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Summary:

To him, it was a house.  To her, a light snack.  Is escape from this house of chocolate possable?


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Destruction, Entrapment, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Gamma Tau Sigma
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2173 Read Count: 5380
[Report This] Published: September 10 2020 Updated: September 10 2020
Reviewer: 87Thirty2 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 10 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cottage Confection

Great story, lovely descriptions, interesting scenario. The only reason I'm not giving it full marks is because it is marked as unaware, everything was set up as though it was unaware, and then that last paragraph reveal that she knew the whole time, this was a pretty  normal thing for her, and wasn't actually unaware really turned me off. It casts a new world order or cruel giantess context over the story that kind of made me feel tricked. I know unaware isnt everyone's cup of tea, but as someone who loves unaware vore more than nearly any other genre, and getting really excited about you (who I've followed quietly for years) doing more of this, only to have that reveal was pretty disappointing. There are so few authors who write focused unaware (not the kind where there's two paragraphs of unaware in a 20 chapter story buried in an obscure paragraph in chapter 13), and so few more who write it well, like yourself, that it just twists the knife a little more.

I know I just spent way too long complaining about something that is such a miniscule (no pun intended) part of the story, but I do love your work and have notifications turned on for when you post, so as a fan of yours, I couldn't help but mention this because it, for me, is the only red ink on an otherwise perfect unaware vore story. I'm hoping you do more like this, or really just more vore period. Thanks for all of your contributions to this community, and I hope I to you'll keep writing for us.



Author's Response:

The story has the Unaware tag because it has strong unaware elements.  Jackie never acknowledges him, there's no interaction, and he fails to get her attention no matter how hard he tries.  It is, for all intents and purposes, an unaware story.  Unaware is already a gray area as it is: is a story unaware if someone's merely acting unaware, or if they mistake the smaller person for something else, or if they actively shrink someone then lose track of them?  You could make a convincing argument either way, however I err on the side of inclusivity in these issues, because, even as you admit, it scratches the same itch.  It definitely doesn't fit as a new world order thing, since the Gammas do not determine social norms, and what they do is still forbidden, though they're good at deflecting consequences.