Reviewer: writer27 Signed
Date: September 14 2016
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
I mean, I don't know how many times I can say how much I like this story. Its fantastic that it is more than just, "A short, do the job kind of story". It a well written thought out scenereo that happens to involve the fetish. I have to admit there were a few months there where I really thought this died and went to great story heaven to be left like an unfinished diamond like so many others. I checked daily for months waiting for updates. And on literally my birthday this year you came back :) I will say I thought Rayades was surely going to survive and we were going to see a more human side to the monster. It makes me really curious whats going to happen with Steve and his surviving compatriot. Surely their disappearance has been noticed where they are from by now. I'd personally like to see some sort of communicae or additional characters possibly from the rescue mission (giant or otherwise) introduced. Possibly some repercussions for their behavior or the threat of some and how it would impact things. I mean, there really is no going back from what they have done. In any case I am sure you have this thought out already so not much more I can really say.
Author's Response: Thank you. I have a lot of ideas floating around my head about your suggestion, one crazier than the other. I don't dare go there yet, but I must eventually.
Steve and Christina went on a similar mission to Laura and Janna's and Valerie was their pilot. They were sent to a planet nearby where they picked up the distress call and went to help. Back on earth nobody would miss them yet, think how long it would take for them to get back. But as you mention it, I don't know, might be other class mates on similar missions picked up the signal too. I don't know yet.