Penname: Divediveburners [Contact] Real name: Alan Smithee
Member Since: May 02 2016
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am a 400 foot tall purple platypus bear with pink hair and silver wings. Therefore and thusly, I require that those of the female subsection be of great stature.

Discord is back on the menu, I'm BoschBasher#0623, Divediveburners on the giantessworld discord. Best way to get in touch with me

If not, try the deviantart or the email.


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Summary:

Micha is planning on proposing to his longtime girlfriend, Juni. A nerve wracking endeavor for anyone, and even more so when you barely measure up to her ankle. Mix-sized couples were still a bit taboo, but her gentle and playful nature washed away his concerns. And despite their physical differences, they’re just like any other couple, they share romantic moments, the occasional fight, and even a fair share of teasing. 


Their relationship was flawless– well except for one tiny detail: she had a bad habit of torturing tinies behind his back. 


But nobody’s perfect, and what he doesn’t know can’t hurt him. They should stick together for better or for worse… right?



Categories: Butt, Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30341 Read Count: 38419
[Report This] Published: July 18 2022 Updated: July 10 2023
Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed
Date: August 04 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three, Hell

Knowing the premise before I dived (heh, get it?) in, I had an uncomfortable sense of dread, even as Micha and Juni were snarking it up with one another. You're pretty good at bouncing dialogue between our main couple. 

Depicting giantess scenes tends to be tough, since it's hard to get a reference and sense of scale, but you've done that in a rather clear and concise way. From the opening, where Micha is lying on the bed, you were able to set up the size difference very quickly. 

Even in the heavenly chapter "his Angel", when one Mini was cussing Juni off, even though nothing dark was hinted at, you managed to make it a tense scene. Maybe because, as I've mentioned before, I knew what kind of story this would be, but you let the scene play out, instead of trying to let people know of Juni's dark side. With the third chapter added, it makes the context that much more terrifying.

I suppose it's inevitable that Micha and Juni are set for conflict. It does appear, when Juni was getting ready for her date with Micha in ch 3, that she does recognize this disparity in her thinking. Looking forward to see how this plays out.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review! I’m so happy to hear that you gave it a try. The opening scene had to be one of my favorites to write. It was a nice change of pace to do things from a tiny perspective. Also I’m glad chapter 3 added some depth to previous ones. More conflict, good times, and classic size shenanigans are definitely on the horizon. I hope you continue to swim on :)

Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five, Above & Below

Looks like we're getting some escalation, as Juni's two sides are being brought together. I like how some of her darker nature slipped out and was picked up by Micha, when she was rather dismissive of the mini walk paths. I suppose this is foreshadowing something, a mounting confrontation. Still, it's nice to see that she's still sweet and caring towards her boyfriend, enough to defend him from unwanted aggression.

Also, really like the May character, and from the looks of it, we'll be seeing her again. It's just me, I like the sporty, professional archetype. She probably could use a Mini companion.

Look forward to more.



Author's Response:

mwahaha it's alll coming together... 

I just realized this is the first chapter where all of the main characters are in the same space lol. But yes, I'm so excited to show you where we're heading. It'll be a ride for sure. Also you are definitely not alone about May, it's a fav type of mine too! Thanks so much for the review! 


A Monstrous Mate by Viper07 Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A young fisherman swims out into the open ocean in the hopes of finding the woman of his dreams. And how howdy does he.


Categories: Giantess, Couples, Mouth Play, Muscle
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5229 Read Count: 5292
[Report This] Published: July 22 2022 Updated: July 22 2022
Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22 2022 Title: Chapter 1: A Monstrous Mate

I shall stake my claim in "being there" during the ... uh ... brainstorming sessions on the Discord.

Gilah is majestically portrayed in her full glory. It's absolutely mind-blowing that Jason isn't even taller than her eyes. He must be able to fit on a finger of hers! You've really lavished this shark girl with powerful descriptors, giving us not just a sense of scale, but the sheer amount of might just at her fingertips. She's a force of nature alright.

Jason works rather well as the tiny. He's thoughtful, yet daring all the same. Indeed, he's scored the biggest catch of them all.

Perhaps the best moment of the story was when Gilah revealed that she was dead set on making Jason her mate. It's abs-olutely adorable seeing this Godzilla-tier shark girl get some romantic fluster.

My only gripe is, I'd aim for some more six-pack action, but that's more in the realm of personal taste. For a story based around some messing around in Discord, this turned out far better than I could have even imagined. Heck, even without that context, this is one of the best stories I've read recently.

Abduction by Greenanon Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Forty five years ago the Zetan Empire invaded earth, the green skinned amazons of their space fleet terrorized the people of earth with their shrink rays, crushing and enslaving the populace in a devastating war. Things seemed lost for humanity, when another alien species attacked, intent on wiping out both humanity and its would-be conquerors. Forced into a shaky alliance, the humans and Zetans managed to turn the tide and survive. In the present the alliance persists, the tireless work of Zetan and Human leaders who know that without the other, each race is doomed. That said, many humans are still holding a grudge, and it seems far too many Zetans would like to shrink humans back into their "proper place."

This delicate balance is thrown into chaos when a headstrong Zetan princess decides she's going to shrink a human and take him as a pet, alliances and treaties be damned.

COMPLETE


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Abduction
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91467 Read Count: 81911
[Report This] Published: July 22 2022 Updated: August 07 2022
Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07 2022 Title: Chapter 16: Second Star to the Right (End)

There's a typo in Chapter 16. It's supposed to be "Of all the soulsIveever ... met ... her's wasthemost ............ 'uman

Speaking of Shatnerese, I think I've seen this before, but Kurt's origin of Iowa is supposed to be a reference to Kirk right (along with what I believe is the general appearance, and the phonetic similarities of the names. Gee, even in Giantessworld, Kirk is living it up with the green ladies). This means that I'll have to read the story again, but imagine Bill Shatner, speech patterns and all, as Kurt. "No Nea! I .... don'twannabeunderyour ...... feet".

And how about that story! It turned out as good as I was hoping it to be. I do agree with some other reviewers, I believe we could have spent a chapter or two with more mean green Nea, that would have made her redemption more dramatic. There's a reason why Darth Vader isn't on the good side until the end of Return of the Jedi. But, that being said, I did like the teasing interaction between her and Tiberiu- I mean Kurt. And hey, how the turn is pulled off in story is still pretty believable to me, heck, I'd change my mind if someone saved me from a life or death situation.

Joey and Telma were actually my favorite couple, Joey's the hotheaded daredevil, and Telman's the sensible one. It's fun when the giantess has to put a damper on a tiny's ambitions.

Jolene and her crew were a bundle of fun. It kind of tickles my Terran pride having greenskins taking a shine to us in that way, although we all don't look and act like Clint Eastwood (my jaw would hurt from all that clinching). I have a feeling Jolene's last name was an obvious reference to something (red dead redemption?), but it went over my head I think. It would have been fun, with an evil Nea, having Jolene giving her just desserts which starts her redemption, but overall, her character was a huge boon to the story.

Heck, there's a lot more to cover, I tend to like to sandwich my reviews when it comes to a longer story, one at the beginning to let people know that I'm reading them, and initial thoughts, and one at the end to summarize, but I'm rather scatterbrained in this tome. This was a fantastic entry to your repertoire, although I think I still like "We Help Each Other Get By" just a tad more. This has far more narrative flair, so I'll be returning to this no doubt. 



Author's Response:

Yeah I think the people who wanted a more prolonged Nea redemption arc are right, but live and learn I guess, glad the story held up overall.

There are a ton of Star Trek references throughout this thing, I imagine Kurt as a little more shaggy that James T. Kirk if that makes sense, like messier hair maybe, but overall the appearance isn't too far off, though I don't imagine him speaking with the long reflective pauses of classic Shatner. In action and character Kurt's a little closer to pulp era sci fi heroes than he is to Star Trek types though.

Jolene on the other hand is more of a Star Wars or Firefly type character, the bounty hunting cowgirl in space. Obviously the attire and attitude are very reminiscent of the old west. Her last name isn't a Red Dead reference but rather to the Masterson brothers of the old west, the most famous of which was Bartholomew "Bat" Masterson, a contemporary of Wyatt Earp and Doc Holiday. You can take another reference from the fact that she names her colony New Tombstone, after Tombstone, Arizona where many of the old west's famous figures, Masterson included, ended up at one point or another. It's almost certain that Jolene's new planet will become a similar hotbed of gambling and rowdyness, she can do whatever she wants out there after all.

Anyways any other thoughts you've got on it I'd love to read, I'm pretty happy with how this story turned out overall and I'm glad people liked it.

Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed
Date: July 24 2022 Title: Chapter 2: The Rogue Princess

This, this may be your masterpiece.

Welcome to Hell was rather fun. I was alright with One-Year Lease. The witch story got a few laughs. But this story is going to get me refreshing the "Most Recent" section of the site everyday. "We help each other get by" has stood the test of time as my favorite of yours, but this story right here may exceed it.

I most definitely appreciate that this is more focused narratively than "The Conquest of Earth." Heck, it even has some of the same archetypes, with the human diplomat, the rugged, rural main character, and a domineering, somewhat condescending race. The Zentans appear to be an amalgamation of the Alemari and the Ghalans, combining both the conquering warlike tendency, with the "make humans pets" belief.

The crux of this, is that Kurt hates Zentans, and Nea wishes to establish dominion over the humans. You've set these two opposing viewpoints on a collision course, with both heading at full speed. I think this is a more compelling conflict than "One year lease" even though that was played out as more as a light-hearted Tom and Jerry dynamic. Unlike Eva, Nea is completely all-in her beliefs, while I felt Eva's were a bit contrived. Perhaps the reason is that Nea defies the authority in her life, her mother's, while Eva tried appealing to the authority in her life, Amber.

Anyways, I look forward to seeing how this will develop.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're liking it so far. Welcome to Hell and Landlady is a Witch were both intended to be pretty silly stories more about fun and having a laugh than the drama. We Help Each Other Get By is a more dramatic piece but still a relatively calm slice of life type story. I think I've mentioned that when I was brainstorming this one I thought of a Conquest of Earth spinoff, but that universe is just too lighthearted for this kind of story so I decided to start one from scratch. Obviously I like rural main characters, I've got a few floating around. The diplomats I thought would provide some nice framing as well as a look into a happier Zetan-Human relationship.

Glad you're liking it so far, this one should be fun!

Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06 2022 Title: Chapter 15: Fire in the Sky

Apparently, mankind was this super duper spacefaring race that knocked heads with the Cephalo many moons ago? Rather interesting, is that going to be extrapolated on, or is that another mystery?

Speaking of the Cephalo's, they're a fantastic antagonist. Every word of dialogue that drips from their orifices oozes pure diabolic intent. They're straight up, your most terrifying villain, and showing conflict with them justifies the alliance Mankind made with the Zetans.

Also, congratulations on getting the featured spots! Now we can all enjoy some good 'ol Greenanon stories without having to search author names or sift through our favorites.



Author's Response:

Yeah for this one I wanted a villain that wasn't fun, or sexy, I wanted something terrifying and repugnant, something that hopefully makes the reader's skin crawl as much as it does the main characters.

Red by newguy31311 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

The story of a young man desperate to be closer to his crush, whether she knows it or not.

This is being done as a commission. 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Object, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave, Unaware, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8911 Read Count: 31991
[Report This] Published: August 04 2022 Updated: February 19 2024
Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed
Date: August 06 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Object stories aren't my forte, but this one may turn out to be special. Due to to the title and some of the descriptors, I believe I know what our main character will be transforming into.

I really enjoy the scholarly male and sporty female pairing, or at least, interacting. Katelyn certainly appears tough as nails, especially with how she handles Kyle, no wonder the MC has a crush on her. I look forward to seeing how this develops.

Summary:

Vann is an adventurer, or he'd like to be, he doesn't have much in the way of strength, and despite years of trying he doesn't have any magical talent either. Desperate, he makes a plea to the divines, and finds his way to a lost temple where a forgotten goddess is willing to raise him up as her champion, granting him immense power. The catch? Well, she's the goddess of Female Domination, and the rituals and acts she demands in exchange for her blessings can be quite... interesting, as can her punishments for disobedience. Luckily Vann has his friend Tyra, herself a lady knight and experienced adventurer, to help him navigate things, and she's quite eager to make sure he performs those rituals correctly...

A comedic fantasy story about a mage in the service of a femdom goddess fond of size changing, and the adventures he has along the way.


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Muscle, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59649 Read Count: 54030
[Report This] Published: August 10 2022 Updated: September 15 2022
Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05 2022 Title: Chapter 8: The Mistress

I've been following this one, but nary left a review. I'm going to fix that. This is a real bundle of fun. There's a bit of everything, lore, jokes and of course, the good stuff, in each chapter. It's a real fast, packed story, no chapters are spent just travelling, and very little wasted time. 

Eletha is wonderfully proud and arrogant, Chadwick is an absolute bro, Rumana's real cute with him, and a bundle of dwarvin fun. Tyra is another fun, rough and tumble tomboy, among my favorites in here, and Vann, our main man, has a heart of iron, not to mention, a prickly sense of humor.

Zenovia turned out to be a very likable character. She warmed up to Vann rather quickly, but for a rational cause, because he seemed decently devoted to her. I have to confess, however, my favorite character in here is Razita, but that's just because I have an eye for tall, muscular orc girls. "Humie" is the cherry on top.

You finest moment was Vann striking Carlotta: 

“My timing isn’t great,” Vann called, “but I hope the joke landed.”

I look forward to the finale.



Author's Response:

We've got a few more chapters yet but we are moving into the final act. As I've said this story is in the style of a DnD campaign, so a lot gets packed in even as the party is on the move.

Vann, like a lot of my protagonists, accepts that he's dealing with the world from a position of weakness, but that doesn't mean he himself is a weakling or the sort to just roll over and die. In the face of someone insulting him and his goddess? Yeah you'd better be ready to fight.

While Vann spends a lot of time with various girls in this obviously Tyra is the endgame pairing so to speak, the rough and tumble tomboy childhood friend who is otherwise caring and genuinely loves him.

If you like orcs (or green women in general) who are haughty and like shrinking humans I guess I'm one of the go-tos haha. Yeah I love "humie" as a general term for humans whenever orcs (or Zetans) want to be a little demeaning.

Fathomless by Kardo, Viper07 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

All myths have some basis in fact, and the origin of a utopian underwater civilization is a story of legend.


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Eldritch Sweethearts
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2809 Read Count: 2646
[Report This] Published: August 17 2022 Updated: August 17 2022
Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Fall of Atlantea

Thalassa is a most massive monstrosity. She is also, apparently, rather unaware, or indifferent to the devastation she causes. Scenes where you portrayed sailors dying by suffocating on sticky substance, or getting caught in between her tentacles and ship hulls really sell how puny human life really is to her. At the same time, she is portrayed as rather fascinated with civilization herself, with how mankind can construct and build (relative) wonders. It's a fun paradox with her that you set up.

I can't imagine everyone surviving the journey to her lair, considering where she ... stored ... some of the people. It would be interesting to see how she presides over the now lost city of Atlantea. Will she micromanage? Will she become terrible? Indifferent? Careless? Will she take her fascination with male seamen too far (giggity)? I do believe this oneshot is due for a continuation ...

... once Deliverance is completed.



Author's Response:

It was really fun writing from her otherworldly perspective! Thalassa views humans sort of the same way a normal person would view an ant colony, so when she tries to make her own collection she isn’t too devastated when a lot die in the process or when their civilization is broken apart for her own amusement in her lair.


And we will most definitely see a continuation of Atlantea at some point! It’s a fun world with lots of potential interactions to explore as Thalassa ‘acquaints’ herself with the little ones ;)

Summary:

Through great trial and effort!
And continued talk of bringing them back...
Gilah and Jason return. The love story between a mundane human and his titanic monstrous girlfriend continues. This time, however, they're not alone. Gilah isn't the only horror in the deep. And really, how far do the Depths in which she lives actually go? Surely there must be an end, right? Otherwise, there's no telling what sort of monstrosities might be lurking beyond the gaze of man. 


-Love in the Depths has now been completed-


Categories: Adventure, Couples, Crush, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play, Muscle, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Eldritch Sweethearts
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72635 Read Count: 24800
[Report This] Published: August 18 2022 Updated: March 24 2023
Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed
Date: September 29 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Demons of the Past

Disclaimer: I don't know this man at all, he just babbles on about shark waifus, then says "good idea Dive!" while he plasters my name in association with this monstrosity. It's also hard to type this while being tied to a chair.

But with that out of the way, I might as well review the sequel to "A Monstrous Mate." Gilah is as glorious as she was in the previous tale. The contrast between her monstrous power, and her care and tenderness towards Jason is the most compelling part of her character. 

Cathay ... is a piece of work, that's all I'll say about her.

This latest installment was indeed a doozy. Gilah most certainly takes after the Klingons, or the Vikings, seeing battle as a purifying ritual. Going up against all those monsters from all corners of the universe is quite a feat ... I wonder what cosmic horrors she could have encountered... 
The bloody imagery, and Gilah's bloodlust in the first part of this chapter is portrayed clear as crystal, and it is glorious. Bursting through the head of a shinigami evokes quite the image, I must say.

The scene with Jason was a much needed cool down, although I believe a shorter answer to Gilah's burning, "Am I a monster?" question would have done the trick. The paragraph he exposits felt like a bit too ... expositiony, it kind of took me out of the flow of the story. 

But that's my only nitpick, I look forward to what will happen next. And please let me go, I have a family.

Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29 2023 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12, The New Age

Well well well, I may not have read your flagship Alpha-Beta story, so I don't know what goes on in that, but you can write a ... uh ... "Tango" scene quite well. Not so explicit that it's disgusting and voyeuristic, but also not so symbolic and esoteric, we had to open up some Freud to decode when Tab J enters Slot G.

Overall an intriguing read that all started from simple lads wondering what having a sea-based waifu with sharp teeth as a giantess would pan out. And now, all us denizens are having to write Tolkien-length appendixes about the trillion-year history of our realms, and which action figure has the mega-ultra-super-saiyan-sharingan-devil fruit to beat the other. So thank you for the reality that anon, Uber, myself, and Kardo when he gets out of his funk, will be chained to this series for as long as Cathay lives. Thank you Viper, for forcing us to give up our dreams for the never-ending trauma machine.
Also, Mumen rider can totally solo Cathay.



Author's Response:

I don't think I even have a scene quite like the 'tango' here. At least nothing as refined (for lack of a better word cause my brain is the square). 

It was a fun story to write, one which I'm looking forward to continuing. Let this be a proper demonstration of the power of peer pressure and eldritch waifus, Comrade. The engine of trauma will never sleep, and now neither will any of us Eldritch Sweetheart writers. Prepare thineself for now we serve only the eldritch!

Mumen Rider may best Cathay, but can she outshine Valerie?!?!

Summary:

Henry was in a rough place. Forced into a pirate crew, he encounters a creature of the deep when she’s captured in their net. Wishing to set her free, Henry and rest of the pirates are woefully unaware that there’s another individual who wishes to see the creature go free, and she’s not going to show mercy. 

Who would’ve guessed that gigantic axolotl humanoids have strong familial bonds?


Warning: There is some heavy violence and gore ahead, so either batten down the hatches and brace for the storm; or turn back now! 

Created from several conversations with people on the giantessworld discord. 


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Gentle, Mouth Play, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: Eldritch Sweethearts
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24964 Read Count: 16179
[Report This] Published: September 02 2022 Updated: August 13 2023
Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed
Date: September 04 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Returning the Favor

Dang, the mother is as overwhelming as can be! Clutching that ship in the palm of her hand, you'd have to imagine the crew were instilled with a sense of hopelessness. Heck, she's kind of like a final boss, where on the platform of the monster's hand, you have to fight smaller creatures.

The daughter beginning the carnage was as bloody as promised. You gave us nice, quick yet vivid images of men being eaten like candy bars as she goes through them.

A sea creature transporting their loved ones via mouth sounds very familiar eh? Like something something shark-girl stuff.

Look forward to all the fluff, after that absolute bloodbath. Gib me the gentle stuff nao!

Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed
Date: September 14 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Doing The Right Thing

You shall leave him as you left me, as you left her, marooned for all eternity, at the center of a wrecked island, buried alive...

But wrathful references aside, this is a most special chapter you've presented. The conflicting attitude between Ira (DIES*IRAE) and Abyssus is put in a clear limelight. One could only wonder what would soften Ira's attitude towards Henry, although a lot might depend on her daughter's reaction.

Wonderful imagery portrayed when Henry picked through her teeth. I was, however, expecting something more horrifying, although Lucifer's boot with his foot still inside was quite explicit.

Kind of cute that these axolotl's are unfamiliar with the concept of cooking ,content to tear through their prey raw and unprocessed. Perhaps a campfire date will woo Abyssus even more. And speaking of cute, Abyssus's adorable attributes, particularly from her excited, enthusiastic guide around the island, contrasts most deliciously with her nonchalance over the massacre that had erupted the previous chapter.

Ripe with anticipation for continuation, although I suspect some black powder might be getting in the way of that.

Mobula by Ubersalamander Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

An old sailor recounts his tale of the giant manta-goddess Mobula.

Might add more some day.


My addition to the Eldritch Sweethearts.


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Eldritch Sweethearts
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1660 Read Count: 1113
[Report This] Published: September 21 2022 Updated: September 21 2022
Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Old Salt's Tale

I'm Mobuling out how good it is, you should get a Mobullion bucks just for writing this.

Really like the writing style on this one, you're able to capture that old-timey, yet timeless feet that I tend to gravitate towards. Michael Mobula is one big lady, a ship the size of a coin? And the ending ... wonder what she has in store for the bar, and the bois inside.

Rated 1/10 because I'm coping and seething that you penned the giantess manta before I did.



Author's Response:

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Summary:

An officer is given a new position to be an assistant. He finds himself under the command of a towering hundred-foot-tall woman blessed with ungodly brawn thanks to a new serum designed to make super soldiers.


Categories: Butt, Giantess, Crush, Muscle, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14851 Read Count: 17045
[Report This] Published: October 24 2022 Updated: December 31 2022
Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

“You’re my little stress ball,” she whispered, hardly able to contain her excitement, “my dirty sweat rag, my toy, whatever I want. That's your duty as my assistant, not your fucking paperwork. How does that sound, assistant?”

That alone should net this story six stars, but I only have five to give. Emma is a whirling hurricane of emotion, and Jack is doing everything he can to stir that storm.

It appears intense emotion also causes her to grow. She appeared to be one hundred feet at the start, I'm wondering how tall she is now. This is important, because it looks like Jack's job, just got twice as hard.

Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed
Date: November 06 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Trent is a most interesting character, one that defied my expectations, just like he did with Jack. It's nice that the brass isn't just some out of touch old geezers malding at some super soldier, there's at least some competence at the elite levels, which will make this conflict interesting.

We've not seen much of the CommonWealth. It's unknown if this is a classic, "relatively good vs relatively evil" or just plain geopolitics. Jack apparently has a bone to pick with them, and, in my own theory, it's because he was once a citizen. It's possible that he, or someone close to him, ran afoul of their own elite class and paid the price. Maybe they killed his fiance, and thus, his desire to use Emma is a form of ironic revenge.

It also appears Jack is well aware of Emma's designs for him, and Trent is ever so quick to pick up on the signals. Trent does appear to have a level of scheming that Jack should watch out for.

Not the most "interesting" chapter, but certainly, the most interesting, in terms of lore. I really like how exposition was handled, it was integrated well and smoothly into the writing. Obviously, building up Emma's apparent invulnerability was a fun scene. This is one of those stories that I'm refreshing gtsworld main page for.

Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Who's this dive hoser that inspired this? Sounds like a wierdo.

Already, in just 5,000 words, you've built up yet another juggernaut to add to your collection. The reader can already grasp the wrought and ruin this titaness renders upon modern military platforms. It serves the story to see men who were once commanders of these potent weapons, now see their days of martial supremacy numbered.

Of course, ol' Jack is a gem here. He appears to be one of cool mind, and knows his priorities, but when we get further along in the chapter, his eyes start to wander, and that's where the descriptions of Emma start to heat up, implying that he has more than military applicability on his mind.

Look forward to the continuation.

Reunion by Greenanon Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Summary:

They call them Valkyries, the rare women who were exposed to an experimental gene therapy which gave them advanced physiques and the curious ability to shrink others with a thought. Miraculously the shrinking process heals injuries and disease, and seeing a Valkyrie for healing via shrinking has become a common part of life.

Carmen was a terrifying bully, making Samantha and Kyle's lives hell all through high school. After one final act of revenge, costing her a prestigious scholarship, the two forgot about their old tormentor, moving on and finding their own success in life... that is until they find themselves needing the healing touch of a Valkyrie, and find themselves at the mercy of their old enemy... Is she still carrying a grudge? Oh yeah.

A shrinking story about a tiny couple at the mercy of their old bully, this one will be darker and more serious than my other works, but I think my usual readers will still be happy with it.

COMPLETE



Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Muscle, Odor, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73899 Read Count: 58072
[Report This] Published: November 06 2022 Updated: December 13 2022
Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29 2022 Title: Chapter 11: Fugitives

My goodness, you've managed to top yourself. Of all the stories you've composed, this possesses some of the best character dynamics I've seen (with one caveat). In particular, the villain, Arisa, really drives the story and conflict in ways where I want to keep turning the page, as a matter of speaking.

I believe I've gotten a sense of the central conflict here, you've managed to tell everything about our main villain without saying anything explicit, which is a rare skill. When (or if) she and Melinda butt heads with each other again, that will reveal much that I've been waiting for.

The relationship between Carmen, Kyle and Samantha came along quite nicely, but this is where the caveat is. I do like how it took a little while for Carmen to get over her vitriol towards the two, and I really like how you portrayed such vitriol. She has all the power in the world over them to enact her vengeance, but it turns out she truly wished for something different. The recent revelation that all her friends were as depraved as she was, even encouraging her bullying (although we saw a bit of that in the first chapter) might explain as much. But, so far, I like how her transformation has been portrayed.

The uhhh, intimacy of their relationship isn't particularly my cup of tea, although that's because I tend to lean towards more ... let's say ... exclusive relationships. I wonder if you're going to play it off as Carmen's so affection-starved that she kind of latched on to the two to compensate, and in the end, she pulls back for a more platonic understanding. Still, it's one minus (for my own tastes mind you) in a sea of pluses)

I have a feeling that there are going to be parallels between Melinda and Arisa's relationship and Carmen and Kyle/Samantha's relationship, but that's because I'm actually George Lucas, and it's like poetry, it rhymes, every stanza every beat and it's so dense. This story of yours has been a very Special Edition (or addition) to your collection.



Author's Response:

Well to use the Star Wars parallels you might say that Arisu and Melinda had a very Anakin/Obi-Wan style falling out, some of Melinda's worldview and mannerisms are still there in Arisu, her twisted sense of "helping people" or her use of Melinda's favorite Latin phrase, more of that will get revealed by the end of the story.

I'm glad you liked the story overall, even if the harem or FF/m angle isn't your cup of tea. I wanted to try to write something with a bit more depth and a bit of angst, like I said at the start I wanted to go a bit more serious than my other stuff. The story is obviously building to a head, I really hope you enjoy the upcoming conclusion!

Stinktress by fosmat Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Right as Ned and Laney's relationship settles past the honeymoon phase into a pleasant duality. Laney's hygiene is somehow awful enough that it throws them totally off course. 

A slow-shrinking story about a shrinking boyfriend and his terribly messy and stinky girlfriend. 


Categories: Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Odor, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15058 Read Count: 15561
[Report This] Published: March 12 2023 Updated: June 17 2023
Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed
Date: March 29 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Power

While not the biggest fan of the "thicc" stuff, I do enjoy some odorous overtures, and you certainly describe that well. Laney's got the perfect mix of pushy mischievousness and restraint that makes her a joy when it comes to any sort of "interaction." Ned, while, he gives more more of a "everyman" impression, is still rather likable enough to root for, and you've portrayed his reaction to his condition reasonably well.

The premise does appear to resemble "Sweat and Tears," which is a very good thing, since that was an absolute gem, although Laney appears to be less of a headache to deal with than Alex, even if she smells seven ways to Sunday.



Author's Response:

Cheers!

Ned is somewhat of a straight man to Laney but I like to think he's got a bit of spunk in him. I find the shrunken reaction always hard to write, because what are you actually doing in that scenario lol, glad you enjoyed it though.

A comparison to Sweat and Tears is a huge compliment, I didn't actually have it mind when writing this but now that you mention it... the premise's do match up. Happy to pay tribute to that banger regardless. 

Knight Terrors by Pixis Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A faerie knight attends a wedding with the object of his desire, a beautiful lady elf. But after a tumble into a mug of ale, he is unknowingly swallowed by his beloved. Can he escape from her belly alive or is he destined to become one with the woman he loves?


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Entrapment, Fantasy, Gentle, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9533 Read Count: 2649
[Report This] Published: April 14 2023 Updated: April 14 2023
Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Welcome back. And what a tale to return to! Melinvar is a nice, swell little knight, and Viridia's got that nice, teasing, rough and tumble tomboyish attitude that activates the neurons. Fun little conflict you've developed with Ewan swearing revenge, but I suppose that would get resolved quickly once Mel returns to him.

I rather like detailed full tours in tandem with vore, and yours does not disappoint, the fact we got a happy ending makes it all the better. The sequence where Melinvar gets bounced around Viri's stomach walls by her hiccups was most tasteful. I suspect this was a oneshot, but I won't be disappointed if it is so, you wrapped up this tale nicely.