Penname: LilVagrant [Contact] Real name: James D
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My Sister, Destroyer of Worlds by Jacksmith Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Summary:

A college student's secret collection of shrunken nano-cities receives two new inhabitants in the form of her brother and his friend, who must adapt quickly to appease their new god or be destroyed.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15416 Read Count: 118655
[Report This] Published: June 02 2019 Updated: November 26 2019
Reviewer: LilVagrant Signed
Date: June 24 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I stand by my original critique. Story would have worked better with a premise for the unaware where boys try to get the sisters attention. I would have thought we'd get some giantess action by chapter 3. I hope the pov shifts between giantess and her sibling. Its to bad its taking so long between chapters and were not getting any action. 

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