This is an excellent concept! I really like it so far and can't wait to see more!

I have two suggestions, one based on myself, one based on a friend (with her consent)

Mine

Name: Rick Jacobs

Gender: Male

Description: Tanned, about 6'6. Shaggy brown hair, brown eyes. Athletic build. 

Personality: Very friendly and easy going. Very playful and teasing towards his friends when he was normal sized. He used to be really popular and active in the school, now he is still well liked but...beneath a lot of people's notice. 

Likes: Body exploration, breasts, butts, insertion, sweat, being lost in hair. 

Dislikes: I'm actually okay with my OC going through nearly anything. 

Grades: Failing every class. He is in the decimal places for most of them. like .001% just enough to keep him from infinitely shrinking. I am a bit unsure how that would work, and will leave that up to you, unless you want? I was thinking that he used to be really successful then a family member got ill so he had to take an extra job to care for them (maybe his sister who is better now?) and he fell behind and fell asleep in his classes, failing and having to repeat the school year. Due to his tiny size he is still failing each class horribly and is unable to effectively learn because of his small size.

He is basically permanently tiny and micro at the school and relies ofnfriends to help him out. I was thinking that since he was athletic, he could have been friends with Tanya and Luna before he failed, maybe an upperclassman now in the same year as them? He also would have been cool with their relationship and while he found them attractive never hit on either other them. Perhaps sometimes the friends he has lose him on themselves or others? Since he is such an odd size I was wondering if it would be more difficult to kill him? For instance, someone thinks he is dead by being stepped on, but he's just adhered to a wrinkle.

Now, for my friend's character

Name: Jen Freeman

Gender: Female

Description: A pale skinned redhead with piercing emerald eyes. She is fairly tall and very curvy with a shapely rear and D cup breasts. Despite her appearance she does not have any freckles. She also likes keeping some hair down there to use to play with tinies.

Personality: Very cocky, cruel and mocking. She is a bully who has harrassed tinies over the years to the point where some are super small entirely because of her machinations. She loves playing with and taunting those smaller than her. The reason she is doing well in school is that she forces others to cheat for her in classes. 

Likes: Taunting and using her body to intimidate tinies. She especially loves focing the really small tinies to crawl around in her bush or on her nipples. She also tends to forget when she has a tiny on her. She enjoys inserting tinies into herself or her ass. She also likes taunting and swallowing them whole. She taunts tinies during and after gym by placing them on her sweating body. 

Dislikes: Feet, oddly enough. She finds having tinies in her shoes to be anoying and the sensation drives her crazy with annoyance.

Grades: Chemistry: 99% Biology: 120% (she is genuinely good at it and gets extra credit), English: 110%, Drama: 100%, Mathematics: 98%, Physical Education: 115% (the coach likes her driven personality?) Home Ec 100%, 

My friend said she is cool with being used in multiple scenarios since you were lacking for bullies. She thinks this sounds like a fun idea and would like to see how crazy you make her.

I like it! I am glad to see people using this idea more. I hope more people contribute to this universe. 

My only real critique would be that you could slow things down some. Which you did in the second chapter. That one didn't feel like it was rushing like the first. 

Good improvement!

I'm really enjoying this so far! Konosuba's one of my favorite shows and I look forward to what debacherous acts the girls get up to!

I'm also hoping to see some extreme shrinking based on that nano tag! I did love seeing Darkness get buttcrushed by Chris and can't wait for more size change

This is a very fun story. I really hope you continue it! The character is genuinly fun to read. She has a nonchalant approach to being all powerful and it makes me crave more as a reader!

Thanks for using my ideas! I really enjoyed them! In case you come up with some room in the near future in this, could you maybe do a follow up to the nipple one? Maybe she brings in a friend for some kinky sexual fun with her micro sized bf? Maybe exploring some lower regions of the two ladies?

I'm glad to see this is spun off into it's own story. Any chance she will shrink him or someone even smaller? Like mite or flea sized? She seems to REALLY get off on the power her size gives her and I can only imagine that desire increasing as things go on, especially now that she knows how to recreate the serum

This looks like a promising beginning. I can't wait to see what you have planned!

I really dig this one. You have a great talent for description. I’m surprised this has so few reviews. I did like the first title better though.

Author's Response:

Just fucking with the alphabetization of story titles; I felt like the male POV character needed a name with two syllables. Thanks for the kind words, though!

This was a lot of fun to read! I would love to see a follow up after she is unleashed to the world and see what would happen. Perhaps a group of warriors band together to try and take her down, only for her to utterly obliterate them?

I’m a huge fan of fantasy or D&D set/inspired stories and not too many of em come out. Thanks for the awesome story.

Author's Response:

Well, I am up for doing trades. If you were willing to write something for me, I could surely do a follow-up for you. 

This is a really cool concept and start to the story. Just them talking about the situation is hot. I love how casual and playful Val is about everything. I can't wait to see what you do next for it!