Reviewer: Alpha Signed
Date: August 10 2023
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 12 - Who Is Jacob?
This is a nice turn and refreshing to switch to another portion
of the story. Blaire is such a sleuth. Searching into all the missing person
cases in Valdez. For a small town of 3,900+ 20 missing persons should be more
alarming to the police. For the authorities to be this complacent you would
think maybe there could be a connection between the police and this nefarious organization.
Blaire’s, mind is baffled, and she is now wondering who the
man is she shared a bed with. The unease she must be feeling. It will be
interesting to see how Jacob tries to turn this around. Will Blaire end up as a
victim as well in this saga? Time will tell.
Back to Jacob, Avaramix and Deita very interesting
conversation between Avaramix and Jacob concerning everything going on in
Valdez and the condition of Deita. Her wounds are severe. Hearing that she may have
lost the will to live is interesting. The betrayal of Jinshin causing this in
an intriguing concept.
I love how you have each character have their own agenda
that sometimes conflicts with the others. It is wise for Jacob to question his position
in the organization and prepare for the worse scenario.
Okay, that was an exceptionally unexpected turn. Blaire is
the contact the caller set up. I am at a loss for words but now my interest is
even more peaked. There will be a lot of questions and answers Blaire and
Jinshin will be going through with each other. WOW! Great job at throwing this
curve ball out of nowhere.
Wow OMG her father knew all along where she was at! At the
realization here chills went up my spine amazing! I am not normally at a loss for
words but OMG!
Great way to end this chapter and keeping the interest level peaked! Very interesting how Blaire's family is linked with Gullivette.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Who ever said Blaires father was linked to Gullivette? ;)
In regards to Blaires character, she's been wholly out of the scene and basically on the sidelines without a clue as to what was happening around her until now...
That being said, as we reach the awaited reunion of Anna and Jacob, I am very excited to start unveiling the final curveballs as I start tying everything together at the start of volume III.
Needless to say, we are almost at the end of volume II. There will be one more bonus chapter this volume featuring the poll results I've had going for the last several chapters.
As for Blaire, that poor and innocent woman, will Jinshin be gentle with her? Hehehe.