Penname: GalvanizedSpruce [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: May 13 2015
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Summary:

Will is an introvert, his twin sister Summer is an extrovert. Will has always been jealous of Summer's social nature, but a new device allows him to become whatever he wants and he wants to be Summer's flip flop. What could possibly go wrong?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Object, Feet, Footwear, Odor, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21852 Read Count: 99331
[Report This] Published: January 24 2015 Updated: May 20 2015
Reviewer: GalvanizedSpruce Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 13 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Triumvirate Sciences

I've never really considered myself as being interested in transformation, but this story has gone a long way in converting me. I like the dynamic between the two characters, although I feel your writing style can use a little more polishing (which could easily be honed with me writing). You're clearly very talented.

I agree with another reviewer about the protagonist being transformed into food. Keep up the great work, and thanks for a wonderful read!

Summary:

A man mysteriously wakes up on his friend's bed and copes with living with her at his new size. When she finds him, she suddenly realizes all the fun she can have with her new pet and former roommate.


Categories: Gentle, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Insertion, Odor, Scat, Slave, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6635 Read Count: 71935
[Report This] Published: May 01 2015 Updated: August 02 2015
Reviewer: GalvanizedSpruce Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 13 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You have a great writing style! When an author clearly has his or her own voice, you know there's talent involved and you clearly have it. And I have to say, the feet interactions were phenomenal! I'd love to see more of that , but frankly I'd love to see more of anything as long as it's part of this story.

 

Thanks for a great read, keep up the good work!

Apple of Her Eye by Xxana Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Anna finally agrees to let her boyfriend be shrunk.  She is hesitant, but hopes to grow into the role of his dominating giantess.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Slave, Unaware, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45692 Read Count: 394772
[Report This] Published: May 10 2015 Updated: June 03 2015
Reviewer: GalvanizedSpruce Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 13 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Please?

Your writing style is spectacular, and the content is even better. I love that you show the character development and bring some reality to the fantasy rather than just delving right into the smut.

That being said, I would love to see more mouth play and feet but mainly I just ask that you keep the story going! Thanks for a great read!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying the tales of Anna and Kal.  It's the kind words that keep the fuel burning late at night.  I appreciate it.