Reviewer: Bob Charlie Signed
January 23 2018
Chapter 10: Public
The stage is set now for Diane to begin enjoying her growth spurts and her growth in general. Diane clearly enjoys the attention that she has been receiving. Although she says that she just wants to be normal, it's obvious that other emotions are creeping in by the end of the interview, particularly in how she winked for the interview. She does seem to be genuine in her affection for her sister, and that she doesn't want to hurt anybody.
Like I said before, I think one way to go about this would be to have Diane begin to bask in the attention that she's receiving. Any sexual acts/exhibitionism on the part of Diane would be simply an act of showing off for the world. And there's going to be more and more of her to show off! She's basically become a celebrity now, and Diane's just beginning to realize that. There's going to be awkwardness associated with something like that, but Diane's fully in control now. I know that I sound creepy in pushing for more sexual content repeatedly, but it would feel like a waste to disregard the fact that Diane receives sexual pleasure from her growth. I mean that--with her growth tied to her discovery of sexual pleasure, it does seem to be an integral part of the story. In that aspect, it feels like the story's been building up to that for a while. At her size, no one can molest her. Diane's sexuality is something that the world will deal with, not the other way around. Again, I know that it may be uncomfortable for some people. But considering Samantha's observation that Diane enjoyed her growth, it feels like sexual content would fit the story more rather than the other way around. But not anything forced by anyone else... Diane knows how uncomfortable that makes her. And she barely has to do anything to stop it at her size.
The question of when her growth will ever stop appears to be of some importance as well. It's quite possible that the Sprouter could simply taper off after a while. However, it also seems like Diane could keep growing quite a bit more if this isn't true. And if she keeps receiving positive feedback, I could even see Diane "making" herself grow some, by ah.... triggering her hormone rush. Even in front of people, as a sort of demonstration.
Also I think that there's room for sexual content to be done in an almost endearing way for Diane. Almost like Sylvia, who can be pretty innocent with it, Diane can be so as well. She really is an endearing character by now. And I can't imagine Diane, as she's been written, ever deliberately hurting anybody. And I think that her accidentally hurting people could cause her to begin to regret her growth again. She really does seem like a genuinely nice person. Even if fame begins to carry her away, I can't imagine her being mean.
On the non-sexual side, it seems like Diane's likely going to be invited to a lot of events in the future. I mean like being offered cruises (if she fits on the ship) and such. She's going to become an international celebrity. This could give a lot to Samantha as well... after all, she is Diane's sister. Like I said before, Diane really is the Eighth wonder of the world now. There aren't very many sixteen foot tall girls.
I also think that taking the focus on Diane doesn't have to mean that Samantha won't follow her around some. Diane clearly deeply loves her sister. I don't think that she'll want to abandon her, no matter where she goes in life.
I know that you're busy with IRL now, but I am eagerly anticipating the release of the next chapter! You might be able to tell from the wall of text released like thirty minutes after it comes out. You've said that there's a bit more... but I think that Diane has a lot of room to grow in embracing her new status. Diane can only go up from here!Author's Response:
Thanks Bob, I recieved your email the other day and actually responded to it, so I know a tiny bit of this is from that. I have been mulling around on the sexual stuff for a while and I do want to include more (Not to an extreme scale, at least not yet if I do) but I think for me I'm using this story as a way to pace myself in this fetish. It's hard to just have someone grow and not immediatly go for all the smutty goodness that we see in this fetish right off the bat. I do love stories like that a lot, but I don't feel like for what I've written its appropriate. I'd love for it to feel more naturl, and as I've paced it right now I think it'd be quite odd for Diane to suddenly want to do all of these things. I would love to go through with almost anything you just wrote in this review, like how innocent she is and how her size can affect her say. It's clear that even though she's much bigger, Samantha wears the pants in their relationship. I'd like to spend a few chapters just having Diane adjusting to her new life before external factors start to influence her wanting to grow. The key is since the first spurt I haven't had a reason for her to want to get any bigger, a reluctance I haven't seen in a long time on this site. I feel like a lot of Giantesses are too willing unless they had no choice, which is the opposite of the boat that I think a character like Diane belongs in. Does that kind of make sense I suppose?
Anyways though, I really love your feedback (And your new chapter) and I'm glad you really enjoyed this chapter. I especially do want to incorporate a few of the ideas you suggested to me in your email, I think it would be super cute and have an idea of how I'm going to incorporate them!