Just a writer who enjoys a bit of GTS material in stories. Nothing particularly interesting about me. Honestly I prefer to let my characters and writing speak instead. I simply write whenever a whim seizes me, doesn't usually matter what it is.
A request: A friend's sorceress character is disturbed by a peasant girl seeking to learn under her tutelage. The Sorceress, known as Ember takes issue with that as she was woke up to answer the door
Sad that this doesn't have more reviews. Stumbled across it while thumbing through a few stories in your library.
Your discriptions are rather on point and generally enjoyable. That said would have preferred if it was a little bit longer. Could easily see a continuation from something like this. Could just stem from me enjoying longer things. For what it was it was fairly enjoyable.
An evolutionary rift causes millions of seemingly ordinary people to decrease in size. Stripped of far more than the right to be called “human,” the victims will find themselves in a very large world of hurt, or maybe just in a very large shoe.
Well, sad to see this end but it was certainly a fun ride! I am pleased there was a happy ending for the last one, as much as I enjoy dark cruelty fluffier bits are also satisfying in their own way. Would be interesting to see a return to the setting eventually.
Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Hey, thanks. Certainly there will be a majority of dark cruelty in future stories; I just decided a little fluffiness was needed to give the ending a twist here. Appreciate you reading.
One day while venturing into the woods, a group of young men get whisked away by a witch. What fate awaits them?
A rather deliciously diabolical tale of woe and misery. Very festive considering the holiday. My favorite bit is her little song, added that extra bit of playful terror I do so enjoy in these types of stories.
Two young men find themselves suddenly and mysteriously shrunken on a trail in a local park. With the various dangers in the park, they embark on a trek to find safety, or to get help from anyone who may see them.
Howdy, long time viewer of yours. I've been meaning to comment on one of your stories for a while now. I have to say theres pretty much no one on this site who does short stories quite as well as you do. At least in my opinion. I've enjoyed quite a number of them, though I'll admit "A Rough Night With Daphne" is probably my favorite of yours.
As to this one, comes with what I've come to expect from you. Flowing dialogue and believable interaction with the world around them. Your descriptions frankly have me a little jealous as mine typically come off as dragging on and a bit long winded. Yours are concise and still manage to paint an excellent picture.
I like seeing the 'shrinking' or 'shrunken' aspect used moreso than straight up macro so your stuff is typically right up my alley you might say.
I will say to whomever is thinking about reading you should most certainly give it a go. Can't recommend Black Neptune and his works highly enough.
Oh wow. Thank you for the kind words and recommendation!
My writing has definitely improved since I started writing macro fiction, but I still have a ways to go, especially when I read other stories that are much better-written than what I'm currently capable of.
But I'm happy that you enjoyed this story and my other ones. I'll strive to make future stories I come up with equally if not more enjoyable. :)
The main girls of KonoSuba are invited by a mysterious person to come visit for fun, games and party favors!
As one that greatly enjoys Konosuba, decent fanfiction, and games of chance this story has very much tickled my fancy. I've got to say I agree with your response on the previous, never enough Aqua bullying. Ever. I'll be following this one for a bit I think.
Cheers
Thank you very much! I'm thrilled to hear I was able to hit so many points with you. Oh, Aqua still has two more rounds to get through, and let's just say she is in for a rough time :) I look forward to hearing from you again in the future.
Multisize is a rather underused bit if you ask me so its nice to see it here. As for character wise I know the hardest part of these types pf stories is keeping to the original personalities. Thus far I'd say you've done a good job of that, a bit of rigidness here or there but otherwise nothing that takes me out. Gives me a few ideas of things to write actually so my thanks haha.
I'm happy to hear your praise, thank you very much. Without sufficent planning and awareness it can be a hassle to keep track of who is what size, but it is rewarding so long as it works. That I'm also able to keep all the character true to their source material is also nice to hear, if I were to stray too far from their established personalities it would defeat the purpose of using them.
But the best praise of all is that I have inspired you to write yourself. I wouldn't even be writing my own stories if not for the works of users like Duggernaut, Silent-One, newschool2626 and many others. Again, thank you, happy reading and good luck with whatever you write!
With the blessing of Uru, I present a fanfiction set in the amazing world of 'Size Matters', the game Uru is currently developing.
Set early in the game, the main characters, Yushia the Hero and Megumi the Goddess, catch the attention of a giant shopkeeper who is willing to treat them as customers... so long as they pay for her services.
Slight spoiler alert for story elements but nothing too serious.
Right, also disclaimer: The character and setting of this story belong to Uru. I do not own them.
Well, this made me load up Size Matters again so if the intention was to evoke the game you very much succeeded. I must say, I haven't been following your stuff for all that long but you're quite an evocative writer. You borrowed a bit from the original source material but you took it in a rather fun direction the game did not so was well worth it.
Also you forgot the most important part.
GAME OVER
Thank you very much, I did want more people to play and support the game, but this is also just a little route I thought would have been fun to see in the game as well. I intentionally wanted the dialogue in the shop to be the same, and thus played through that scene to get the conversation.
Also, I strive for powerful imagery in my stories, so thank you as well for such high praise. But you are right, I did forget and shall fix it now.
A story inspired and set in the same universe as "Make America Big Again" by Asterisk, Inwiththebooks although probably not a one to one correlation.
WARNING: This is a macrophilia fetish story, but does have the dressing of a political satire to help drive the narrative. As such, there will be concepts that could be construed as political commentary. If this concept or the idea of a narrative which might be in conflict with your own world view makes you uncomfortable, turn back.
WARNING: This story is a spawn of my fucked up twisted brain; the story is sadistic, gory, and brutal, as a warning, and if you question your constition, probably not for you. If these concepts bother you, turn back.
Ok, now that's out of the way...
The story picks up in media res - after men have been reduced to Tinies some women form an underground railroad of sorts in an attempt to smuggle tinies away from harsh owners to New Zealand - a place where tinies have normal rights and there is an attempt to reverse the process.
Our protaganist - mark - is about to start his most dangerous part of this journey yet - getting through the airport. He's about an inch tall.
As the name implies, foot heavy themes.
You know, I had never actually thought of like an underground railroad when we were brainstorming through Make America Great Again, but definitely makes sense in the context of the world. After all, pretty sure other countries out there might have decided on the not so kinky life haha. You portrayed an aspect of that world pretty damn well. You have my compliments and I'm happy that little world we made could inspire you to write something!
Hey thanks man. Your work really inspired me and I found it oddly relevant to todays era - the concept fascinated me.
Glad you liked it!
At the turn of the 22nd century, a woman enhances herself with nanotechnology to enjoy herself at the expense of the humanity she evolves beyond.
This story is quite long at over 27,000 words, so I tried breaking it into chapters for ease of reading. On deviantart it's a pdf, and on giantessworld uses the built in chapter system. The story revolves around a woman who's size and powers are based on nanites, and explores what that could entail. This story contains feet, stirrup leggings, vore, digestion, lewdness, cruelty, god-like-powers and growth as well as stuff like absorption, nano-swarm-vore and transformations. It also features a vast range of sizes from same-size bullying all the way up to terra-scale combat. This story was written in just under a week and a half. Comments and constructive criticism are more than welcome!
DISCLAIMER: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Friend of mine forwarded this to me and said this was the most Books story he'd read in terms of taste, moreso than the stuff I myself write so was enough to pique my curiosity. I can safely say he was correct, this is indeed very much in line with my tastes.
I'm quite impressed with the creative use of nanomachines as well as it honestly being less of a size story and more a power fantasy with size inside of it. The size is an aspect of the powers sure but its not so much the ultimate ability. That in itself is quite lewd in the context that this other being is on another level of evolution from the beings around them. Not a lot of things I read capture that which is quite nice. You've also jump started me into writing something in an attempt to capture a similar feeling, haven't had another story do that so that alone I think is great.
Heartily recommend to those reading reviews if you enjoy the above as well.
Thanks so much for reading my story and sharing your thoughts!
I've read a few of your stories: all great!
Your kind words are very appreciated, and yes, I was definitely going for a power focus. Size is kind of a very obvious form of it, but I tried to have Saki explore more aspects than just her bigness. I'm happy that seemed to work out!
Very pleased to hear you will be writing something with a similar feel. Thanks again!
The Nura Republic uses their advanced technology as a way of providing mercenaries to neighboring lands. One such group is helping the Kingdom of Latria defend against the invading armies of Elsira. Their experiences up to this point have not prepared them for this.
This story takes place in the world of "Humanity's Downfall", as written by inwiththebooks.
You certainly managed to capture the despair that humans feel when they are captured wonderfully! As well as the general casual disdain that the vast majority of elves have for humans. Doesn't matter who you were, because in Elsira you are just another animal to be taught the proper way. Unless you are lucky, they you just get patronizing pethood. Great so far!
Thank you so much! The "meat" of the story has yet to occur, but hopefully folks can enjoy the beginning as well. It's a really rich setting!
A crashed meteorite hands a young woman the keys to self-evolution. Along the way, Aoi decides to share it with her love.
This story started as a typical kaiju-themes inspired piece, but it grew into a rather long and experimental story. Content warnings inside. Comments and constructive criticism are more than welcome!
Special thanks to those who gave good advice for the story.
DISCLAIMER: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Another rather lovely story of yours! I quite enjoyed it. You do an excellent job of empowerment stuff, possibly better than anyone I've seen here.
In regard to your remarks as to where you notice you could improve you pretty much nailed my only critical stuff. You do at times tend to tell rather than show a good bit, and at times sometimes how you word things can come off as stiff but it doesn't detract from the overall prose too much. Speaking as someone who generally writes more RP than Prose these days I always get the feeling your ideas work for both.
All in all, very enjoyable stuff as always.
Thank you so much! You're an amazing writer, so if you're enjoying my stories then I must be doing at least something right. Empowerment is one of my favorite themes, so your comments on that mean a lot.
And thanks for the constructive feedback. Right now my plan to improve is just by reading and writing more. I find that helps me notice flaws even if it still takes me a bit to correct them (assuming I do correct them. In all honesty I probably could've edited this piece a bit more before release, but that's probably true of all my works.)
It's interesting what skills transfer over from RP to story writing well and what doesn't. Some ideas work in one medium, but not the other. I'm happy this one seems to have worked well. Part of why I wrote this was to explore some more 'out-there' interests in a story setting.
Anyways thanks again for reading!
The Empress of a mysterious foreign land lays waste to a defiant continent, intent on ruling the world.
I have to say, I quite enjoyed this. Its very much well written and despite a couple of typos here or there you really effectively capture the image of a giga lady compared to everything else. Generally I'm more of an unaware giga for my preferred but definitely think you did well here, very discriptive and lovely.
Thank you. I hope you enjoy future chapters as well.
The story of a domineering business woman and her meek assistant in a series of events that will forever change them both.
I dunno man, could just be that smug big girls gonna win and be smug. Just my hot take.
Idk man, nothing really sudden about all this imo since its been like 26 chapters. Might just be you expected one thing and got another. Just my take. Good stuff as ever though.
[Reviews - 13] Author’s postscript: I am hoping to offer a feminine standpoint in my works of fiction. Please understand that a lesbian relationship is about the deep connection on every level, from communicating and discussing problems to various unimaginable romantic pursuits. No-one appreciates another woman’s bodies better than a woman herself. Having said that, please note that my writing method is from a perspective of lesbian-feminism.
Since the definition of macrophilia is wide-ranging, I view it as a fantasy involving the unmindful power of giantesses. While there are romantic scenarios in the works of fiction, however, the spur is not based on any erotic fixation.
So this one is a bit hard for me to read through because of how its structured. Essentially what I mean is the details can detract from the overall flow of the story. In the first chapter alone it has a couple of asides devoted to exact measurements of the characters and appearance descriptions. These can detract rather than add to the reading experience. Generally its better to give a brief description, hit on the notable points and let the reader fill in the gaps there. With details generally ask, does this detail jerk someone out of the story or does it flow correctly?
It's been over a year since Jeremy's slept with someone, not to mention how much longer since his last girlfriend. So in an effort to rekindle his spirit for a night, he heads to a brothel--but the girl he chose isn't a normal kind of sex worker. And she's a bit familiar too... (it's his friend)
A gentle and friendly story, done as a commission :)
I've honestly never seen such a constant stream of bad takes, you got rather unlucky with this one Jess. Only read the first part so far, pretty good.
Also to those whining about it being marked as complete and its released weekly, there are people that completely finish stories and still only release them weekly a chapter at a time to get more eyes on it than just dumping it all in one go. Its a completely valid thing. Ya'll gotta calm down. Its fuckin' Giantessworld, not the Library of Congress.
i didnt even know about that lol. i dont think i'd have the patience to just sit on a story with NOBODY reading it lmao like i'd have to show SOMEONE
An advanced race of elves rule the stars. Lyria, an spacefaring explorer, happens across a signal that leads her to Earth. Humanity is about to regret reaching out to make first contact.
WARNING: This story features an extreme amount of gore and violence.
More big elf size is always a cause I'll champion, very well written! You're quite descriptive and seem to have a firm grasp on how to use imagery to convey the scale and sense of difference between Lyria and the humans as well. Which imo is pretty key, especially for extreme scale differences.
Thank you for the review!
Trying to convey the sense of scale and destruction a giantess can cause is something I always try to get across in my writing, even though it can be incredibly tricky to describe effectively.
Though I hate to tease and make promises, I have been considering making a follow up to this series now that I feel more experienced. The world always needs more giant elf stories.
In any case, I'm glad that you enjoyed my work!