Interesting chapter but way too short for how long it took for it to update. I like regular updates at least. 

What stands out to me the most is that Elena believes Corey won't have a future but also won't help to give him a future at all. Her rational is bunk because she's just perpetuating the cycle. That is what makes her weak to me.

As for alpha politicians fighting against Omegas, I think that only extends to alpha controlled areas. I don't think Alphas have any say in Aegis controlled areas.

Author's Response:

Yup. It was a part of her that was particular galling to me as I wrote it: She's cognizant of how unfair all of what she said is, but does not want to put any real work in to try to provide a better future because she feels she will lose against time.

What the heck are you doing Ackbar? You can’t have children in these stories. This is a site of sex and debauchery. You aren’t a pedophile, are you?

Joking aside lol….

Ultra sweet chapter that might have given me cavities.  

While a fetish chapter is nice and all, I don’t know if this chapter really meshed well with the cliff hanger from the last chapter and the one that is coming next. Sierra might be killing humans in the next chapter and from what we’ve seen her kind doesn’t care if the human is a child or an adult. I find it a little jarring that Nathan is totally cool being a toy boy and the sisters are treating him like a pet. Makes it hard to take the coming serious part of the story actually seriously. 

I think someone set Alexandra up but for what reason I have no clue.

Also I wonder if the flame inside Bridget is conflicting with the doubt she has regarding the culpability of her friend. 

Aegis, a shield that protects betas but also blinds the omegas to their predjucies. 

Great chapter. 

A good chapter, a much needed chapter. In fact I think this chapter should have come earlier as now we have a good idea why Bridget is going to the lengths she is to find out why her friend is allegedly accused of hurting those betas. I think this chapter retroactively humanizes Bridget a bit, more than the work chapter did. 

Every Omega story has “that” chapter that is noticeably more standout than the rest. Omega: Consequences so far has Marion’s downfall and the final chapter of the Claire/Stephanie arc, Omega: Tough Love has Jenna – Part 2, Omega: Family has the first chapter, and now Inheritance has this chapter. Granted this my opinion regarding the best chapters in the Omega verse but this one was too powerful, raw, and shocking to ignore. Lexi is a very strong ten year old to reject her mother’s psychotic ideology like that, making her a lot stronger than she appears. This strength is seen in the present as she refuses to break under her frend's punishment and hold onto her innocence. 

Yeeaaah…

I’m both sad for Bridget and Lexi right now. While Bridget gets some hate, I’m not going to ignore the upbringing her generation of Omegas have and the near indoctrination like teaching they receive involving beta cruelty and instilling in them the desire to protect betas at all costs. Aegis is more at fault for this and I hope this makes Kayla think about making some changes to the organization. Bridget and Lexi and their friendship both got screwed by the system.

As for Lexi, it was hard seeing her crack like that but I don’t think she’s actually going to turn into a beta killing criminal or harbor violent tendencies toward them. I’m not too worried about her injuries due to the super advanced medical care Aegis have and frankly doing all they can to treat her is the least they could do.

Excellent chapter, good sir. The Omega series always produces high quality work.

I forgot to review the ending. Better late then never, I guess. I liked the conculsion. Gave enough closure whilel leaving some uncertaintiy and the cliff hanger was awesome.