Penname: tinyguy [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: April 20 2014
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Summary:

in the year 2020, the government has undergone a project where the giantess that they created from a small piece of the female population and regular sized individuals live together in a newly built community. Can the two coexist, while they try to continue on with their daily lives?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Couples , Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132390 Read Count: 285061
[Report This] Published: April 24 2014 Updated: August 30 2014
Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awese chapter, and great cliffhanger!

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Date: May 07 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Awesome job once again...

A suggestion, maybe if all the stuff with Ryan is getting to be too much, there could always be a bit of a break, maybe showing how Jaden gets on at his new school, kinda like ultradude's stories?.. After all, Alex said Jaden would meet more people., and spring breaks gotta be over by now. Or are you saving that idea for a sequel depending on how this all ends?

PS/ 100 + reviews on you're first story is amazing... Should defenerlh keep writing after this story's over

Author's Response:

To be honest I was saving the high school drama for a sequel....but like you said it depends on how this ends.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed
Date: May 05 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What about the pictures of all the characters tho?

Author's Response:

May have to hold off the pics a bit longer. I'm picky when it comes to making bios and right now I can't seem to find a picture that I believe best fits the character. 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This was by far the best chapter in the entire story, nuff said.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

PS: for the 100th review of this story, I will join in... KILL RYAN!!!
&, as another reviewer said, I would like more dirty scenes in there :)... Hoping that insertion tag you have gets used :D

Author's Response:

Every tag I used will be in lol...I know everybody wants it, I just had to built it up a bit

 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow.. Loads to take in in this chapter... Would be great if you put pictures in

Author's Response:

Ok I'll post them up come next chapter so everyone can get a good look at who were dealing with.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Mathis was an awesome chapter... Something tells me that Jaden will run into Tasha again

Author's Response:

Lol why do you say that? 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

@JTC/Nostory.. Lol. A tyrant saving a kitten

Author's Response:

Lmao I know right can you just imagine the cool points he would get if he stopped a car from running one over. 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 24 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is an awesome story so far!.. Have read a few mixed sizes stories like A Different View, and Adam And Ashley.. This is already right up there with the two previously mentioned stories, & this is just chapter 1 ,:)

Wonder how Alex will put up with Jaden in the next chapters?... She seems very similar to Amy fromWhos Really the Bigger Person Here

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 25 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great chapter... This story still could go either way. Maybe Jaden's gonna explore the outside world, & get a break with another girl?.. Since they're both teens, is there some kind of school that's set up for them ?

Author's Response:

So far its going to be rather long story of people getting to know each other, so yes there will be some outside fun time. :D

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed
Date: April 25 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

@MrSirk, ya, Alex could be cruel to him now, but ya, after thinking about it, who knows, maybe she likes him secretly, but doesn't any to show it?

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Date: April 26 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter... Seems like Jeden is safe with Alex's friend... As for Alex's ex waiting outside her places, well I don't have much hope for him, that's for sure

Author's Response:

Lol why the lack of faith? You may be surprised by what you read next chapter.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed
Date: April 26 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thought about it more... Something tells me Ryan's normal sized, but Jeden won't have to worry... It'll be Alex doing all the worrying... Maybe Ryan won't be such a bad guy... That is, to everyone but Alex and Ava... Idk, just random Thoughts I've been having

Author's Response:

Lol really? is that your final answer?

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed
Date: April 26 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just thought of something.. Up until this point, we've only seen giantesses.. Maybe Ryan's the only giant in the town/project. If that's true, and Alex's just broken up with him, that'd explain her taking out her anger/longing for a guy her size on Jaden... It'd also explain y ryan is trying 2 get her back & always calling her... Knowing she'll come crawling back to him if he's the only regular sized man. Something tells me Jaden still won't have to worry about Ryan himself, but the anger he's causing Alex.

My other theory, Ryan hasn't seen Alex since she was a giantess, but they've kept in Contsct, & she doesn't want him to see her in her new form.

My final question, will we ever find out why the goveremt is turning people into giantesses?

Author's Response:

In due time my friend all in due time.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This was an axing chapter... Pretty dark, but very well done. Didn't expect the backstory to be that dark though. It's almost like a backstory to some of ultradude306s stories on here, whee the giantesses/<
Giant cities are expanding outward
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Soo, 1 thing I still don't get.. Is ryan the only male giant/mega?.. Or are there other normal giant guys ?

Author's Response:

He's the only one currently for the U.S. Other world powers have one as well 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So, all other giant people are girls?, with only 1 man 1 giant guy for each every major country?

Also, just some constructive criticism, or something that might've been overlooked, if this whole town is basically a giant military base for the USA, why would they let other countries keep their giants/giantesses ?there?.. Is it only with allied countries?

PS: if there are other country's giantesses there, will the giantesses in each country be different sizes, sort of like the Country's and Sizes Series?

Author's Response:

To that point about the military base. Ava said it was project. I don't believe I ever said where the city was actually located. Not to mention you have take in the fact that the U.S. As allies that are most like funding this project to. Thus, explains why giantess from other countries are in this just as well. Although you may have enemy countries, this is most like a test to see how well interaction is. Also, that doesn't take away the fact of what the Giants and giantess were actually created for. War is still war and allies can become enemies and vice versa. Better to keep your friends close and your enemies closer.  Also, yes they will very in size.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed
Date: April 27 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok... Makes sense... And can understand y they have so many luxuries in the town if multiple countries are pumping money into it.

Author's Response:

Also, I want to apologize for the typos in my last response.  I am currently replying to reviews from my phone at the moment. There is something that I wanted to point out to all readers. When dealing with government nothing is necessarily factual. If that was the case, then we wouldn't be second guessing our own government in reality. Now taking upon the explanation that Ava's character gave, you have to understand that she is only saying what she knows, experienced and what she is told. Which in fact, may seem to open the door to more questions that she may not have the answers for. Also, remember this is only the fourth chapter and I've just basically given this story a backbone as to why a character mentioned in the first couple of chapters acts the way they act. 

I do appreciate the questions and criticism, but I don't want you to forget what the main focus of the story is at this point. Also, that even dealing with the U.S. In fiction is just like dealing with the U.S. In reality. We never really know what the country is thinking and why the government does what it does. They just do it and throw an explanation at us and we take it for what it is. You can never make a government so simple in fiction, because they aren't in reailty.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed
Date: April 27 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Agree with the response to my last question... I'm the US, as well as many other large and powerful countries/institutions, there's a lot going on behind closed doors... Probably should take what only 1 person in the project is saying as a gain of salt, and like you said, they were just getting into how they're friends ex acts, so ya, maybe not so reliable.

Also would be curious as to if these are pre written or not... Either way, they're all very well done.. Twitch each chapter, the readers always get something answered, but it only then dices deeper into a whole hosts of other questions... Great suspense.

Also, like I said, I've always liked the mixed size world stories, and followed the Adam and Ashley/giantess high series (wasn't a member though, so didn't get to review :( )... I have to say, after reading this, as well as Who's Really The Biggr Person Here (Alex reminds me a lot of Amy in that story) it puts Adamand Ashley to shame, for sure.

Author's Response:

I enjoyed ultradudes stories as well and I'm also a fan of "Who's the bigger person here." To answer the question is this story prewritten...it isn't. I actually woke up this morning with idea in my head and typed it out. Just pure imagination and motivation. Also, I do appreciate your praise for this story as it is my first and I wasn't actually sure if I could write one of these. Let alone add the fetish part into it. I'd say that I've actually surprised myself the most.  But I do thank you though. Your compliments and criticism means alot. 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed
Date: April 27 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You're welcome... I find whenever I write, whether It be an erotic story or not, I can't usually have anything pre written.. It throws me off somehow.
Still, ver impressive that you write such long chapters each day

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed
Date: May 01 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

@Stubbornstain.... Not sure if that'll work, but If it all ends peacefully, and all these countries are left over with more giants than antidote, could definitely see giant communities spreading around the world, maybe an idea of a sequal ?.. Something like ultradude's stories, but with your own touch?

Just an idea

Author's Response:

Not only that, but you also have to take in to account that's despite them being giantess, their not adults. Alex and Ava are both 18 and 19. Jaden is 18 Ryan if anything isn't any different. The only thing about Ryan and why is in the position he's in is because his parents worked for the government and he was the first mega that ever surfaced. So it's only natural for him to run things in that particular environment. Not only that, but say that they did run off to another country, whose government also operates behind closed doors. Whose to say it would be any different? In situations like this there will always be somebody trying to be in the position of power and take over. Which is why I can understand the concept of a giant woman being powerful and dominant, but just off killing any and everybody she sees because she has no soul.