Penname: Pdawg2431 [Contact] Real name: Peter allen
Member Since: September 21 2016
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Another Day at the Office by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

An office worker's wandering eyes earn him a day shrunken and imprisoned in the shoes of his oppressive boss and her spiteful young intern.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7306 Read Count: 97234
[Report This] Published: January 12 2018 Updated: February 03 2018
Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 16 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it so far. I really get a sense of the huge difference in size. Keep it up. 😀



Author's Response:

Thanks much.

the details by giantess jessica Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

the long story I created 


Categories: Giantess, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1521 Read Count: 2516
[Report This] Published: January 14 2018 Updated: January 14 2018
Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 14 2018 Title: Chapter 1: The last story.

Superb writing. I love your stories so please don't leave Giantess Jessica. I can only imagine how stunning you are and what it would be like to be owned by you. Xxx



Author's Response: im not leaving i never thought of it but i can add fans in my stories and i love my fans.

A boyfriends nightmare by giantess jessica Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Careful who you date!
Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3457 Read Count: 43138
[Report This] Published: January 25 2018 Updated: October 08 2018
Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed
Date: January 26 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Soccor

I'd love to roleplay with you Goddess Jessica. Please let me know if this would be possible. Xxx



Author's Response: of course whenever your ready?

Shrunken Suspension by Glazer Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

A high school senior is suspended due to his bad behavior and many mistakes.  As part of a new discipline method, he is shrunk and turned over to his mother, who is not very happy to find out about her son's suspension.


Categories: Slave, Giantess, Crush, Mature (40-49), Teenager (13-19), Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13298 Read Count: 63896
[Report This] Published: April 08 2018 Updated: May 23 2019
Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 09 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this! You really get a sense of how huge she is to him. Please don't concentrate just on her feet tho. I love the stuff with her fingers being so powerful over him. Well done. 

The DownSizer: Origins by bobobo Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Jacob is paired with Sara to complete a math assignment. It's rather mundane and boring until he notices that she has a special machine in her house. A shrinking machine that was rumoured to be in development. Jacob suddenly wonders if his biggest fantasy could come true?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: DownSizer Universe
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46383 Read Count: 58596
[Report This] Published: April 27 2018 Updated: May 20 2018
Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dream Come True

The best story I've read on here for ages. You really sell the size difference and I love that you aren't just concentrating on feet. I loved the cage idea. Something which very few writer's explore. I'm really hoping you don't have it ending in core as I just never buy that in stories. It makes no sense to me when ppl become cannibalistic in giantess. 

Anyway, keep it up. Absolutely brilliant so far. 

Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed
Date: May 20 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Work of Art

For such a great story, the ending ruined it. To write like you have and then turn her into a cannibal and a murderer is just stupid in my opinion. Far too many stories end this way and it makes no sense. It's beneath your abilities. 

I apologize if I'm being too harsh but that was such a letdown. 

The Best Toy by Stiletto Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

When Matthew finds himself the newest victim of the so called shrinking disease what will he do when he finds himself in the hands of a former friend?


Categories: Odor, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15587 Read Count: 92378
[Report This] Published: May 10 2018 Updated: November 21 2018
Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed
Date: May 10 2018 Title: Chapter 1: A Small Problem

This is a good start. I'm hoping it won't just be feet oriented as I love reading the descriptiveness of how small he is, particularly in regards to her holding him. Looking forward to the next chapter.

 

The feet comment was because so many stories on here are written about that. Yours is a refreshing start. 😀

Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed
Date: May 10 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Catching Up

Absolutely loving this. You really give a real sense of just how huge she is to him. I also love that she smokes. I hope that's gonna factor in later. Awesome work.

Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed
Date: September 17 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Proof of Ownership

Incredible! I've waited for ages for somebody to use a smoking giantess properly and you my friend have knocked it out of the park. Loving this story. 

Endless by Curse Crazy Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A creepy college student uncovers a book of curses, and the depths of her wild personality come to life. By conducting a ritual to shrink people, she is able to hold in her hands the target of her obsessed affections, along with other victims that cross her hexed path.

(If you enjoy the story, consider supporting me on Patreon~ https://www.patreon.com/cursecrazy

Or, just treat me to a coffee~ https://ko-fi.com/cursecrazy )


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Humiliation, Lesbians, Slow Size Change, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168220 Read Count: 251496
[Report This] Published: June 25 2018 Updated: May 02 2019
Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 03 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I really like this story, but if it gives in to vote, then I'm out. I think there's one thing to have a quite beleivabel character do what Melanie has done ( in a world where ppl shrink of course ) but that doesn't mean she would just become a cannibal. Too many stories go there and it never makes sense. Hopefully,this one won't tho as I'm loving the dominant melaMel. 



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear you've been enjoying it! Thank you so much for the review~

Verticality by Vintovka Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Summary:

A boy's bizarre dream about his best friend sets off a series of events, and he becomes increasingly excited as his dreams start to come true.


Categories: Body Exploration, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Legwear, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58202 Read Count: 223717
[Report This] Published: July 25 2018 Updated: November 19 2018
Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed
Date: August 16 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Dream State

Love the story,but the one thing I don't get,is her growing to 10 feet. It kinda takes me out of the story because she would not be able to live a normal life . Or normal within a context,haha. 

Love your work tho. 



Author's Response:

Hey, can't please everyone. :P That actually will come up when she goes out among other people again, for now though how she'll fit in with the rest of society is the last thing on her mind.  She has a tiny man to play with, after all.

 

Glad you're enjoying my work!  

The Plan by Nigma Rated: X [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

When presented with a difficult sales target, one young woman takes advantage of her former boss' misfortune to get ahead of the game.


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6927 Read Count: 10451
[Report This] Published: November 01 2018 Updated: January 04 2019
Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed
Date: November 01 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Plan A

Great start here. I love that she immediately is evil to him. Also love that she smokes. I hope you'll incorporate that into how she tortures him. Keep it up 😀

House Hunters by gtswburg Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Freshly divorced, Evan Pierce is ready to enjoy single life but a pair of young strangers want his house and money for themselves.


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Warning: This material is intended for mature audiences only.


Categories: Mature (40-49), Slave, Instant Size Change, Humiliation, Giant, Feet, Footwear, Entrapment, Couples, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76984 Read Count: 102102
[Report This] Published: October 31 2022 Updated: April 24 2023
Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed
Date: April 25 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This has been one of my favourite stories on here for months, I really looked forward to a new Installment every Monday, but I have tbh, the ending was so rushed. It felt like you just had enough of writing it and went to the extremes with the killings. 

Kelsey was a great creation so to have them all killed to 2 characters we barely had time with is definitely the sign of rushing. 

Sorry, I'm just disappointed 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.