I like to write about people shrinking around college-aged (and older!) women, focusing equally on unaware and aware interactions. My main thing is my text adventure, Shrunk at College, which is pretty big. If you like any of my stories here, you'll likely enjoy the text adventure too.
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I made a Text Adventure! It's based on my first story here, "Shrunk at College". It's got a lot of good stuff, including a mix of unaware and aware scenarios. It's got a heavy feet-centered focus, like most of my work, so if you like what I usually produce, this may be up your alley!
This is the story of a 20 year old guy named Paul. After falling vicitm to his Sister's black magic, Paul begins his descent into the world of feet.
Hey! I liked the story. It has a nice mix of unaware and aware scenarios. Keep up the good work!
A girl awakens in her best friend's room, reduced to a small size.
I want to address what I've read so far. I do like this story, in general.
Specifically, I like how you focus on the real and gritty nature shrinking stories can have. You do a good job making everything seem alien and dangerous from the main character's perspective.
I typically ignore those things, because it makes it easier for me to write my stories, so good on you for focusing on those aspects.
One thing I'm not as sold on is the story's pacing, or maybe how it flows from chapter to chapter. Sometimes, I find it a bit hard to follow the events of the story, and it sometimes feels almost episodic.
For example, I felt like there was something missing between the end of Chapter 3 and the beginning of Chapter 4. I just couldn't figure out how those events connected.
Also, was Chapter 2 a flashback? I assumed so but I wasn't too sure. Another thing about Chapter 2 was that it got a bit confusing to figure out which person was speaking. Maybe placing identifiers in front of each line of dialog could help readers understand which person was talking throughout the chapter? It wouldn't look all that nice, but it would be effective.
And I'm not certain on how the relationship between Jade and the girl is supposed to work, because they don't really act like you'd expect best friends to act. I don't know if that will be expanded upon later on, since I'm stopping part way to leave my thoughts. I guess you'll explain some of the other plot elements before the story ends, like how or why the girl shrunk, since this is a finished work.
Also, did you specify their ages or anything? I don't know if I missed it as I read, so I'm just going off of the tag.
I'll try and finish reading the story eventually, and hopefully give you a clearer and more finalized review.
A story about a girl who can be shrunk by anyone.
This was a really cool chapter. I liked the tied to the pencil thing. I don't think I've seen anyone do something with that idea. And I think the concept to your story is pretty cool too. Glad to see you back from your semi-long hiatus!
Ben Cutler is in pursuit of his dream career and he is presented with an opportunity to work with one of the best lawyers in the field. However, her mentorship ends up being more than he was expecting and he finds himself wondering if it was such a great opportuity after all.
This is a really cool story! I like how much you focus on the size difference between Ben and Kay.
And I also like how Kay seems to show her more playful side as she spends more time with Ben.
Keep up the good work!
In the future, not much has changed; just the fact that women now rule the world and men are all less than an inch tall. In this series, we focus on the wacky adventures of Devon and Desmond Smalls, Co-CEOs of In the Shoes of Giants (ITSOG). They are determined to become the best sports journalists in the world, no matter the cost.
Much like the case I previously stated regarding the lack of giantesses in certain roles, I also found there to be a lack in the amount of giantess basketball players stories. This, like the case with giantess construction workers, struck me as odd. While I do see some validity in the stereotype that WNBA players look like pitbulls (no offense to basketball players...or pitbulls), I have, throughout my life, come across a large number of ballers were rather attractive. Tall, tomboyish girls who are also cute is the holy grail of my fantasies, and as such, I hope to use my RL experiences to provide the community with good stories. Enjoy!
This is a pretty great story! I like the details you include and the differences between the two brothers. Keep up the good work!
A trainer arrives a little early to her Alolan trial.
This was a nice short story. I haven't been following too many of the new characters of Sun and Moon, so it's cool that you're jumping into the new stuff.
And I liked how you described the perspectives of both characters.
Also, that would make sense if the female protag was named Moon. And if it does become true, then you can say that you called it first!
A young boy insults an old woman and is shrunk in his own home, left to survive his mother and three sisters for the weekend. Will he make it?
Pretty cool story! I like the chapter of exposition before any actual shrinking happens. And it didn't feel like it dragged on either. Keep up the good work.
George is the pet of Sarah, a college student. After being a little too disobedient he is given to Laura, Sarah's meaner friend, hopefully to straighten him out.
This is as far as I've gotten so far, but this is a really good story. You've really done a great job with the detail. And you've done a good job with the characters as well.
I'm gonna keep on reading, but what I've seen so far is awesome.
Keep it up!
Thanks man. I've read some of your stories here as well. Thanks for the review!
Jake is shrunken after only one week at college. Follow his erotic adventures as he's passed from girl to girl; some of them nicer than others...
It's basically only action after the first half of the first chapter, because I know why I'm her and I can only assume that's why you're here, so I just cut out all the bullsh(I don't think I'm allowed to swear in the bio)t and only kept what it needed to be sexy and have continuity.
Very cool story. There can never be too many college centered size stories, so I'm happy to see more of them. And your chapters are short, but filled with quality. And you also added in a bunch of different kinks, which isn't always easy.
I also like how you're keeping things fresh, by adding in things that change the status quo, allowing aware and unaware interactions.
And I also like how you include small teaser sentences at the end of chapters. Those are pretty cool.
For Chapter 12 in particular, I liked the unaware stuff. For the shrinking liquid, was that the first time it was referenced? I skimmed the other chapters a bit, so I could have missed it. But it seems like that will make things even more interesting for the next chapter.
Keep up the good work!
Jace Williams is a man with good looks, but not a lot of courage. Though he has absolutely dazzling friends that he feels grateful to have, he has crushes on each and every one of them, making his already hard social problems even worse. One day, he is visited by a sort of magical entity that wishes/curses him to be shrunken over the course of the next month or so. In that time, he'll spend at least three days with each of his lady friends, who have been magically tuned to grow more attracted to him towards him... so long as he spends a bit of time with the magical entity as well, one can't have a reward like this for free. Will Jace find true love? Or will he end up squashed before then?
This looks like it'll be a fun story. I like scenerios where things can be a bit more open ended, so I'm looking forward to what heppens in the future chapters!
Awesome. I think the second chapter is about halfway finished. So, hopefully it does the concept justice.
Kaleb wakes up at two inches all, with no memory of how the hell he got there. He quickly finds out that he is not alone in this insane new world, and delves into some very unpleasant adventures with a mysterious woman.
This story is mostly foot-related, with a couple exceptions later on.
This is a great story! You've done a great job with the unaware stuff, providing just enough detail. I also like how each chapter starts with a small reset.
I liked how you touched on how a shrunken person's body could be impacted by this kind of experience.
Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to what you do with the aware stuff moving forward.
Thanks for the review!
Annie is a shrinker.
She ran away from home to live her own life in New York city. She meets Marilyn, the woman who's got the appartment above hers.
Read The Insole Girl for reference. I would like to thank Exiguus. This is a fan fiction of what you created.
Enough said.
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This is a really cool story.
In general, I like the dynamic between Marilyn and Annie, and I'm looking forward to see how it develops. And you do a great job with writing the interactions, as they are really descriptive and engaging.
And the concept of toggleable shrinking is great, and it can really lead to some cool scenarios, since Annie has to trust others about shrinking her.
This chapter had a nice amount of extra character development, while keeping the action to a minimum, which I'm more than okay with.
Keep up the good work!
After receiving chilling news, a man readies himself for the end. However, it's the year 2089, and a quick-thinking doctor comes up with a solution. There's just one catch: he'll have to be an inch tall. How will he and his wife adjust to him suddenly being tiny?
This is a super cool story so far! It seems to be a lot gentler or at least the giantess seems to be more caring in this story. And the two mains have great chemistry, so I'm looking forward to see what kinds of size stuff happens with them.
Good luck with the story!
When Chris’s parents go on a second honeymoon during his summer vacation, they leave him in the charge of an unwelcome babysitter, and things quickly go from bad to worse when this much-abhorred sitter hatches a plan to have some fun with him...much to Chris’s dismay.
This story is based on an original idea from aow4321 on Writing.com, to whom I give full credit for the creation of most of the characters involved therein.
12/28/2023: 1 million reads and counting! 🥳 For anyone just finding this story, I want to reassure you that the main story has concluded and is complete. For those of you who have been waiting patiently for an update, I know it’s been an over a year since this story concluded, but I wanted to assure those of you who have been waiting patiently for the Giantess Shannon alternate chapter that I am planning to get back to work on it once my current story is finished. As I mentioned before, I’ve never actually written a growth story before, as it’s not something that I’m really that into, but I have been collaborating with, and taking suggestions from, several of my readers and fellow authors as to how to write such a project, and have been working to create a finished product that’s worthy of posting.
After I finish my latest project, I want to get back and finish this before jumping into my next novel, so feel free to provide any more suggestions—scenarios, interactions, etc.—that you have in your reviews. I want to create something high quality that everyone can enjoy.
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This was a really good chapter! I liked the way this alternate version went, and it'd be neat to see more like this of the other characters, if you're planning on doing that. It'd be cool to see an alternate chapter where Noreen actually gets to take care of Chris back when she originally discovers him, if you're taking suggestions for more alternate stuff.
I'm not sure if I just don't like Shannon much as a character, but the story is clearly well written, so I'm always glad when somebody else gets some time in the spotlight.
It's your story so focus on whoever you want to focus on, so please don't think I'm just complaining. I just thought it was an opinion that might not be as common.
Keep up the great work!
Great chapter!
I liked all of the different concurrent plot developments. But I really hope that Shannon gets what's coming by the time this is over. I guess I just really dislike her, or at least how she treats Chris, since the problems are almost always caused by her even if she still tries to blame him.
But I'm sure you're intending to write her that way, so you're doing a good job.
Hopefully Sue Ann actually manages to save Chris.
Keep up the great work!
I've been enjoying the past few chapters of Chris being away from Shannon, but this one has definitely been my favorite so far. All of the unaware stuff with Sue Ann has just been awesome, and I'm looking forward to what happens now that she found Chris.
Side question, but have you ever considered creating a text adventure with based on this story? You have a solid cast of characters.
Either way, take care and good luck!
A lot of things happened this chapter, but I'm glad we got more fun size interactions with Sue Ann. Based on your last review response, I think you're doing an excellent job with the role you want for her, where she isn't intentionally stimulating Chris or is even aware of it, but intentions still don't exactly matter in the end.
Personally, I would have enjoyed it if she let him do something a tad more risky, like sleeping near/on her feet. But from how Sue Ann is personality wise, it wouldn't have really felt in character. But I think doing a alternate chapter (or set of chapters) where Sue Ann allows Chris to live out his fantasies with her would be quite enjoyable to read. I'm not sure what your plan is yet for the next alternate chapter, bit I think a Sue Ann focus would be a great idea.
But I think you did a great job with the relationship between Rachel and Chris, and I could see her wanting him to shrink more frequently in their real life too.
And I'm probably still in the minority where I do not like Shannon, but I guess that means you wrote a good antagonist. So I hope Chris is just having a nightmare with the ending of the chapter.
If you have no interest in exploring any alternate stuff with Sue Ann and Chris, then I'd be willing to write and give it a shot. If you don't mind and don't already have plans for it.
Looking forward to the next chapter and what ever alternate stuff you have planned next!
Hospitals are a hotspot of strange body conditions. For Adam, was once a normal person content with his office job in the hospital’s HR department, this wasn’t a big concern. Each day he would flirt with the girl down the hall, fantasize about his overpowering boss, smile at the groups of cute nurses that passed him by. But one little sniff and reality, for him and everyone else affected, changes.
I really like how this chapter and the previous one show off the different perspectives of the same chain of events. Everything was highly detailed too. I do hope that there are more extended interactions with bare or socked feet in the future, but you're still doing a great job.
Keep up the good work!
Jacob is paired with Sara to complete a math assignment. It's rather mundane and boring until he notices that she has a special machine in her house. A shrinking machine that was rumoured to be in development. Jacob suddenly wonders if his biggest fantasy could come true?
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This has been really great so far, and the introduction of the 2 new characters makes things even better. I like how Sara seems to be growing into a wingman character for Jacob.
Looks like the next chapter will be very interesting.
Take care and good job!
Fit girls in leggings tease and torture ant-size men.
My first story after lurking for a while. Indulging some, let's say, particular fantasies of mine. Hope it's somewhat enjoyable for folks...
This is a great story. Sarah is a fun character and has a kinda playful cruel vibe to her, which is enjoyable to read. I also like that she can manipulate sizes. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
Keep up the nice work!
Thanks! I'm glad that came across.
I wasn't sure about continuing, but it could be fun to follow her home...