Adam wakes up finding himself in far more danger than he expected...
I've been a lurker here for a while, and your story is one of the most vivid and exciting that I've come across in a long while. I like that it is an adventurous story, but not voilent. And a lot of the situations you've illustrated are very well excecuted. In the next chapter, I look forward to your handling of Adam's current situation.
A young woman is forced to make a horrible decision after a strange incident causes her to grow to incredible heights.
While I was pretty skeptical going into this story (I am for EVERY story I read here), this is definitely one of the biggest surprises. The first chapter is good as its own short story, but the way you have elaborated since then and created a greater plot is really cool. I personally subscribe very little to the "giant destructive woman" aspect and lean more towards "shrunken captive, gentle captor" type stuff, but this story has really drawn me in. With that said, I am hoping you handle Dustin and Jessica's confrontation well, and I secretly hope that you include some intimacy between them at their size difference. That would make the middle of this story incredible in my opinion. Amazing job so far!