Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: April 09 2017
Title: Chapter 1: Enter Haile
So now we see Haile at a vulnerable state. Can't say I feel bad for her after all the carnage this cute/sexy monster has caused. Strange how I actually said, "Good for you! Ya messed with the wrong world!" But at the same time my macrophilia contradicts and says, "this is so so wrong, but Haile is so so hot!" Blast you for making me feel like this! And German, your not alone. I'm a weird fucker too -_- Anyways, another great chapter. I agree with you that this may have been your best one yet. Descriptions were on top, you did a lot of explaining about Haile's bloody path to her career as an "entertainer," we meet another character, (Sarah) and overall this was a really lengthy chapter. Ten stars cuz you know my... situation with my rating already lol
Author's Response:
Huzzah! Thanks for the ghost stars, I sincerely appreciate them! ^.^ It's always good to know when someone likes your work.
I don't go in for the whole weird designation, after all, we're all here aren't we! Ho ho. I'm glad you liked the chapter! I think it's a sign of a good author being able to elicit such a wildly varying response from their readers (at least, that's what I feel about 'good authors' I follow, anyway, haha). Yes, Haile's a cute, sexy monster that causes such massive wide spread death and destruction and, oh no, she's really only just human after all and she bleeds just as easily as somoene she rips apart with her bare hands. It's quite a thing to think about.
I wish I could do more lengthy chapters, 10k words per chapter would be ideal; but sometimes I just don't have the content in my head. Oh well, we'll see as we go. I am thinking I'm going to like writing Part Two of this story a lot. :D
--HK