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Date: July 17 2016 Title: Chapter 1: A Shrinking Game: The Gift

I loved this story. The idea of the card game interwoven with the shrinking elements was amazing! If this is your style of writing then I can not wait to read more of the storiess that you write!

While there are some elements I'd love to see such as more use of toys, perhaps even another giant in the picture, I think what you have written here was exceptional and it was a pleasure to read. I think it would be very interesting to see more stories using the same card game!