I like my giantesses gentle,most of the time anyways. Stories? I like those with a good amount of plot development or well written sexy scenes, both would be nice. When it comes to writing, expect stories with a good plot and well thought out characters.
Stories I want to do but haven't done yet:
1. A Superhero Giantess story.
2. A fantasy setting with giantesses.
3. A fairytale story given a giantess twist.(No, not Jack and the Beanstalk. Too obvious)
4. A post apocalyptic tale featuring one or more giantesses.
5. A story of redemption featuring a giantess.
6. Plenty more but it'll come to me.
There are all sorts of things that the rich take for granted.
A little abrupt but alright in the end.
I saw this some time ago. I think Zee1 is still gentle if she does it out of self-defense and out of some lust for death and destruction. Interesting story , a fusion of sci-fi and fantasy, hope you finish it!
Jack, a 'regular'-sized 17-year-old in a world now populated predominantly by humans twice that height, struggles to cope with life in a school and society built for people far larger than he will ever be.
Awesome to see an update, each chapter detailing Caitlin's humiliation of Jack but also reducing the chances of him ever being rescued.
You can definitely see the toll it's beginning to take on him; even when she's not being that rough, it's just too much for him to handle. She did say she would let him go on Sunday... but can she be trusted?
Kudos to you for fleshing out Alex when you could actually have avoided doing this for the grunts of the bully.
I love the emotions in the scenes, you bring out Jack's despair and I think, depression. Same for Penny. I really feel for them, especially Penny. I fear the next chapter I read it'll be that she has some terminal disease. Keep up the good work!
Is it time to blackmail Caitlin?
Either that or...
https://youtu.be/otCpCn0l4Wo?t=2m8s
Now THIS is podracing!
Don't get cocky.
(This is my favourite review)
Careful Jack, you don't wanna dig too deep into this. Caitlin might not let you live if you do.
Brilliant, love the whole story but I can't help but feel Caitlin will find Jack again to finish things off. I don't know if she will get whats coming to her but she'll definitely show up.
I like your instincts...!
I'm sad you're taking a break but I understand, given you did upload at least 4 chapters during this past week or so.
I didn't expect Penny to be Poppy from Jack's childhood, that was a twist out of nowhere! Its cool to see that she knew him and they got reunited years later. I guess that explains how uncomfortable she was in his house, it reminded her of it.
Surprised she was keen to give more credit to Alex although I worry for her now because Caitlin will beat her. Be back soon!
I'm super thrilled that you remembered the uncomfortableness from Chapter 3, I put in that seed SO early on, knowing that eventually it would make sense.
OH MY GOD SHE'S BACK! Also, you're frequent updates are a godsend. I like the detail of the house, the half-steps meant for Betas, shows her family actually cares about Betas or perhaps there is a Beta member. Either way, it shows the difference.
My frequent updates will now dry up for quite a while I'm afraid, but it was good while it lasted! The story has moved on and developed quite a bit over the last 5 chapters, and there will be more to come in future, when I have time.
The stairs detail is something I've been saving up; I think this is actually the first staircase mentioned in the story so far, as Jack lives in an Beta-sized bungalow, and Caitlin in an Alpha-sized one.
Oh now one of them has a heart! Well, Caitlin will probably take it out on him.
And our hero's cover is blown, much humiliation to follow!
Saw a bit more of Caitlin here, what with the drinking and anger over Jack disapearing. I really like what you've done so far. Now its whether Jack can survive the night with an angry Amazon holding him close.
Penny replied! They will need some Alpha help if he wants to live, Penny will be key although not in a fight, Caitlin is way too strong for Penny.
I am guessing Penny was a late bloomer, became an Alpha at fifteen which is why she wont talk about her life beyond a year ago.
If Alphas are twice as tall as humans, then Penny would be tall even for a Beta , 12' 7" halved is about 6' 3.5" , she is an Amazon! I hope that Jack patches things up with Penny if he is why she did not come to school but I think it could also be her body's bad reaction to the GH-X2 and possibly making her grow even larger.
Penny is very tall and quite slim, but not to a freakish extent - she is a little bit gangly and awkward with her height, like a lot of tall girls can be. Caitlin, though, is truly amazonic; at 'regular'-size she'd still be almost 6' 7" and very muscular - so very intimidating for Alphas and Betas alike. She's also far more physically-minded than Penny, so despite being taller she has greater control in her movements and is less ungainly.
Well 6' 3.5" is actually tall for a woman, to the extent that it could be said to be freakish and as such I wonder if Penny got a proportionate boost because of the drug, more than expected anyway. As for your story keep it up as I am hooked on it and wish to see it end. And to be a little shameless about this but please read mine as well. The one called The Escape as I intend to finish it.
Sounds like Jack is in trouble! I hope she doesnt hurt him too much or maybe Penny saves him , the latter is unlikely though.
Good start I would say, carry on. Characters are well written so far. Hope to see further development between Penny and Jack.