Is this story going to be updated any time soon? I really want to see where this story goes?

Love the chapter, but I have one HUUUUUUGGGGGEEE problem with the story. I lost track of all the characters. I think you've made over 20 characters who are all major players. And I love "A Song of Ice and Fire", but at least there are identifiable factions in the story to help me figure out who is who.

What I'm saying is that you should make a character sheet with relations to other characters. Cause I keep getting lost.

I hate being THAT guy who complains about faults in the logic of shrinking stories, but I've been reading for a while and this needs to be addressed.

First I have to say that this story is pretty good and, little mikey, you are an excellent writer. I really like the story itself and is by no means bad. But the biggest problem with a story is a very big plot hole.

The dad is the only source of income in the household. He is, and continues to be, the legal and functional head of household. He literally just has to tell Kyra that if she keeps forcing him to forsake work time for her own desires that he will get fired, or tell her that if she keeps spending all of his money, they'd get into monumental debt. Both ways results in a loss of money. If she's not an idiot, she'd stop. Roll credits.

Whatever. I guess that's just me. I'm the type of guy to rationalize fantasy stories. I guess I just do that when a story's good enough for me to insert myself into.

I really don't know whether I'll keep reading this story. On one hand, it's definitely well-written and this chapter was pretty good (for me, the last one was hard to read). But on the other hand, I severely dislike re-indoctrination through trauma in my story's. Putting a character through the wringer is fine with me, but not when it causes his personality to warp. Reminds me too much of Stockholm Syndrome.

Honestly, I had the same problem reading Pariah. It wasn't until the protagonist of that story started to lose his intelligence that I started to stop liking the story. It became less of a domination fantasy and more of a horror story to me. Of course, I finished it anyway, but I stopped enjoying it.

I can't rate this review. It'd be too biased to rate properly, but if I do give it a five stars as the story technicqlly deserves, I'd feel personally wrong. Anyway, keep up the excellent work; this story isn't for me.

Wait. So is that the answer then? Is Kari the best friend?

I feel like this story is the giantess version of "How I Met Your Mother". Really enjoyable, but stringing us along for eight seasons to answer the simplest question ever.

I always kinda knew it would be Jaz. Because she always seemed like the "best person for the job" (read: only person for the job). I never really swung any which way. I still kind of wish we got to learn why Rob's shrunk, and whether or not he could change back.

Oh well, glad this roller coaster of whatever is over. Good luck on your next series.

It's a shame this story is going back on a hiatus, because I really like this one so far. I'm enjoying the set up a lot. All I'm saying is please hurry up!!!

DO NOT ADD A PICTURE OF DEATH. It's best left to the imagination. Unless you find a picture of Neil Gaiman's Death, almost no one will be happy.

I really wish Aidan laid these guys out. He is no longer bound by the laws of the human world, so he can't go to jail for it. Plus, isn't he supposedly a pretty built guy? And for a rapist, nine days in hell is pretty lenient. I know Hell isn't technically an easy place, but can't you make it more like a fortnight?

As for the rapist thing, I'm pretty sure it's Michelle. I don't know enough about James except that he's an asshole, but Michelle seems like the type of person tk drug a guy and force herself on him. Also, what does it mean to "find a corner to flip cards on"? That doesn't make any damn sense. 

I'm kind of glad we'll be getting faster updates.

For a chapter titled Explanation, you barely explained anything. Most of this was just filler. Although, I think I'm finally getting the main plot.

Also, Aidan's about to violate the #1 Work Commandment: NEVER date co-workers. Nothing good can come from banging Diana. Nothing.

For curiosity's sake, what game are you playing anyway?

Uh... good chapter, I guess. Kinda short, and very little happened though. I want to get back to the plot. The small stuff is fun, but I want to see Aidan finally interact with his past co-workers again. I feel like you've been teasing that for over a month! And does this mean Diana is now Aidan's coworker/possible rapist?