Penname: JohanSutherland [Contact] Real name: Johan
Member Since: September 26 2007
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Homunculus by Cayce Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 71]
Summary: A tiny teenager is forced to live with his normal-sized family. Ignored by his father, he finds himself at the mercy of his sadistic stepmother and her friends, who delight in teasing and torturing him. His only allies are his bratty stepsister and the gentle housekeeper/babysitter with whom he becomes enamored.
Categories: Violent, Instant Size Change, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139916 Read Count: 1334373
[Report This] Published: December 10 2006 Updated: October 21 2008
Reviewer: JohanSutherland Signed
Date: September 26 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Dude that was good. I loved our little hero because he's smart. I mean, why does it take so long to others to ealise how useless it to fight when you're sooooo tiny. Here we can see a tiny dude using his brain, and doing great. I realy liked qhen he drove "momma" crazy. "Do you think your husband will come back tonight?"

Very great story 



Author's Response: I really enjoyed the way the balance of power kept shifting between Ray and his stepmom, and it made the story a lot more fun to write. I\'ve always hated passive protagonists in GTS stories, and I thought it would be cool to have a hero who uses his wits to occasionally get the upper hand. Of course, when it backfired, there\'d be hell to pay...\r\n\r\nThanks for reading, Johan. Glad you enjoyed the story!