Reviewer: NSFW_alt1234 Signed
Date: June 30 2017
Title: Chapter 1: Canceled
If this were any other author I would have called you a hack for having the "it was just a dream" ending... But the story was so good I can look past that. Being honest, I can't really think of any other way to end it. I'm glad that's over though, I don't think I could take anymore punishment. Which is a testament to your writing, you really feel the suffering, it's a slog.
Author's Response: Thank you!! Yeah, the "dream" ending isn't really my forte for how cliche it is, but I did try to at least twist it up a little bit by making it so everything during the story did happen, just not permanent..? It's a weird ending, but it's the best way I felt of closing off the story.