Penname: V11 [Contact] Real name: Victor
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Summary:

A shrunken brother, having survived for years as his sister’s secret slave, finally commits to be his giant sibling’s property forever. Now the only thing standing in the way of their wildest fantasies is the limit of their imaginations.


Categories: Breasts, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38574 Read Count: 135641
[Report This] Published: July 02 2016 Updated: July 25 2017
Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: November 11 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Cleanliness is Next to Carlyness

I'm digging it. I love your stuff, the MTO series is a favorite and also a frustration to me (Judy doesn't do as much in later ones physically to her son). This particular alternate universe series is cool. I like this better than the standard canon for some reason. I think I always imagine Carly with man feet, lol. It's the athlete thing. I love your writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks much. I've noticed from what you've posted on the site that we share some common subject interests; I intend to sit down and read more of your stuff at some point, as the bit I've seen so far I enjoyed.

Glad you like the TO series. Judy's lessened physical torment on Scott in the later stories is something I heard from a lot of people, and I do plan to address it in future stories.

And hopefully Carly's larger than average feet aren't a turn-off. They're definitely meant to be imagined in that powerful athlete way while still being feminine.

Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: December 06 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

I enjoyed chapter 8 a lot. Was it the language? Not sure. Must have been, I was there with you through it all, you gave me enough pieces to assemble your vision of everything and it was embellished nicely as well. I still find it strange to read the name "Carly" attached to sweet dialogue. Yeah, the alternate universe factor of it is still poignant. Sweet! Thank you for the chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much. I love a little bit of good embellishment. And yeah, I doubt it will ever feel normal for most readers to see Carly being sweet.

Summary:

Mike’s life turns upside down when, at age 15, he gets the incredibly rare shrinking disease.  His stepsister who is 17 finds the whole thing amusing that Mike shrinks whenever he becomes sexually aroused, as small as an inch tall, lasting 24 hours before returning to normal size.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34149 Read Count: 72776
[Report This] Published: July 15 2016 Updated: November 04 2016
Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: November 06 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapters 1-10 (from 2015)

Interesting... I assumed that because of earlier chapters with the sister that the son would be a terrified prude once his mother discovered his boner. I had considered that she might want to play (regardless of whether she was strange or not, after all, it's a tiny hard-on) but that he would fight her tooth and nail. Apparently the sister frightens the hell out of him and the mother is viewed as benevolent. Cannot wait for more stuff. Really cool. Why can't I leave stars? I must be using the wrong skin for this website.



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: August 23 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapters 1-10 (from 2015)

I really like this story and I hope you continue it. You have a nice set up with Coleen and I like the contrast between her and Olivia. I think that your stuff helped push me to consider writing and contributing something here. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for your comments.  I write what interests me, and I'm glad other people are interested in it, too.

Summary:

James, 35, lives with his new family which includes his beautiful 17-year-old stepdaughter who despises him.  It doesn’t help that she has magical size-altering powers.  And it certainly doesn’t help that he has a secret shrinking fetish.

(size reduction to 1 inch)


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Humiliation, Incest, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26561 Read Count: 95506
[Report This] Published: August 19 2016 Updated: November 02 2016
Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: October 27 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So, I was expecting Adelaide to shrink her mother as a threat. I had visions of a possibility... Addie shrinking them all and skipping out on school and other responsibilities, with everything going to hell around her... house eventually foreclosed on....
Addie's mother seems to be reacting strangely. I think most people's first reaction would be a screeching fit followed by collapse. I suppose she is trying to play it cool, after all, Addie is dangerous. Good story. Sort of miss the other story too. Not sure what I think about the set up for this new one yet, as to whether it was warranted or not. All of the cliffhangers and suspense. But, honestly, in my mind it's forgivable, it could be looked at as an experiment, or "warming up". Don't know. Everyone else seems to like it. I'm just more or less neutral about it.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for your comments.  I was considering having Adelaide shrink Karen, but I thought it'd be more fun to have two giant females.  I agree that Karen's reaction is a little unusual.  That's where I decided to shy away from realism in order to make it more enjoyable.  I guess the dynamic I was going for was the reader to view Addie as fearsome and dangerous and then switch gears in how she acts after she shrinks James... more of a playful, erotic thing.  Her confidence and power allows her to behave that way.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: October 06 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm glad you "mapped" the gigantic physicality and it's effects on Jim. That was crafted quite well and I'm happy. Now, finally I will grab this and save it. Cuz it will morph into something interesting no matter what direction you take it. Interesting that she has stated a time limit of Jim popping up much later in the evening. Cool, good job!



Author's Response:

It was fun to describe Addie's size relative to James.  Thanks a lot for the review.

Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: September 15 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"but Adelaide’s view of me is not substantial."

Lol. Wait!!? Is she on here right now!!? Is she reading this!!?

Good chapter. I like the pace so far. I supposed we should all don face-shields and raincoats now as you turn on the excement covered fans. Because in this age of online-capable device saturation, all Addy needed was what had seen; the address of the website. *grin*



Author's Response:

I don't know if Adelaide is reading this.  Thanks for your interest and thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: November 02 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

you may read, save if you like and delete from here if you want to.

You asked for criticisms/input:

criticisms? "colossusses" is "colossi".
Further things depend on what you want to do and how much patience you think your readership has. What I had planned to do in my stories was to intersperse high detail with low detail passages that acted as a path between the high detail "rewards". I didn't. I always end up cramming as much stuff in as I can, and when I get exhausted I close the chapter out until next time I get the writing bug. So, little happens in my stuff, but if you like my writing, it's a bunch of little powerful doses of ten minute episodes. Also, what do you want this story to be a year out from finishing it? I've been in the scene since the beginning, and there are stories that everyone has in their collection and loves. Do they reread them? Don't know. I doubt it, or not often. But most of these stories are good examples of what the reader is "into". However, other stories people hold onto are good stories. Sometimes it can be the storytelling and detail, the memorable-ness of the characters or situation- but, you know what? I've got stuff that I'm not even "into" and I keep it around because sometimes these stories are so good as stories- other times they hit really hard, they are "advocates" for whatever sub-genre. I've got some amazing stuff that I rightfully shouldn't be interested in, but reading these stories makes me see why someone would be into something, like crush, or amazons or whatever. The writer cared with those stories, and I can see what they see, and it can be cool. Walking in different shoes.

Make something that's throw-away. Or, make something that's a great story with some good smut. Or, make something that dares someone else to top you.

My aim is to make something that dares someone to top me. Then I can come back in six months and see what REALLY became of my effort. But if that doesn't happen, then hopefully when I'm long gone some copy of my stuff will still be cluttering hard drives. Maybe some crazy bastard will consider it a "classic" and other people in communication with them as they discuss this while terraforming Mars will roll their eyes and not invite this poor sod out for a drink at the Colony's bar later that evening.



Author's Response:

Thanks for review.  It's nice to see another writer's point of view.  You're correct that it's colossi, but I looked that up before posting this chapter, and it's also correct as colossuses.  I thought it sounded more natural, but I like both.

I appreciate you taking the time to share your perspective on writing.  Stories do have impact, as you said, with the characters and events.  And they have the ability to be lasting and memorable.  With the digital age, people could certainly read these stories after colonization of Mars.  Thanks again.

Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: November 02 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Observations and such:

The BOOM BOOM BOOM of the footsteps is a trademark of yours. I actually like it, because it is short-hand for what you mean. It's simple, sort of childish, but, hell, I get tired of explaining what gigantic footsteps from a 400+ woman might sound like. It's BOOM! anyhow. You lean on the giantess converter a lot, but you're good at it, you are able to convey size through it well because you mention more than one measurement, or (in stepsister) you do a bit of math to arrive at how much of the blonde goddess is sticking up above the desk that the brother can see. Good stuff. How about find some real world analogues too, sometimes? From experience I can tell you for future stories that dialogue creates character. Write whatever comes out, put it in a mouth, and you have a clue to that person. Do three lines of dialogue coming from a person and often you now can see a character as an individual... perhaps not who you wanted, but someone maybe even more interesting than what you "ordered". If a young woman has size F breasts that's *unusual*. Live that up. I've known and dated several DDD women. Their breasts were a large (haha) part of their identity. They knew people stared, and they were particular about certain things because of that: good bras, sleeping in a certain preferred position, being forced to do (or not do) certain things, feeling intensly hurt whenever someone might mistake their loose tee-shirt hanging out away from their abdomen as a sign of them being tubby. Women with F-cup breasts do not like to clean stove-tops. They hate tying shoes. or jogging. Or lying for extended periods on their backs. They have to mind their breasts, corral them, round them up, protect them. Those breasts *are them*.

Sit on a finished chapter. Reread it a day or more later. I never do this with my stuff here. I continue to tweak after I post. Add nonsense to dialogue, (Yours) “Good,” she replied, smirking.  “I like controlling you.”.... “Good,” she replied, smirking.  “I like controlling you. You're weak and pathetic.”...“Good,” she replied, smirking.  “I like controlling you. Look over there, Jim, I'm filming us.”...“Good,” she replied, smirking.  “I like controlling you. When I scare you, you sweat. Tiny people sweat smells like crunch-berries to me. Isn't that odd, Jim? Are you full of crunch-berries, little man?” It's smut, I always think the writer should have some fun themselves. Writing sucks, and it always sucks on some level, sometimes, no matter how long you've done it. Banging your head against something in isolation is never entirely fun. I hope somehow I gave you good advice, or maybe what I said sparks something in you that I should have sai



Author's Response:

Thanks for the observations.  That's a good suggestion that I look for real world analogues when describing the giantess' size, rather than just putting down a number, like 50 feet.  That would make it interesting.  Yes, dialogue creates character, and you reminded me of this.  I knew that, but not 100% on all levels.  The idea of large-breasted women having their identity tied up with their size is good to remember.

I agree that writers should have fun themselves.  I struggle at times with continuing stories.  If both the reader and writer can have fun, then that's the sweet spot.  Thanks so much for your advice.  It got me thinking about how perspective opens new writing avenues.

Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: August 26 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, just immediately into chapter 2 I could tell you're getting better, or changing your focus or something. I am enjoying it a lot. I hope you don't give up on Stepsister's Delight... It's at a cool place, such a cliff-hanger!

Stick around, it's fun hunting down your additions. Like Christmas... for... deviants. It isn't the holidays often enough, IMHO



Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice comments.  I appreciate it.  There's a good chance I'll continue my other story eventually.

Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: September 08 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

you are establishing Adelaide as a wonderful and seethingly dangerous giantess. It brings a tear to my eye. You're killing me here. I might have to write a sequel to something to tide me over for frightening and perky giantess. *swoon*



Author's Response:

I like that: "seethingly dangerous giantess."  Glad the story is interesting so far. Thanks for commenting.

Summary:

The positively beautiful sisters of Omega Pi are a selective sorority who possess a very curious secret, that being, they sustain their otherworldly looks by stealing the lives and life energy of unsuspecting young men.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 99 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 111897 Read Count: 405620
[Report This] Published: September 21 2016 Updated: June 13 2018
Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: September 21 2016 Title: Chapter 1: First Time Away From Home

Excellent. I look forward (or upward) to it.



Author's Response:

Lol thanks for the read and review 

Summary:

A son helps his mother, a reluctant and conservative woman, become the goddess he always knew and felt she was.

 

 

So this is the commission I posted earlier on my actually commission's collection, but I realized that there's going to be a few chapters, so why not make it its own story? Might be easier. 

Anyhow, here it is again. This was made for Lockboxes. 


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28523 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: October 29 2016 Updated: February 25 2017
Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: November 03 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So...

I'm a bit relieved. I'm liking the story. But I got to the recipe... you've got to understand... I LOVE strange humor, I find non-sensical stuff especially funny. That first recipe left me feeling strange, I knew it was a joke, yet I felt a bit like I'd just had an unfriendly encounter with someone in a foul mood. It was nice to read your comment about mounting hostility pertaining to the second recipe.

I think, since the recipe was so short I didn't have time to take it in before I felt like someone was launching barbs. Eh. Whatyagonnado? It's the internetz. It's overworked brain perception.

But, now I know WTF is going on and I'm looking forward to some angry recipe singes. I am impressed with your writing. Easy to read and focused. Still trying to balance the horny son/religious mother equation in my mind. Whatever. That shit is interesting and I don't need it spelled out. Thank you for your effort!



Author's Response:

yeah. i feel like im getting lazy with these recipes and theyre just coming off as begrudging. I may lay off for a while or do them less frequently. it also maybe be a problem that ive done MOST of the recipes here, but some of them, like the two specifically on the story here, i have NOT done. Ive always wanted to bake a pie, but ive never had the wherewithal or even the time/money to do it- whereas the marinara sauce, simple breakfasts, shakshuka are all tried and true for me, and so those have more emotional feeling behind them, yknow? I think i should take a break from the recipe thing, maybe regroup and do some cooking. seriously, the only thing thats better than gtses is cooking for loved ones. I think thats why they take such prominence in my gentle pieces- theyre expressions of love. Speaking of love, the son/mother 'fyi i wanna f your a (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LHIKf0f9E40)' is gonna develop soon enough. let it flow, bruh.

Summary:

Part 3 of Tiny Dancer

Linda goes away for three days and leaves her new best friend in charge of her housemates.

Additional Tags: Fingers, Smoking

Let me hear the collective groans! I have now taken down the last three chapters and I am adding to the story starting after Chapter 7. It will be slow going.


Categories: Breasts, Entrapment, Feet, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46352 Read Count: 52290
[Report This] Published: November 05 2016 Updated: April 24 2018
Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: November 09 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Button Pressing

I guess I'm the only one that finds Steve's latest dream sequence hilarious? I still laugh past a certain point, and I wrote the damned thing. I have considered ending it here at Chapter 5. Just let it hang there. But I'll be trying to continue. This stuff is grueling to write, and this is my hobby stuff when I don't or can't write on my "real" stuff that is important. If someone has any particular critique of my writing I would appreciate it. Thank you for your time and the chance to entertain you.

Summary:

A year into his house arrest, Scott Stevens is placed in shrunken criminal rehab, with the possibility of becoming his mother Judy’s permanent shoe slave. Faced with serious girlfriend troubles, a never-ending parade of greedy bare feet, and an increasingly powerful little sister, he’ll need all the help he can get.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 63541 Read Count: 156545
[Report This] Published: December 30 2016 Updated: November 15 2017
Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: December 31 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid

Excellent! Love the first chapter! Maybe this will inspire me. I shall at least have a good reason to check this site often once again. I still do not know how to add stars. It's a pity. I hope you get a chance to read my stuff!



Author's Response:

Thanks much. I did get a chance to read more of Tiny Dancer. I'll drop you a review soon.

Reviewer: V11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid

So, I'm digging the language. The hammer-like, unadorned stuff like your description of Scott in Judy's mouth, the description of the "plastic old lady-rapist" who "calls to toe-fuck him in the dark". I agree with Socksarecool about the dark vibe. It seems to me that Judy introduces something with a contextual pretense, i.e. the sore tooth, then we see later that she consistently encompasses that prior milestone of humiliation/trepidation as standard modus operandi for her own amusement/pleasure.

To me, Judy is warping Scott, little by little. At the end of this I predict Scott with either be free of his mother and living as a short-order cook in a little washington state town because of his PTSD... or he will be a willing (and thoroughly broken) trinket for Judy with all of the incestuousness that implies full blown and active on Judy's behalf.

But what do i know? lol



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks much. And that is absolutely Judy's modus operandi. Nothing she does is ever on accident. Of course I can't comment on the end of it now, but you're right to think that no one is coming out of this situation entirely clean.

Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: June 13 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes

Excellent!

I like the level of detail here. I have been hoping you expand on what happens underneath of Judy a few more times. Over the course of the story arc you get a good idea and it never hurts to add to that evidence a little from time to time.

I still have a soft spot for Scott underneath her big toe at an inch in height, which was something done in the first story of this series. I always found that iconic, since it is a theme repeated through several old and lost to us authors of yesteryear.

The more you write in this series the more I add to my wishlist for it. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thanks much. There will be several opportunities for Scott to be at his smallest and underfoot in later chapters.

Summary:

Friends are friends, but food is food.


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2164 Read Count: 5086
[Report This] Published: May 04 2017 Updated: May 04 2017
Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: May 05 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Dying Naked Vomit Girl

Not my cup of tea but that's okay. I dug it! Problems: First, several times there is an "x" where, apparently there should be the word "against" or something similar. You say the tiny hits the ground, drops to the ground, something something against the ground... but the poor thing is on a hot dog the entire time- not the ground. Sure, whatever enormous, nightmarish surface beneath her is *her* ground. But... not the ground. These are just quibbles. "before she stepped away to build with her SO." Took me a bit, SO is S.O.- significant other? Okay. Got it. What is build? I'm old, ancient, in fact. Is it slang? A typo? Don't know. But it doesn't matter. You went "Wham!" and laid out a compelling story in 2164 words. That's a great job.

P.S. I am assuming the mucus surrounding poor Anna was the result of Thalia's body rejecting digesting her wholesale. It would have been nice to mention that either Thalia felt indigestion, or to have Anna completely digested except perhaps her almost microscopic teeth and the hard, enamelled ends of her largest bones, much like what happens in a cremation. JMHO. I hope to read more form you in the future!



Author's Response: 'x' means across. 'Building' is slang for having a deep, insightful or creative conversation.

Summary:

A family walks into a talent agent’s office. Sizes will change, bodies will become toys and tools, and the true meaning of talent will never be the same.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Giant, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9937 Read Count: 25464
[Report This] Published: June 09 2017 Updated: August 05 2017
Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: July 03 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

pink petals... star shaped... stuff... and golf claps! ! !

It's like an intravenous drip for the woefully under-perverted. This has more glistening globs than a (good) Ghostbusters movie. Ahh, the psyche and logic rending kitsch of those smiles. A funhouse ride of depravity crafted by state of the art effects, styled and rendered as a 1950s PSA.

Did John Carpenter help you storyboard this? LOL

You should purchase an autoclave and an NBC suit before it's too late. I fear for your cleanliness!

I can never do stars. Cannot figure out why I never have that option. maximum stars for you, please.



Author's Response:

I approve this review

Reviewer: V11 Signed
Date: June 09 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my. Now I am envisioning a macro version of "the aristocrats" joke (thanks for the wiki advice) utilizing Beetlejuice's reality-warping powers and delicate sense of taste. I shall dig a trench and tightly fasten my helmet in place. I brought my goggles, so that I may face into the blast and gather valuable macrophilic data. Godspeed, sir. On your shoulders sits the hope of us all.



Author's Response: I appreciate all the safety preparation. I hope you like the actual slimy bits of the story.