Reviewer: Lord Aj Signed
Date: August 17 2017
Title: Chapter 3: Acerola
Man, this was a roller coaster of a chapter! Really enjoy your stuff and as a fan of the series myself I've been following this with curiosity since the first instalment. This is certainly my favourite chapter of the three! You used the odour tag masterfully, though I do wish she had eaten him. Would have loved to see how awful her mouth actually was. Perhaps it could be explored with another S/M girl? Much as I'd love to see Mallow return, or an alternate ending to the Acerola chapter, I understand the want to cover new characters each time. Plumeria comes to mind; she hasn't been mentioned yet to my knowledge, and as a Poison-type enthusiast her own hygiene may be fairly poisonous itself, if you catch my drift.
Still, that's just my two pence; your story at the end of the day, and I'm sure whatever you do with it will be just as excellent.
Keep up the amazing work, my good man!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your thoughts Lord AJ, I will take them into account. I do have plans for all the girls. Some more thought out than others, but Plumeria has come to mind, along with some other grunts as well, don't you worry. What was seen here today will be repeated, but don't expect it to be as cheerful as it was for Acerola if you catch my drift.
I hope to please with the new chapters I install in the future, and I hope to be writing them sooner than later.