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Life is funny that way by JT07 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
Summary:

in the year 2020, the government has undergone a project where the giantess that they created from a small piece of the female population and regular sized individuals live together in a newly built community. Can the two coexist, while they try to continue on with their daily lives?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Couples , Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132390 Read Count: 284943
[Report This] Published: April 24 2014 Updated: August 30 2014
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Calling Ryan a "mastermind" is a fucking stretch. Seriously, how long is it going to take for him to die? The story's good, but my hatred for the character is so intense, it's starting to sour my enjoyment of it. I swear, if Ryan isn't dead in 12 chapters or less, I'll kill him myself!!

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Date: May 26 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Pretty harsh chapter. I'd never peg Ava and Alex to be mass murderers!! I know giantesses eat and crush  people in nearly every story but I thought those two were supposed to be better than that! I don't know; this feels a little out-of-character, even though it's a little justified.



Author's Response:

Still there's somethings you don't know. There's a reason behind the direction I chose...things will come to the light.

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Date: May 21 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I liked the chapter. Easy to read, lack of Ryan and a nice set-up for things to come. Although, there's no Commander so no bonus points.

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Date: May 17 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Good chapter. Needed less living Ryan. Needs more Commander Richard scharacter development  and more dead Ryan. But then again, every chapter needs more Ryan killing in it. If you posted tge same chapter where Ryan dies three times in a row, I'd probably still give all three chapters five stars.

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Date: May 15 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Commander Richards, facing down an angry giantess with nothing but a rifle, a uniform, and the ground he stands. He's officially now my favorite character. Cause honestly, a guy like that deserves major respect. I'm going to be very sad if/when he dies.

This is easily the best chapter in a while because Ryan isn't present. Sure hope Jaden and Commander Richards team up to kick mega-fucker ass! Ryan must die a most gruesome death.

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Date: May 07 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

On the bright side, after that shithead Ryan is killed in the most satisfying and humiliated way possible, you've established enough of a universe to make a sequel if you feel like making one eventually.

Seriously, is it okay to say that Ryan ia a worse person than Adolf Hitler? Because Hitler at least indirectly  helped fix the world economy after the Great Depression, and was kind to dogs.



Author's Response:

Lmao, wow Ryan topped hitler? That's a pretty big feat to accomplish. You have to be real low for that one. Also @tinyguy their spring break started when Jaden got there....I'd say it's around Tuesday now. I'm trying to stretch it a week but that may be too long....well see though.

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Date: May 05 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Kill him. Kill him now. I don't even care about the plot, Jaden's secret, or Tasha's similarly psychopathic behavior. The fact that this asshole's very existence has ruined the lives of everyone he has ever met in what I assume has been the last decade, makes me angry. Seriously, the mere mention of Ryan by the characters pissed me off immediately.

Also... I don't remember who Tasha is. Is she s new character ir were we introduced to her a while ago. Can you refresh my memory then? Also, she might have to die depending on how close she is to Ryan. Cause if his evil spreads, all who touch it must die as well.



Author's Response:

The hate is strong with in you...my son.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

You sellout!! Your blatant advertisement of giantessworld.net is purely shameless plugging. Anr I checked; that website does exist. I've lost all respect for your writing.

And seriously, Ryan is a straight up serial killer. Just kill him already. I can't believe its been six chapters since his introduction, and he's not even close to dead yet. And you even joked that you might make him save a kitten. He could save the last member of a snow leopards from Hitler and his merry band of Nazi; he will never be likeable. Ever.



Author's Response:

But he's Ryan lol!

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 03 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Goddamn it! I'm sick of love triangles. There's only one solution; introduce a second love interest for Ava, and pair them away. Otherwise, you'll drag out your plot unnecessarily.

And seriously, ax Ryan off already. Every second he lives, he makes me hate him more. He's a living human rights violation.



Author's Response:

Ummmm....The love interest as nothing to do with the plot.plus I never said who loves who. If anything the three are just playing around and trying new things....calm down and just read it'll be fine. The plot will still carry on like it is now. 

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Happiness? Mending relationships? Taking things slowly? I'm not used to humanity in my giantess stories.

Again, I really like this story, but now I have no idea where it's heading. All I have are two hopes for the story.

1. Ryan must be killed, sent to the Phantom Zone, depowered and/or killed. Violently and torturously.

2. Please. Please please please. Please no love triangles!

That's all I got. Enjoy your five star rating.

P.S.: You know in your heart it to be true. Ryan MUST die. That's his fate.



Author's Response:

Can't promise you anything simply because.... I like both girls.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 29 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow. Just wow.

I forgot that Jaden had a shitty life too. This was a surprisingly powerful chapter, despite how played this has been. Props. I like character development. This story is getting fun.

Just... um... please don't put a love triangle between Ava, Alex and Jaden. Those are so tired.

P.S.: Can you add another normal-sized character soon?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, although I can't promise anything on the triangle part. Actually I wouldn't even call it a triangle. It may be a square by the time I'm done or maybe a single couple....who knows I sure dont. This has been a free fall from the beginning....or has it been?

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Date: April 28 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Not too often do I see a story where they introduce a character I immediately want dead and ACTUALLY tell us how to kill him right there!

Anyway, what chapter is he going to die in? Please don't string us along for a very long while. Only one twist, because Ryan doesn't deserve to survive due to his wits, charm or luck.

Also, you answered my question on how the government's doing all this. Props, I should have thought of that.

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Date: April 27 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Alex is a bitch, Ryan is a sociopath, Ava is friends with a bitch, and Jaden Smith is a terrible actor. And how did the government do all this with 14 trillion in debt!? This story sucks!!!!

This story better get... better!! As it is, it only gets four and 9/10 stars!!! Clean up your act!!



Author's Response:

Oh I promise it'll get better, I wouldn't want to disappoint anybody.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 26 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Whoooooo! Abuse!! I hope Alex grows a conscience!!

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Got a little X-rated there at the end, in my opinion, but since this is giantessworld.net, it's not X until a penis and vagina officially combine, I guess.

This was a pretty good chapter. I think I like Tasha a little more now. Maybe. She's still pretty murderous. Still don't understand why Ryan has to stsy alive for sk long. Nor why Jaden being a half-Mega would change anyone's perception of him in a negative light.

Although that means he's the only person to be able to infiltrate the facility and steal the anti-Mega formula, force him to drink it, and get him to finally die horribly.

Touché, JTC. This is now the best chapter ever.

Omega: Family by Ackbar Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

An anthology of shorts detailing the life of a mixed-size family.


Categories: Couples , Gentle, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9130 Read Count: 40459
[Report This] Published: April 27 2014 Updated: February 14 2015
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Separation

Oddly enough, I can understand with Elena. Understand, but not sympathize. That's still a stone-cold thing to do, but I don't hate her at all for it. 

I always liked the relationship between Claire and Corey the best in "Consequences". I'm going to love this story, aren't I?



Author's Response:

You very well might!

Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Wake Up

Oh, "Care Bear"!!! I get it now.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Play

I really like this chapter, but now I'm curious what the in-between chapter was. When I started reading this one, I thought a chapter went missing, specifically the one where Howard meets Abby. Oh well, can't wait for Claire to pop up soon.

A New Perspective by Darien Fawkes Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary:

Peter Craft wakes up in the room of his best friend only to find he's now two inches tall. See through his eyes as Peter lives out some of his deepest fantasies, while also learning the reality behind being a shrunken man living with an actual giantess.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52749 Read Count: 296508
[Report This] Published: May 28 2014 Updated: August 16 2014
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok. I'm intrigued. I got to admit. I prefer giantess stories over shrinking stories; I don't know why, I just do. Which means I probably will not like this story as much as your first. Sorry.

 

But I recently saw "X-Men Origins: Wolverine" and that shit was so bad, this story already looks like a masterpiece in comparison. So yeah, I'll finish this story. Cause this story is really good already. I am looking forward to where this is going.

 

P.S.: Grammer error in the third sentence. Replace "had" with "hadn't" or "had not".



Author's Response:

Well well well, we meet again chrlorez.............thank you.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter. Although I don't have arachnophobia, spiders creep me out when they're shown up close. Altbough having a pet ant is weird to me, since they travel in groups a lotnof tuebtime and would probably not stay in the vicinity of a person.

The ant and spider size comparisons raises an interesting question. How small is Peter, in terms of measurement, anyway? I don't think it was brought up before.

P.S. : If you don't have your own computer, invest in a flash drive. Otherwise, things might get embarrassing.

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