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Categories: Orphan
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Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed 
Date: May 07 2014 Title: None
Date: May 07 2014 Title: None
No giantess for one chapter because of interesting character development and narrative purposes? Terrible; zero stars.
I love the story so far. And I was wondering about Michael and Michelle for a while. Overall, this was fantastic, and anyone who says otherwise solely because there wasn't any GTS this chapter is being dumb.
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: May 01 2014 Title: None
Date: May 01 2014 Title: None
This chapter is fantastic, and so is this story. There. That's your review.
I was really worried when you decided to do the whole "Go back in time to World War II" idea, but you pulled if off without it being offensive. I seriously respect it. I love this series. So keep writing, dammit!
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: April 28 2014 Title: None
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Date: April 28 2014 Title: None
Not bad at all, but I feel a drama bomb about to drop soon. And I'm not entirely sure I want to be there when it falls, but I'll continue reading anyway.
Author's Response:
This particular story is meant to be dramatic and more dark at times. Just a fair warning. But the story will have some classic GTS content. Most of that content is yet to be unleashed.
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: April 27 2014 Title: None
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Date: April 27 2014 Title: None
Honestly, this is really good. I love Death from Sandman, and even though its not the same Death, I can't help from seeing the (dare I say, blatant) similarities between them. Scale her up to 30x her size, and this story is fun.
My only very inconsequential problem (not really a problem) with this story is in the very first chapter, which would could have made Aiden's life significantly easier and probably would have ended this story instantly.
Aiden's Boss punished him for spilling coffee on a computer when it wasn't his fault by forcing him to work passed his shift, not paying him for overtime, taking away nearly two weeks worth of off days, and making him pay for the computer. I'm pretty sure that's a huge violation of U.S. labor laws and Aiden could call his union and sue his ass dry.
One threat, no punishment, story over.
Oh, well. This is why I don't write these stories. That, work and school. Still, great work!
Author's Response:
Even if he called a lawyer in, there is always bribery, which happens in the nation all the time.
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: May 24 2014 Title: None
Date: May 24 2014 Title: None
I liked this chapter. Does this mean that Aidan is literally a "low-life?" Is that part of the reason Death chose him to be her accountant?
Anyway, I hope your hand gets better. Don't push yourself to write if it will exacerbate the pain.
Summary:
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Feet, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28546 Read Count: 137002
See what happens when a giantess bully sets her sights on the one student who isn't afraid of her.
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Feet, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28546 Read Count: 137002
[Report This] Published: April 22 2014 Updated: May 16 2014
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: May 04 2014 Title: Chapter 11: I Don't Know What To Do Except Nothing.
Author's Response:
Date: May 04 2014 Title: Chapter 11: I Don't Know What To Do Except Nothing.
I know you're reading my reviews, since you tend to answer them all the time, so as you can expect, I liked this chapter. This literally filled almost every small problem I had with the story. The over-armament of the guards, the question about Amy's parents (or parent) and all this other stuff. I'm getting more and more excited reading this story. I actually care about these characters, and there really isn't anything I can call really unnecessary or stupid. I love this story.
P.S. You asked me whether or not I put all five stars when I rated your last chapter. If you look closely, there is only 4.9 stars there. If you don't see it, you're clearly a complete idiot.
Also, you spelled "sadness" wrong in this chapter. 4.9 out of 5 stars. >:p
Author's Response:
I never said I wasn't an idiot. Though by your standards I'm only a 4.9 out of a 5 star idiot. There by making your comment about me being a "complete" idiot incorrect.
There you have it. You either give me a 5 star rating at being an idiot (there by breaking your promise of never giving me a 5 star rating), or admit you were an idiot for inaccurately calling me a "complete" idiot.
That's right, I know chess. The next move is yours. >:p
Also thank you for the compliment on my writing.
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: May 17 2014 Title: Chapter 14: All's Well That Ends Well. . .Or Does It?
Date: May 17 2014 Title: Chapter 14: All's Well That Ends Well. . .Or Does It?
The story's over?! Aww... I loved this story! This sucks!! This was one of the greatest stories I've read on the site. Anyway, thank you for writing this for so long. And I hope you eventually return to these characters soon. For me, it doesn't seem like their adventure is completely done yet.
Katelyn spelled "too" as "to", but she has a learning disability so I'll let it pass. That means that you finally get your full five star rating. Take care; I hope you write something new soon. You've inspired me to finish writing my own story. If I ever have the time to finish it, please check it out.
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: May 12 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?
Date: May 12 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?
Oh! What a twist!! Both of them. The town's accounts on Amy's good deeds and the army twist. How did I not see the last one? Really, IT'S TOO DAMN OBVIOUS! HOW DID I MISS THOSE!?
Did I mention how much I love this story? Cause I really, really do. It's a fairly simple story admittedly, but it's extremely great execution. I really really love everything in this story.
Except your grammar. You repeated "made to" in one sentence next to each other. 4.9 out of 5 stars. Try your luck next time...
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: May 08 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Wise Words From a Few Old Geezers.
Date: May 08 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Wise Words From a Few Old Geezers.
Wait, Ben has a father?!!
The story is pretty fantastic. I think we already know what Ben's going to do, and I kind of hope that this story will have a sequel, because I love all of the characters you've created. Anyway keep up the good work, but take your time next time.
Also, even though you wrote your disclaimer at the top, I"m giving you 4.9. Cause I like being an asshole. :P
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: May 05 2014 Title: Chapter 11: I Don't Know What To Do Except Nothing.
Date: May 05 2014 Title: Chapter 11: I Don't Know What To Do Except Nothing.
Actually, I said if you see five stars there you are a complete idiot. Since you clearly see the 4.9 stars, you are not a complete idiot Unless you want to be a complete idiot, in which I will gladly give you five full stars.
Check. Your move, White side. >:)
And you're welcome. Your story is really, really good, and honestly, my favorite running right now since "Consequences" . But I like to troll and complain about stuff I love, so 4.9 stars for you. :p
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: May 03 2014 Title: Chapter 10: We Need a Plan, And Insurance.
Author's Response:
Date: May 03 2014 Title: Chapter 10: We Need a Plan, And Insurance.
Will the town forgive Amy? Will Ben's family ever make another appearance? Will Mark and Johnny have any features that distinguishes them from each other? Will Amy ever have a chance to use her character development? Where the fuck are Amy's parents, anyway?
Tune in next time. Same bat time, same bat channel.
I like this chapter a lot. Things are happening at a great pace. My only concern is that there won't been enough time between now and the town meeting to allow Amy to prove how she's changed as a person realistically. Especially since she's under house arrest. Even with the best efforts of Ben, Mark, and Johnny.
P.S. You mixed up "ones" and "one's". 4.9 out of 5 stars. I am determined to never give you five complete stars. >:D
Author's Response:
Challenge accepted. Though you might want to check the rating you gave me in your comment. I do believe they are 5 stars.
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: April 27 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Free Samples
Author's Response:
Date: April 27 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Free Samples
You spelled "albeit" wrong. Zero stars...
I'm not really a fan of vore. Or feet. Or abuse. I do like it when a small protagonist fights back; that makes things interesting. Although, I hope Ben gets Amy to become a better person.
Just to reiterate, I fucking love this story. But still, zero stars.
Author's Response:
Spelling man, my fucking kryptonite. Sorry.
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: April 26 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Eyes Open or Closed. Either Way There's No Escape.
Date: April 26 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Eyes Open or Closed. Either Way There's No Escape.
I really, really like this series. And you're updating it daily, which I really have to give props for! I like the complexity of Amy's character, the likeability of Ben's character, and the lack of uselessness of the side characters. I like it when the story puts plot before eroticism, so I'm really digging this.
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: May 01 2014 Title: Chapter 9: They Didn't Protest Shit Like This in the 60's
Date: May 01 2014 Title: Chapter 9: They Didn't Protest Shit Like This in the 60's
Disappointingly short chapter. Which shows how fantastic I think this story is if I'm complaining about how it's too short of an update.
I guess I don't mind the army; they seem nice enough. I don't think the town will have much mercy on her, though. Although, I'm pretty sure people are allowed to visit those under house arrest freely.
I didn't catch any spelling or grammar errors today, but I really don't care. The sheer amount of disappointment I have get you a 4.9 out of 5 stars.
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: April 28 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Window Shopping
Author's Response:
Date: April 28 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Window Shopping
For curiosity's sake, can Mark be black? I feel like a group of three friends, one of them has to be a minority, and I've never met a black Johnny before.
I really dig this story. And the explanation as to why Amy's parents has the government by the balls is perfectly logical. In today's world, exclusion of a particular person solely on their condition is not approved of, so the government over-compensates to stay politically correct. Only in this case, Amy's conditiin is being 120 feet tall or something. One good attorney and Amy getting arrested can end up causing an incident.
P.S. You spelled "rumors" as "rummors". 4.99 stars out of 5. Clean up your act.
Author's Response:
Sure he can. I actually prefer diversity between groups of people in stories like this.
Clean up me act? Come on man, I wasn't kidding when I said spelling was my kryptonite. If the essence of spelling could be transmuted into a physical substance, it would kill me faster than exposure to Plutonium.
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: April 28 2014 Title: Chapter 7: For Hours of Fun Collect Them All
Author's Response:
Date: April 28 2014 Title: Chapter 7: For Hours of Fun Collect Them All
This story is still awesome. I really like the friendship between Ben, Mark and Johnny. But I didn't expect them to know parkour. The good thing is that you explained how they knew it in a semi-realistic way, and I enjoy realism in my giant woman fetish material.
In my last review, I gave you points off for improper spelling, while messing up a word myself (spelled condition as 'conditiin' by accident). Since that was hypocritical of me, I was going to omit the misspelling of "below" with "bellow" and give you full marks. Unfortunately, you messed up usage of the words "peek" and "peak", and for that you lose your full mark status. You only get 4.9 stars out of five for this chapter.
Also, spelling is less like kryptonite, and more like a vitamin. You're just spelling deficient.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I wanted them to know parkour because it seemed like a really cool element in a chase scene. Guys running around in circles is both boring for the read as well as for Amy. So I wanted to liven things up. But, like you, I enjoy realism. So I also had to figure out a way to incorporate without it being like a deus ex machina kind of thing. Once again Assassin's Creed has yet to let me down.
Btw I think I might be allergic to that vitamin.
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: April 29 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Give It a Push, See What Happens.
Author's Response:
Date: April 29 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Give It a Push, See What Happens.
Did you and JTC coordinate your updates to drop these drama bombs on us? This story's seriously great. For a second, I was thinking that Amy's was getting too antagonistic with too little redemptive qualities, but this squashed that thought.
Oddly enough, the only part I thought was weird was the ending. I get that the authorities would eventually get involved, but isn't an army platoon, all wielding RPGs overkill? It's kind of like setting a moldy sandwich on fire, in my opinion. It's doubly weird considering that I love it when reality ensues in a story.
One other thing. For characters who are in nearly every chapter, Mark and Johnny have had little characterization except that they're nerds and they're true friends with Ben. Which isn't bad (Harry Potter's only real personality traits are the same). Maybe a little bit more definition to their characters would be appreciated.
Last thing. I found no spelling mistakes today. Unfortunately, you forgot to capitalize the starting sentence of the paragraph where Amy starts crying. Sloppy work, but you're technically improving. Only a 4.91 today...
Author's Response:
When you think about it it makes sense that the national guard would be called in. Originally it was going to be a seat team but they don't have the firepower necessary to look threatening. The RPG's are mainly going to be for show to keep her in line.
Summary:
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Couples , Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132390 Read Count: 285208
in the year 2020, the government has undergone a project where the giantess that they created from a small piece of the female population and regular sized individuals live together in a newly built community. Can the two coexist, while they try to continue on with their daily lives?
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Couples , Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132390 Read Count: 285208
[Report This] Published: April 24 2014 Updated: August 30 2014
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: May 07 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Author's Response:
Date: May 07 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
On the bright side, after that shithead Ryan is killed in the most satisfying and humiliated way possible, you've established enough of a universe to make a sequel if you feel like making one eventually.
Seriously, is it okay to say that Ryan ia a worse person than Adolf Hitler? Because Hitler at least indirectly helped fix the world economy after the Great Depression, and was kind to dogs.
Author's Response:
Lmao, wow Ryan topped hitler? That's a pretty big feat to accomplish. You have to be real low for that one. Also @tinyguy their spring break started when Jaden got there....I'd say it's around Tuesday now. I'm trying to stretch it a week but that may be too long....well see though.
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed 
Date: May 21 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Date: May 21 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I liked the chapter. Easy to read, lack of Ryan and a nice set-up for things to come. Although, there's no Commander so no bonus points.
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed
Date: May 17 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Date: May 17 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Good chapter. Needed less living Ryan. Needs more Commander Richard scharacter development and more dead Ryan. But then again, every chapter needs more Ryan killing in it. If you posted tge same chapter where Ryan dies three times in a row, I'd probably still give all three chapters five stars.