First of all. Thanks for the shoutout!

Second: Wow. Totally unfair! But honestly I knew this story would end on a bittersweet note. Nancy List is dead and even worse she has to bear the full responsibility for her and Douglass' infidelity. That's what irks me most. Did she force Douglass into cheating? Did she make him divorce his wife? These were choices the man made in equal parts with her yet she's shouldering that burden and serving as a slave to Peyton the rest of her life. Peyton has to know that's unfair and that what's she's doing to Twerp isn't justice. I'd say it's even past revenge. I don't think Peyton will ever come to regret what she's done (especially not with Sabrina who has admitted she's just a petty and vindictive bitch influencing her partially) but I hope eventually she does or at least matures some. Regardless of her part in breaking a commited relationship Nancy List was a good person and a good mom. I would say moreso than Peyton's own mother who I've only known for a chapter and was ready to kill her husbands mistress on the spot at her most vulnerable. I would even wager there were problems in the marriage already or was Nancy just such a fine piece Dougy couldn't pass her up? The cancer probably didn't help though. But I hope one day Peyton realizes her fathers not innocent in all this and that Nancy wasn't some demon or a "Step monster"

Until then that girl better devote her life to taking care of Twerp! I mean yeah, she's gonna be horrible and make Twerp work way past what karma she's earned and them some, but she better never let that tiny get hurt, because that tiny is a much stronger and better human than she could ever be and for some reason she still loves her as a daughter! I hope Twerp finds peace and happiness as a pet and maybe even one day finds some of Nancy List again. Nancy List is a survivor. Twerp is the absolute proof of that. Good story. I hope to see these characters again and I wish Twerp as many happy days as she can make for herself, because no one else is gonna give em to her.

See ya! 0 STARS!!!!!!!

Edit: Sorry had to delete and repost my comment because I forgot somethings. Mainly

What happened to officer Daniels? He was barely mentioned. Is he still just chilling in Peyton's mouth? I feel kind of bad that I just forgot about him although I can see that being something intrinsic to his character in the long run. No one remembers Daniels.

That was it really. I could go into a whole analysis on Peyton's character and lingering questions about her motives and morality but I just hope she shows Twerp some compassion every now and then. Doesn't let Sabrina be a total bitch to her everyday of the week. And maybe give her that bed even if she hasn't earn that insane goal of ten thousand merits. Peyton will forget how many Twerps earned before that ever happens. And maybe scratch Twerp the way she likes that's so easy for Peyton to do and that she admits she enjoys. 

That's really it this time. Byes. 

*Sigh*

Hearing stuff like Nancy losing her ability to read or do math is really what hurts most. More than officer Daniels being eviscerated by cookie crumbs. OREO cookie crumbs probably! But seriously her humanity is dying out. And being bred?! Only getting the family you wanted after literally becoming an animal. Bitter. Only silver lining (if you can even call it a silver lining. More like falling in poop and being happy you didn't swallow any) When Nancy's finally gone. Just a shallow memory in the back of Twerp's head. Twerp will be probably be happy. She'll have nothing to worry about except how to please Peyton, and maybe Peyton will actually love her for it. Her humanity is just a burden at this point.

Despite all the words above these one's I still have hope for Nancy List! She's a survivor if nothing less, Most tinies wouldn't even make it this far. I think even if Twerp wins out part of Nancy will always be around. One day years in the future Peyton will swear and then hear "Language young lady!" and it will be a nice surprise. (That probably won't happen) Still enjoying the story wherever it goes and looking forward to the end and whatever else you decide to do with these characters.

Wow.....this chapter was a tough read. Mostly because if it isn't obvious I highly sympathize with Nancy. The character I've read. The woman that so desperately wanted a family, to be a mother. The woman whose only crime was that she was selfish. The woman who can still love her stepdaughter after countless humiliations. She doesn't deserve what's happened to her. She doesn't deserve to lose her humanity. And it really resonates with me because I'm currently working with similar ideas in my own writing although nowhere near as polished as it is here. I really want Nancy to have a happy ending but I fear it's too late. I don't know if she's capable of coming back from this and finding peace and closure as a pet is a bittersweet ending to her story.......but that's how the dice rolls sometimes boys!!!!

I feel nothing for Pig. Mostly because his character is pretty shallow and it was very clear what was going to be his fate, also because abusive dad's suck and it's easy to hate him. I will say this. If Peyton's that broken up about killing a guy she literally hated I don't think she has the stomach to go through with her threats on Twerp. Not that it matter now. Twerp's already broken. Peace out! Great chapter! High score which it totally arbitrary by this point. 

I can't help but notice the dad is getting no heat at all for this affair/divorce thing that happened. Not that I really care that much about the marriage problems of these characters. I'm just saying it takes two people to cheat. Or one person and a sufficiently intelligent robot. I mean I've seen him. He didn't seem THAT great. I mean is he like some Channing Tatum looking embodiment of kindness and generosity. The actual Jesus reborn! I've gone on a tangent......

Also come on Nancy cheer up! You're cleaning out your step monster's teeth. It's not the worst thing! For Peyton's sake sing a song or something. Make work fun! Own it! That'll really throw her off.

Hard to read Sandra. I honestly don't know who the better parent is here. I mean Nancy ls a homewrecker but I ain't really reading much from these other two. Anyway it's good to see Peyton actually loves her stepmo- I mean cares about the time she's invested in training Twerp! Yeah definitely that second one!

.........Scott.....Scott's had a hard life.