I'm really digging this!

Not bad at all!

I hope that Jeremy's mother while asleep mistakes his body for her hot water bottle. I also hope that she has gorgeous feet. You've sort of hinted at something, with all of the foot care products in her room. If so, who knows why she doesn't show them off and keeps them always in shoes except when sleeping. Hmm. I also hope the oil scene is repeated, the poor boy ejaculating several more times to increase his amount of shrinkage.

I'm enjoying it and I can't wait for more!

I'm digging it. Sure, I like Misaki, the more the merrier. Unaware generally frustrates me a bit, but I can tell you're more than willing to put your main character into some interesting and difficult to "mentally storyboard" situations. Hope the vacation is nice.

Just brainstorming: edit it so that you include a bit about a slightly stretchable property of his flesh due to his sickness. Then edit the throat scene to make it more visceral and invasive. Perhaps also add an edit about him needing deep tissue massages occasionally to counteract his illness. That could be played out as torture with Felicity's smiling encouragement versus body crushing massage in her hands/whatever. Both additions allow more complex scenarios he can realistically survive. Mom meditating w/ him at her folded feet. Later and smaller, she lets him sleep on her pillow and her face rolls over onto him, plastering him to her. Stuck in a hairbrush. Trapped/plastered behind knee while she sleeps. Sister trusses him up (very tiny) and ties him to mom's trinket anklet. Ear cleaner. Taped at toe section of shoe. Hid in jewelry box. Kept in dollhouse/playset. Human toering. Booger. Chewing gum. Cake decoration. Naked yoga? Eek. Much darker things too but I've said enough.

I am quite happy. This is an amazing start and I cannot wait for more! Excellent foundation laid, sir!

Yes, more please! I love it and it helps keep me motivated to write stuff :)

So happy you're back!

I love how her feet seem to have minds of their own- or perhaps she cannot help but to squish him beneath of them? An amazing chapter and I await the next one with obsessive zeal!

I loved the part where she punished him. That was hot! Keep up the excellent writing! Don't give up!

Welcome back!

A great start to a reboot! I am enjoying your careful and thorough language in this. If I had a request, I think it would be for Felicity to be fascinated in his body's resilient and pliable nature: squeezing him in her fist, playing with his legs and arms and finally checking to see if he is anatomically correct. So, mauling him in her powerful hands and examining him out of curiosity. I hope for more however you go about it! Thank you!

I like it! Looking forward to more of this. You've got a great set up poised for some epic humiliations!