Just some guy on the internet... Between 18 and 25 and studying politics.
Nick is challenged to spend 4 months shrunk at his friends house without being caught. Will he make it? And what adventures will he have along the way
Nice opening! I really like the idea you had here and especially that it is an unaware challenge. Even though four months seem to me quite over the top for a challenge like this :D
Keep it on!
I try to explain the Giantess Fetish.
"We have come to a time where sex is normal. We find whatever normal is boring. We need something new." I really think you've cut to the chase there since this is in both sociology and socialpsychology the dominant opinion (Not related to the giantess fetish though). I'd agree that there's definetely a historcally contingent process behind the development of this fetish and definetely a technological one too.
On the other hand I think you're oversimplifying things a little here although you sure think into the right direction. Of course there have been a lot of important female persons impacting the world and still to be commonly known such as: Marie Curie, Margaret Thatcher, Queen Victoria, Elizabeth etc. And the gender sociology definitely is on a pathway to reveal and obliterate the, compared to the biological differences, way too high discursive social differences between man and woman. There is even a tendency to an increasing number of female politicians like Park geun-hye in South Korea, Angela Merkel in Germany and maybe even Hillary Clinton soon in the United States.
Still you're definetely right when you link the fetish to the Man's struggle with dominance while at the same time I wouldnt formulate it like "The man is tired of being dominant" since this s only putting him in a dominant position to decide he's not willing to be dominant again (Yeah sounding weird but it's true).
Furthermore there is also a fetish mostly fantasised about by men where the shrinking of women is essential as it is in some of the stories published on this very site.
I really like your grown-up, reasonable and enlightened attitude towards overcoming gender-problematics in it's countless facets like hollywood and think you have worked out a nice projection here.
There are several other projections though going in a more general ( not only F/m) direction trying to explain these kinds of fetishes by the general feeling of the individuum of being lost and insignificant in today's economic based society. I'd really like to have study's about where the concentraion of these fetishes are most frequent.
Sorry for the novel I wrote here but I really enjoyed reading and thinking about your projection :)
Nature always wins. We resisted the Plague, Ebola and many others because we stood united. However what happens when a virus divides us? When it makes us inferior in the eyes of others? This is the story of a man in a world that shrinks and how he deals to survive when his equals can crush him under their soles.
Hey I really like how your story begins and how you focus on small details. I'd really prefer the chapters to be a bit longer since it doesnt even take me half a minute to read through them :)
Great work hope you continue with it^^
A young woman keeps her playthings in a shoebox under her bed
As usual the beginning of a great little peace of literary artwork. I just admire how you manage to implement the shrinking-fiction into a coherent framework making it pretty easy for the readers imagination to visualise the scenes.
I'm looking forward to the next chapters!
Thank you for taking the time to read this story and share your thoughts. I very much appreciate your input and providing feedback.
I see you've created a hollywood blockbuster there! I can't stop reading this story with amazement.
Especially how you manage to keep the excitement going by simply implying potential risks during Josh and Julian's flight.
Keep up the great work!
Thanks for leaving another review. Now that things are picking up the story has gotten more interesting and fun to write. With the girls in the room real vs imied danger is helping to establish a great mood especially after Ham. Please continue to enjoy and offer your thoughts about this story.
Josh and his four friends have to face a dangerous adventure when a device, they wanted to use to play a prank on his older sister, suddenly malfunctions. Join Josh and his friends through their struggle to return to normal size and find out about the bakcground and the capabilities of the Equalizer.
Woops deleted a review accidentally here :D Sorry officerkc! Just wanted to correct my response
Read along and find out about how my life went from 0-100, real quick.
I really like the setup so far, although you jumped through the premises quite fast at the beginning. Keep it up ;)
Nathan is going off to college soon, leaving behind his closest friends and neighbors, the Small triplets. But they let him know that they're going to the same school as well, and he's staying with them! However, after some time he begins to wonder what their true intentions really are...
Soon Nathan, and the world, will find out.
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Interesting setup, I like the idea. Not much into the futa-business myself but can't help but agree that it's not that represented in current stories at the moment so hey why not :)
Vicki should pay some attention to what she's doing in public though or she might draw unwanted attention if this term even exists to her.
Vicki doesn't seem particularly self-conscious, does she?
