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School trip to die for. by christiawi9 Rated: X Round robin starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

An entire class goes on a school field trip in which their bus is going to be shrunken down and they are going to explore a small pot of plants. However, in the same building some other scientists are making a cream that will make objects immune to human digestion. The first thing they test it one is a small yellow matal pill which will be consumed by Lora Mason. But what happens when the shrunken bus gets confused with the pill and no one finds out until Lora is out the building?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7137 Read Count: 38152
[Report This] Published: March 25 2014 Updated: March 29 2014
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed
Date: September 11 2017 Title: Chapter 1: What a boring school lesson.

OH I WANT THIS COMIC TO CONTINUE SOO FRWAKEN BAD... :).  Honest I truly think the concept behind this is brilliant. Please please please please please continue.  You are truly a talented writer, and I especially feel this story has lots of potential.

The Magic School Bus by That_One_Guy Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

This story bounces off the concept of the cartoon, “The Magic School Bus”. For those of you who do not know, it is a show about a classroom that takes a field trip every day. The bus they use is a magic bus that can transform into anything, as well as change size. But what will happen in this story when the class decides to take a field trip that is much more dangerous, and personal, than they thought?

This is my first story, so reviews would be fantastic! :) hope you all enjoy!

I may add more tags as I get farther into the story and see where it goes.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Couples , Giant, Insertion, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8388 Read Count: 110146
[Report This] Published: September 02 2014 Updated: December 01 2014
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 06 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Setting it up

I am not going to say this is a bad story, of course it is not.  But I will admit I wish it would have remained as its original intent: with the girl being actually sick and them entering her.  Unfortunatly I will say that instead, it took a drastic turn as oppose to the direction I wanted.  But I will run on the saying "Don't yuck someone elses yum," as I know others may (and have enjoyed it.)  I'm just saying this as my own personal opinion.  

Parappa & Ma-San: Lammy's and Katy's Inside Stories by xandermartin98 Rated: R [Reviews - 1]
Summary: What starts out as a relatively tame and normal vore fanfic about Katy Kat coming down with a nasty case of the feline flu and therefore needing to have Parappa and Ma-San inserted into her body by Lammy to combat the disease Fantastic-Voyage-style quickly degenerates into quite possibly THE most shamelessly brain-fetishistic thing you'll ever read.

(Also, Lammy and Katy FINALLY have full-fledged sex with each other.)
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, BBW, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Furry, Futanari, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Nose, Odor, Scat, Violent, Vore, Watersports, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7540 Read Count: 4684
[Report This] Published: May 03 2017 Updated: May 03 2017
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed
Date: June 12 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Parappa & Ma-San: Lammy's and Katy's Inside Stories

Could you do, like, the exact same plot, except place it inside a human.  I mean I hate to say it but nobody really is interested with animal things like that, sorry

Shrink-O-Car by christiawi9 Rated: R Round robin starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary: In the not too distant future, technology has evolved to include shrinking technology which has been used by companies in many different industries. Some of these include safety defenses for cars, others include burglar traps for robbers while others are simply used for easier transportation while in your car. These are just some of the stories that have involved this technology.

This is based on a short series created by MShrinker on Deviantart. Go check out their work, it's really good.
Categories: Crush, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Instant Size Change, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10235 Read Count: 61908
[Report This] Published: May 18 2017 Updated: May 22 2017
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Road safety is important

Hi I was wondering, is there any chance you would continue the Field Trip To Die For story.  Originally you had said that you were going to perminatly quit writing, which I completely respect, but now I notice that you are back to writing, which is wonderful!  I had always looked upon that story as something with so much potential as I have looked for other stories that run on the "pill" type of senerio, unfortunatly not finding any others.  If you get the chance, could you please continue?  I'm a huge fan of your work.  If not, it is perfectly fine, I do not want to be one to drive you crazy.  Thanks!



Author's Response: I did say I was quitting for good. I should probably not say that. If I ever say it I really mean that I'm taking a break (Which may last a year or two). The problem with me is that I get lots of inspiration and write several chapters at once an then stop once I get bored. The reason I haven't continued any of my stories (Instead, I simply start new ones) is because I get a new idea and start writing. I haven't got any ideas for FTTDF. I don't know how to continue it. I have no inspiration. Maybe I will one day, though.

Giantess Sister Unaware Vore by Wood Man Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

When Tom and his younger sister, Casey are left home alone for a weekend, Tom doesn't think anything can go wrong. Oh boy, is he wrong.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Fantasy, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Giantess Compilation
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1112 Read Count: 44726
[Report This] Published: June 01 2017 Updated: June 12 2017
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed
Date: June 01 2017 Title: Chapter 1: An Introduction

This concept seems really thrilling, as very little amounts of story's like this exist.  My only comment and or recommendation is to make sure to add larger amounts of detail.  This really creates additional bulk in your story.  Besides that, keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your advice! I will put that to mind now, as I am starting to write the Second Chapter. Hopefully, it will be out some time this weekend.

A Breakfast Story by 87Thirty2 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

A traditional telling of a few people stranded in a girl's bowl of cereal.

If you enjoy unaware giantess, please consider checking out my patreon page, where there are full, patron-only stories, access to early chapters, and more. patreon.com/unawareenthusiast


Categories: Crush, Mouth Play, Nose, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16027 Read Count: 152104
[Report This] Published: June 18 2017 Updated: September 02 2019
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed
Date: June 18 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have to say, this story is fantastic.  I am very, very impressed with the amount of detail provided.  It is like I could vividly imagine the situation as if I was there!  That is a trait that is hard to provide in a story, but when it is done properly like you have done... dam it really makes a story be a story.  All I could really say is keep up the good work.  I am very excited for how this is going to end up.  One question, are you planning on taking it full tour?  If so, this is in for an awsome adventure!

The Labours of Dmitri by I for incredible Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

This story is based in a sci-fi world where we follow a desperate “ligo (tiny)” student, Dmitri who is determined to make a name for himself in the field of dentistry. However when he goofs up in an important examination, Dmitri realizes that he is in a forlorn situation. Follow

Tags: Vore, Adventure, Sci-fi, Butt, Breasts, Body exploration, Mouth Play, Gentle, feet, Insertion.

 


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3581 Read Count: 39012
[Report This] Published: October 19 2017 Updated: October 22 2017
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed
Date: October 19 2017 Title: Chapter 1: A vital test

Interesting concept.  My only concern is the speed of the story.  Not trying to say that this story should move a mile per hour, but I feel that at the moment, the story is moving way to fast, and should a least be slowed down a little bit.  I also would appriciate if you could give more of a discription of each of the characters, because I feel like it is lacking some of those details.  But besides that, keep up this story.  I am very interested to see the future of this story, it is nice seeing another shrunk-vore story, a there have been very few of these stories on this site as of recently.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, ap13rocks. I am glad you found my chapter interesting. I have slowed down a bit in my second chapter. I'll add a little more description to the characters in my upcoming reviews. Thanks again for the review! Really appreciate it!

Wild Ride by JTH2012 Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 40]
Summary: One boy finds himself shrunken, and is taken on a journey with the aid of 4 of his female 'friends'
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Butt, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Insertion, Legwear, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13174 Read Count: 113285
[Report This] Published: October 21 2017 Updated: January 31 2018
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed
Date: October 21 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The New Girl

I really did enjoy it.  My only request is if you could possibly add some unaware vore?  Many stories as of lately have been without that, and I truly think with your nice writing style you could really make that flow well.



Author's Response: There won't be any vore I'm afraid as it is not a person favourite of mine. I hope that a bit of mouth play and a lot of unaware will make up for this! Sorry but also thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed
Date: November 12 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Early bird catches the worm (between its feet)

Would it be possible to add some unaware vore?  That would be awesome!  Thanks!



Author's Response: Sorry, I'm not sure if I mentioned it earlier, but just mouth play is the closest you're gonna get to any vore. It's not my thing at all and I don't enjoy writing about it, which to me would ruin that chapters whole quality.

Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The New Girl

Completey understood.  I saw your previous reponse and completely respect it.  In that case, would it be possible to have her wear flip flops,  where the main character ends up hiding under one of her nail polished toenails.  Just and idea.

Zach's Small Problem by MiniSole Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

 

Zach was just trying to be the best boyfriend he could be. He was at his girlfriends school waiting to surprise her with flowers and a movie. But instead finds himself shrunken in the halls of her school. Will he survive? Will he got back to his full height? And will he find his girlfriend? There’s only one way to find out!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Butt, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Legwear, Odor, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 682 Read Count: 6238
[Report This] Published: November 25 2017 Updated: November 25 2017
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed
Date: November 25 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Waiting

When writing a story, it is important that you avoid using slang such as "u" instead of "you" or "bc" instead of "because."  For the future, it's alright if you need to take your time to create a chapter.  A story (at least in my opinion,) is a lot more suiting when in moderate size as oppose to mutiple mini chapters, but that's just reference.  Anyway I saw a tag regarding vore so I'm am looking forward to any possible unaware vore.  Besides that, you honestly have a nice story basis, imput those suggestions if you'd like and I hope this helped.  Keep up the good work :)



Author's Response: Thanks ap I’ll definitely keep your suggestions in mind. I wrote the draft on my phone and sometimes my brain just goes on autopilot. And there will definitely be some unaware vore in the next couple chapters.

The Tales of Miss Hyde by Rehgahro Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary:

Valerie and Crystal are two good friends who just want to enjoy a movie together.  However, during the movie a shrinking epidemic hits the world, and the dynamic between these two friends changes as one's darker desires get brought to light.

 

Several months after the world was hit with the shrinking epidemic, private investigators Joey and Robyn are hired by an unknown source to investigate Infinity University, where Valerie and Crystal go to school.  Apparently, a lot of the shrunken students have gone missing, causing campus-wide concern.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Fantasy, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Insertion, Lesbians, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 94049 Read Count: 235605
[Report This] Published: February 07 2018 Updated: May 28 2019
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed
Date: February 08 2018 Title: Chapter 1: ACT 1: Intro

Hey, really like how the story's coming along.  One question though, do you think that you're going to transition the story back into unaware? Just curious.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  And oh, yeah, don't worry, there'll be more of that to come.  It's pretty easy to lose track of the tiny people, after all :D

The Kelly 50 by DankMip Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Based on the premise established in Haloichigo's "The Elite 50", This is the story of the fate of 50 marble sized planets as they're taken away and played with by a random college freshman girl


Categories: Unaware, Giantess, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1665 Read Count: 13801
[Report This] Published: February 21 2018 Updated: February 22 2018
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed
Date: February 23 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Controlly Kelly

Love the concept.  I have a short idea for the future, is it possible that maybe she could be playing with one of the planets in her mouth, and maybe her mom walks in, causing her to be clumsy and accidentally swallow the planet?

Micro City by Skulldeath50 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

When cities across the world like New York, London and Toyko go missing, their foundation, buildings and people disappearing in thin air, the world assumes multiple theories: Aliens? Terrorist? Judgement Day?

The answer might shock them: the cities haven't left Earth at all. In fact, each of them has been transported into a different body part, and those bodily functions will destroy each and every city, killing millions through actions of eating, using the restroom, and more.

First story in an upcoming series


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Destruction, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Nose, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Micropocalypse
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13768 Read Count: 56901
[Report This] Published: February 23 2018 Updated: August 12 2018
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed
Date: February 23 2018 Title: Chapter 1: A Snotty Forecast In Seattle

I have to say, you are quite my type of guy when it comes to writing.  I'm honestly very impressed with all your workings; they are unique, and they flow smoothly.  Keep up the awesome work.  I'm also excited for digestion!



Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, it means a lot. I’m good at writing because I write more than erotic. I also write novels.

Contaminant by sickpuppies Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Summary:

Hospitals are a hotspot of strange body conditions. For Adam, was once a normal person content with his office job in the hospital’s HR department, this wasn’t a big concern. Each day he would flirt with the girl down the hall, fantasize about his overpowering boss, smile at the groups of cute nurses that passed him by. But one little sniff and reality, for him and everyone else affected, changes.


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Instant Size Change, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32939 Read Count: 168477
[Report This] Published: April 07 2018 Updated: February 01 2019
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed
Date: July 23 2018 Title: Chapter 1: The Hidden Danger

Hey, by any chance, do you still take paid commitions? 



Author's Response:

Hey ap,

Send me an email with what you were thinking. Always willing to listen to an idea or two. 

Accidental Voyage by the_potato Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

A trained man becomes the first test pilot of a vessel to explore the human body. However on the way to the controlled area where the client is waiting to be explored a mix up occurs and instead is accedentally injected into a young woman. How will he manage to survive inside this woman unknown to her, with limited radio contact to outside world


Categories: Adventure, Body Exploration, Couples, Entrapment, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6733 Read Count: 46816
[Report This] Published: May 21 2018 Updated: November 02 2018
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed
Date: May 23 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I've noticed that people haven't really been leaving extensive reviews, so I guess I'll be your first.  To begin with, I must say, this concept... Wow!  It's truly amazing to see someone explore a path not explored in the past on giantess world.  Next, to see your mention of excitement upon writing this, that really is heartwarming to see.  Many people on this site (I included) have struggled to expand upon some of our story-starts, genuinely due to our lack of motivation, but to see you enthrived to keep writing, that's awesome.  I also must say, your writing technique; incredible.  Keep doing what you're doing, I'm really curious what's going to follow along in the future.  It would be cool to see if the main character tries to affect the host's outer activities, but I guess I'll have to wait in see.  I'll be waiting for the next chapter.  Keep up the great work! -Aaron

Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed
Date: June 03 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Please continye this is amazing 

 

Fast Food Cleaning - Nanoverse Story by Goddess_Lucy_tinycrusher Rated: PG [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Another story inside the Nanoverse, where part of the population is Nano (2mm tall)

 

Emma is annoyed one day working at her job at a fast food place, where today is a really slow day.. and to top it off some pigs left a mess if crumbs near the table by the door. 

A group of Nanos come inside to get a free meal, but what they don't know is that Emma is just about to clean up the mess . Their only hope is that she realizes they're not ants.


Categories: Crush, Feet, Footwear, New World Order, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2043 Read Count: 16378
[Report This] Published: May 22 2018 Updated: May 24 2018
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed
Date: May 24 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Could I actually request a story by any chance?

 



Author's Response:

Suuuure ^^

Just gotta tell me

United States Shrinking Postal Service, Part 2 by jnbt Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

My (now ex-)girlfriend and I had quite the ordeal, having been shrunk down to 1/8th of an inch tall and shipped by the United States Shrinking Postal Service to visit her younger sister across the country. It was a terrifying situation to be thrown into, but I did oddly love it. Parts of it. My life has returned to normal lately, but a text from my ex might change all that.

[Emphasis on hands and feet, and accordingly, fingernails and toenails. 1/8th of an inch tall.]

EDIT #1: My ideal Elana feet: https://tinyurl.com/y8uwxaut


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16972 Read Count: 75588
[Report This] Published: September 11 2018 Updated: October 22 2018
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed
Date: September 19 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Back to Anna

By any chance, can you have Elana swallow the pill?  I know that you haven't done stuff like that in the past, but i just feel that would be a really neat plot twist.

Blast From The Past by Flagpole_Sitta97 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Anthony was going to be big news worldwide when he was born due to being born smaller than normal, but he was overshadowed by the Watergate scandal. Years later he meets a girl on vacation in California who agrees to take him to go live with her family in Texas. About 5 years later, she takes him to go live with her in Tampa.
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28580 Read Count: 70877
[Report This] Published: July 20 2019 Updated: August 12 2019
Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01 2019 Title: Chapter 1: When We First Met

Really liking this a lot, more unaware endosomatopilia would be awesome, what you've done soo far has been fantastic, keep up the good work :)



Author's Response: Thank you haha, glad you're enjoying this (:

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.