I have to say that I hate this story however the story itself is exceptional. Now I suppose I should take the time to explain what I mean.

First I found the story to be quite well thought and an exceptionally descriptive the detail the author put into writing this story is exceptional and the images are quite vivid. The words are supported wonderfully by the art work which is exceptionally lovely and well done though I don’t enjoy the story behind the images.

The characters are strongly defined and their behavior fits their respective personas. Indeed this is a very well done story.

Now the reason I say I hate the story is that I can’t stand the giantess characters in the story. The story is so well done and the characters are so well portrayed that despite the stories exceptional quality I can’t enjoy it since I dislike them so much.

However if you’re not concerned with kindness or love but simply want to see a truly monstrous set of giantesses I highly recommend this story.

This was a fun read and it was interesting to see that the fantasy was the lady's at the end. Though it's amusing that she fantasized about a nerdy little man it was a nice twist. I'm normally not much of a fan of voyer senarios but this was nice.

I have to say Carly is triggering some fairly strong feelings of dislike and wanting to see her suffer. I wonder if that's really what the guy should be hoping for though. After all even if Carly had to pay for what she'd done at some point that doesn't mean his life becomes better. Rather then hoping to see Carly pay perhaps seeking better treatment would be a better move.

Now on the subject of better treatment I don't believe the male lead is really doing his best to obtain that or has really given in. Doing what Carly wants him to do whenever she tells him to do something or is made to do it, not arguing with her and given preprogrammed responses these aren't the acts of a pet or a slave. Rather those are the acts of a tool.

I would even go so far as to say he's putting up some passive resistance to what she wants in that she has to tell him what she wants or at least show him. This really isn't giving into her or giving her what she wants from what I can tell. What she seems to desire is to be worshiped and that goes beyond doing what he is told to do in that moment.

In those five years has he really tried to move beyond the status of tool and into the category of pet? When she comes home don't stand there and wait for her to pick him up jump up and down and tell her how happy you are to see her. When in her fingers don't just let her hold you kiss those fingers and if she likes it lick them as well. Grasp her thumb with all your might and hug it. When she licks him kiss her tongue or lick it in return. Look into her mouth and ask her if she'd like you to check her teeth and see if they need anything remove from between them.

Now I can't say for certain whether or not this would have the desired result of moving from tool or toy to devoted pet status in Carly's eyes but after five years it seems worth a try. It might back fire but it still seems worth the attempt. After all the little dog that greets you with yelping and playful antics is a heck of a lot more loughable then the one that just grunts at you.

It's amusing how each person has a different idea of what an abusive situation is when dealing with a giantess. If it wasn't for Julia being psychotic and well underage I would find being trapped in her panties while she enjoyed them to be rather pleasant. Brian on the other hand will most likely be sickened by it both on a physical level and knowing what she's done. After all he didn't like how her cum tasted in the least. 

Julia seems to have some serious mental issues especially given how her mood changes. That and I notice a lack of parents in her life. While I do not believe it excuses what she's done and I would prefer to see her suffer a horrible death I can't help but believe she's a deeply troubled person. Perhaps while her parents have provided for her they really haven't nurtured her? She may be a bit starved for affection and this is the only way she could think of to get it. That or suffered some kind of trauma in the past.  Once thing seems certain though. If Brian blows his cover they're all going to die.

Perhaps Brian should take this chance to really get to know Julia. Rather then just complying with what she wants him to do. He still seems to be more responding to what she says and does rather then anticipating her desires and working to actively meet them. As long as he's being passive I'm not sure if he'll ever learn how to work her effectively.

I'm enjoying the story but given hos important his roll is in the future I wonder why the government isn't taking more steps to protect Jake. After all it probably wouldn't look good if he was killed or taken hostage. The only reason i can think of is the Ashen require that he lives as normal of a life as possible but given his condition that doesn't seem possible. It could be easy to justify having a permenant escort with him just to help him get around.

Raven has quite a situation on her hand. While it's nice that she can prove that her great grandfather was right it isn't like the world could support a great many giant women especially on her scale. There is also the issue that while she's been well behaved the same can't be said for every woman. Now she can't hide what's happened to her but is it really safe for her to reveal how she obtained such size?

Just being able to study her and the biological workings of her body should provide very interesting results that should keep researchers busy for a long time. I'm curious how willing she's going to be to undergo such testing. Perhaps she could use some of her weight to push for Blaine to be put in charge of the studies to help insure they don't get rough. Then again. She's qualified to direct the studies herself most likely and he could serve as her assistant.

I'm also curious. Just how sturdy is Raven's body at her giantess size? I've seen a few stories in which the giantess skin could be cut with a knife stating that it had only been made thicker. Of course, if a giantess's skin truly had so little resilience it would be ripped apart by its own weight.

It's been quite nice reading so far. Typically I would expect a mistake like what he made to cost him. After all, how well would he take it if he learned that his wife had sex with another man? Now it looks like it might cost him even more as he has to worry about how attached Riley is to him. Then again given how fit she is that could have been quite an issue even at his full size. I do wonder how much common sense he's going to show though if she chooses to keep him. Is he going to be the type that constantly pleads for her to let him go possibly provoking her to anger constantly or is he going to show some common sense and see if he can learn what buttons are safe to push?

That was an amusing read. I do wonder how he made it to the hospital at only a foot tall and it seems a little strange how little people responded to his condition. It left me thinking that very strange things have happened in their world before.

It was quite interesting seeiing a giantess that liked to be dominated a little bit and even set herself up so she could play along. I do wonder how much protection she could really offer him though. Could she protect him if a rapiest or thief broke into her home? That or a dangerous animal. Whenever somene promises protection to a shrunken may I just can't help but doubt they could back that promise up unless there is something more to them.

This has been a very fun read. The new world order tag had me a little worried as normally that means very bad things but in this case it seems the world was already in awful shape. I loved the confession with Melody and Cory and I have to say I'm quite glad that you made Melody very well developed physically. I like the thought that when a giantess says she'll take care of someone she actually tries to make sure she can. A strong lady seems better suited to give protection then a soft one to me.

Of course with so many things going right for Cory i can't help but worry something is going to go wrong.  I'm hoping that's just paranoya on my part.

I was a bit surprised to learn that the fire planted within the omegas increased aggressive behavior. With the way they behaved towards the betas I was actually thinking these females must have extremely develop empathetic regions in their brain and very strong if not overwhelming maternal drives. It reminds me of an idea I'm having fun with in which a group of rather powerful beings actually enjoy a level of pleasure comparable to a narchotic whenever they're nurting a weaker being to the point that if they don't have someone to take care of they go into withdrawl.

That was a fun read. Claire's affection for her adoptive father was quite nice though I do wonder a bit about her childhood. What type of guidance could he have offered her that would cause those particular bonds of attachment to form? It's one of the things i struggle with at times while writing and trying to think of something a fellow could do for a giantess. It is likely even more difficult when that's your daughter. There is also something else I've been wondering about the story. I understand that they were working on a means for betas to protect themselves. However, wouldn't one form of protection be a recording device almost like a cell phone on a dedicated line? I was thinking something that a beta could push if they felt threatened and it would begin recording. It wouldn't save their life or may not but it would help insure the alpha didn't get away. Now this wouldn't work if the beta was already dead but the device could also be set to record constantly. Given the tech the omegas seem to have on hand storing the information doesn't seem like too much to ask but if need be the information could be flushed daily unless something happened to the beta in question then it could be reviewed.