Aw shucks. Means a lot. Thanks for reading/reviewing.

This was a personal challenge for me, to introduce a man sexually aggressing at a tiny man. Not usually my thing but I figured such a situation is likely so I should try writing about it.

And yeah, many of us have fallen hard for someone we know isn't good for us. Part of the attraction, somehow.

Thanks very much; it means a lot.

Thank you. I'm glad you stuck with it and enjoyed my ramblings.

I kinda had a feeling the prolonged lead-up would discourage some. When I got to around the halfway point I did wonder if there was a way to include some sweaty action earlier, but just couldn't figure a way to do so while maintaining the stressfulness for Ben & Jenna.

The lead-up didn't seem so long when I originally conceived of the events. I suppose this is why I wanted to actually try to write for once, rather than just entertain imagery in my head. A few moments of minds-eye visuals seem to require paragraphs to realise on paper... something I'll bear in mind in future. Short and simple may well become a new guiding rule. I certainly needed to experience this process, though, to help me better understand pacing, rhythm and action. Describing events in words proved much tougher and long-winded than I expected.

With regards to Ben's 'role' in the later action; I did dither for quite a while over adding more from his perspective. His experience was going to be somewhat limited at this stage as there was little more for him to do than just lay in there and wiggle a bit. He wasn't getting any stimulation himself, so to speak. From his point of view, the whole experience is still fairly terrifying and he hasn't gained the knowledge of the How's and Why's that Jenna has, nor has he been exposed to Kate's overpowering feminine musk yet.

I do have some ideas for extending the story such that Ben later learns of Jenna's experiences, discovers that she's gotten really into it, and gets to experience more pleasurable action himself (with plenty of egging-on from his sexually re-awakened girlfriend)... and so on. There are many more 'uses' for the shrinkees to be explored.

I may leave this story as it is for now, though. I spent quite alot of time tweaking various parts already and could go on doing so forever, knowing me. I've got a few other concepts outlined which will allow me to practise dialogue and characterisation more, which I need to do. Odds are good, though, that I will re-visit Ben and Jenna's predicament later.

Finally, I have to say your one review has done enough to convince me to write more. Thank you so much. I don't mind if nobody else leaves a review now.

Warmest Regards

- Epidaurius

Thanks very much for your generous praise, it is very validating. I'm not sure what got me started either, hmm, two passions, one forum perhaps, :)